[Report This]Date: 06/23/2006 - 09:33 am Title: Communication got me down
Well I'm woman enough to admit it, I'm quite sucked in. Lovely the way you have your whole cast in a line, ready to dance. Now what will you do, hm?
Date: 05/25/2005 - 03:33 pm Title: Communication got me down
Tara breaking the news about Willow was heart breaking, and Buffy's panicked response was apt. I loved Spike being calm and reassuring while cuddling Angel's son and Buffy. It's exciting to have both Dark Willow and Angelus vying for most villainous villain!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:09 pm Title: Communication got me down
Awesome update as always - can't wait for more.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Communication got me down
Dark Willow is such a great character! Iw as a little disappointed that Joss didn't allow her character to develop further. You are truly portraying her in a dark light - it's amazing to see the transformation from t his young, meek woman to all-powerful witch. Tara, too, is coming into her own. It's just wonderful. Now Buffy, she's a bit emotional and rightfully so. Something tells me that when push comes to shove....the Slayer will be back.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Communication got me down
Ahh! More! More Spuffy! More baby spawn! More everything!!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Communication got me down
Great chapter. I'm just hating Xander and Willow, especially Willow, more and more in this story. It's weird but kinda neat. I can't wait to see what you do next!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 09:20 pm Title: Communication got me down
Another excellent chapter. Loved the Spike and Connor moment. I was wondering if anyone was going to tell Willow about Angelus, and now I'm really nervous about what she's planning. And I love your pacing, don't listen to anyone who says it's too slow. =)
Date: 05/18/2005 - 07:57 pm Title: Communication got me down
I was wondering when someone was going to inform Willow bout Angelus coming town. Is Giles ever going to come back? I love the information he found though,your story probably has the most realistic explaination of how a vampire can have a child. I hope though that you do not kill off Angel...and this might sound silly because I hate him, but I like Angel best when he is jeolous/angry/brooding because he didnt get Buffy...it makes me happy lol. Keep up the great work! I cant wait to read more about Dawn and Buffys reactions to being mother daughter all the suddenly!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: Communication got me down
Glad to see the update! And - to the review : You're welcome :))
So that's it what Tara did see: Willow's aura gets dark... and she is the one that hurt Spike - well, she caused it. Oh - and smile - Buffy did tell Spike she loved her. And I wonder how quick Conner will grew up... with his vamp parents. But Willow - maybe Angelus is to big for her.
Date: 05/18/2005 - 03:18 pm Title: Communication got me down
I was wondering when SHE was coming back into the story.......This is marching out so nicely.......love it and can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:46 pm Title: Communication got me down
Willow knows about Angelus now - very exciting. Not to mention the fact that Buffy and Spike now about Willow. I can't wait for all the action! The moment between Buffy, Spike, and Conner was very sweet.
Date: 05/18/2005 - 11:40 am Title: Communication got me down
In fic, I usually end up hating Xander. Well, you got me hating Willow. Yay!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 08:01 am Title: Communication got me down
Another brilliant chpater, you could almost cut the tension with a knife by the end! I love your characterisations, especially Spike and Giles. I can't wait for more Evil Willow and Angelus.... Thanks for updating so much & so quickly.
Date: 05/18/2005 - 06:52 am Title: Communication got me down
Poor Tara you could tell that hurt. I can't wait to see if Willow in her arrogance will try and use the Angelus situation to her advantage. Now she's come out of her evil cupboard she's capable of anything.
Date: 05/18/2005 - 06:07 am Title: Communication got me down
Well for me, charachter interaction is fertile soil for the plot, otherwise you just get a dry piece of work, so please keep doing what you are doing on this fic, I am thoroughly enjoying it!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Communication got me down
I love the story you're weaving, and the last two chapters have been wonderful. Thank you.
