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Reviewer: javelina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:34 am Title: Communication got me down

Another great chapter - it's hard to read chapter-by-chapter like this, but also very rewarding. So many cliffhangers and questions (like, how are they going to get rid of the knights this time?). And so many great little moments between the characters - including the baby and Spike.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:22 am Title: Communication got me down

Wonderful chapter as always.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Communication got me down

thank-you for the authors notes. i can listen to you teach all day long. i am honored to be your sister. great talk between tara and buffy. gods, the revelations.....they both have so much to deal with and i am glad they have eachother. willow, willow,willow....i have to say that i would love to see her kick some angelus ass. i loved this chapter as much as i love all the others. i am enjoying a second read.

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Communication got me down

pish, whoever said you're not moving the plot along is a dummy.a fool. completely unhinged. your writing is perfect in every way. You ahve the characters down pat, your plot is pure gold, and the emotions you express in your words melt in my heart like butter on my tongue. In short - me like it, ignore the flamy moody people. just read the last 2 chaps in one, so as for the previous one - WOW. i love how you handled the revelations about dawn being buffy and spikes. after the intial blurting out you made it so perfectly understated, quietly brilliant, and just plain beautiful. this chapter was all with the exciting willowy revelations - and again you had me with my heart in my throat just waiting for angelus to come through the door at any minute and eat her (although the more i learn about your willow the less that concerns me!). OK. this is getting long, so i'll stop for now!

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Communication got me down

First off i am not sure which i prefer the milk and cookies or the beer and whiskey *grins* thank you hun. This chapter is filled with shit to come and oh baby when it happens. Tara goddes bless that woman she is so much stronger than she thinks she is. I give her so much credit for telling Buffy what she saw. You nailed her way of doing so very well. Gave her that Tara shyness but at the same time the strength to reveal what was needed. Oh my heart was in my throat with Buffy running up the stairs, I think I held my breath till she got there and i huffing along with her. Spike how f'n sweet and cute him talkn to Connor and reasurring the lil guy he would help out. His reflections of Dawn were incredible. How he always knew she was a part of him somehow. Buffy telling spike "how could I not love you" that is a perfect way she would of said it too. In away to not let herself just let it out. Though knowing full well she can't do without spike. Willow and Xander oh christ frick and frack...Willow the manipulator and XAnder the stuge(sp). Well now Giles needs to get his ass home, Willow needs to watch her back, Buffy and Spike need have hot monkey love soon *laughs*. Angel needs to get staked..and oh your muse needs to keep on bringing the good stuff to you for some awesome writing. EXCELLENT chapter...nice movement..interesting insight in yet a deeper mode of the characters beings.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:15 am Title: Communication got me down

I'm getting nervous. Both Angelus and Willow to worry about. I love how protective Spike is of Connor. Please update when you can.

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2005 - 12:15 am Title: Communication got me down

I look forward to each chapter. As usual this was a great chapter. Please continue to update sooner and more often. PLEASE

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Communication got me down

Hooray...an update!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it. I can't wait to see where it goes from here and what happens to Willow. I hope she doesn't find some way to team up with Angelus to try to hurt Spike. Poor Tara--she must be so sad:( Spike's the best--"even if I got dusted I'd find a way back"--my heart skipped a beat when I read that.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 11:46 pm Title: Communication got me down

Ooohh-- the plot thickens! Very interesting update; continue to love this story!

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