Date: 05/18/2005 - 02:46 am Title: Communication got me down
I so love buffy and spike closer moment's sh love's spike so much that i don't think she can handle it if she lost him as spike said to her that will never hapened cause he will always find his way back to her aww.I so love them as a couply.Like spike said buffy dawn and connor are his family now and i so loved what he said about dawn that he new from the very day they meet that there was a connection he had with her well now he know what that connection is she his flesh and blood so beautiful.IF Willow think her powers will stop angleus from coming after her than she is as dumb as i though.She is i big trouble now and it could happened to a better person than.Get her angelus maybe this will teach her lessonthat she can't control her friends live's.GREAT CHAPTER NIA
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Communication got me down
loved this chapter. willow is really starting to piss me off. keep up the great work. loved this story very much
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:47 am Title: Communication got me down
whoa, Willow is movin toward the Darkside....I love it
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:27 am Title: Communication got me down
Awww! How could anyone not love Spike is my question, but as you know, I'm a bit biased... Loved the scene between them. So sweet. And Spike's thoughts on Dawn, too. He's so perfect. *sigh* Anyway... lol Willow's gone to the dark side, and now Buffy knows it. She might a s well just get her cape and big black mask now... *ahem* Liked the scene at the end with her and Xander. Shows how naive he is. Gotta wonder what Buffy's going to do once she has a chance to really process what Willow's done... Good chapter. The plot's definitely moving, although I thought it was all along... Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:19 am Title: Communication got me down
Oh goddess, I had no idea that what Willow had put into play were the Knights. I knew she had done something to manipulate events, but this result is just beyond the pale. This little girl needs to be put down. And I mean dead. I don't know if Buffy will ever reach that decision, but I know I've had about enough of her. No one puts Dawn in danger and gets away with it. Hopefully Buffy's "Momma Bear" instincts will kick in and she'll start kicking butt. Wonderful, captivating, angsty chapter sweetie. I just love how you had Tara gently break the news to Buffy (well...as gently as possible). Good gods, when is Giles coming back? His discoveries within the Council libraries and archives are wonderful and helpful, I'm sure, but Buffy's kind of freaking out a little (and with good reason). I just can't help wishing that Giles' calming presence were on hand to help stabalize the situation. Or at least give them all a sense of security. *sigh* Wonderful, amazing angst! I just love how you are winding this coil so tight!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 01:03 am Title: Communication got me down
grrr.I cant stand Willow or Xander right now and I cant wait for Giles to come back. And a question is Anya going to leave Xander and get together with Giles?
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:59 am Title: Communication got me down
So, I haven't decided yet, if you are a truly evil person or perhaps just a brilliant writer (I'm swaying more towards the latter). The way you keep putting us on the edge of our seats is well... a tad bit vicious, but hey it's totally working, cuz I sure keep coming back for more! I also wanted to thank you for making me laugh at loud while reading... the last scene, with Buffy on the bed w/ Spike, where he says 'Got you, Niblet and spawn here to worry over'... I was cracking up. Spawn... hee, hee. I know Spike had referred to Connor as that in a previous chapter, but I just found it amusing that you had him say it again there!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Communication got me down
I always love your updates. And when they come, by the time I am done, my heart is pounding and my mind is going a mile a minute. Loved this chapter. I always like it when Tara is the wise one who "sees" what others don't, but no one questions her. Can't tell you how much I giggled, and believe me, I DO NOT giggle, whenever Spike refers to Connor as Spawn. It is so appropriate, is a twisted kind of way. That Willow, I am glad you are bringing her to life the way I always felt she acted in the series: Power hungry. Loved it!!!
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Communication got me down
The truth isn’t always kind, nor is it caring of what was before or what will come after, only that it is heard. Truth never has an easy birth. But once it arrives, there is a feeling of rightness, a sense of having known what the truth is before it is even uttered, an inescapable moment, when the speaker and the witness know, deep in their souls, that the truth has been revealed. Quite possibly one of the most apt definitions I've ever read. Follow your muse, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. And I've read a few. Also as a sixteen year veteran of bookselling, I want to tell you that I hope to be hand-selling a published work by you in the future. Keep up the great work. Lori
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