Wow! Was it just me or did the way you wrote that really leave such a feeling of foreboding? I have chills and feel as if I need to hold my breath until the next chapter....Good job!

Very interesting chapter. I really liked the descriptions of Faith's experiences and observations under the influence of the revealing spell -- particularly the manifestation of Spike and Buffy's relationship. I'm a little worried about Spike and hope he will be ok.

Aye, there's the rub...Willow.

So sorry to hear you're still having a hard time!

I've finally gotten all caught up with this story, and I'm thrilled to see another chapter. Faith's spell-vision was fascinating; very curious to se what you do with this.


The Lawson parts were also interesting. I liked Lawson; wished ME'd done more with him. It sounds like you're going to right that wrong, too. Very Cool But Drusilla, Yikes!!

AH HA!! We have found the culprit ladies and gentlemen!! Lovely as usual

This is some intense shit you putting on the page here. Gods that was so heartwrenching. Buffy and Spike clinging to each through their bond is spectacularly written. Faith's trance walk, I could see through her eyes the colors and the blackness that is now surrounding them all. Spike trying to hold back his temper, you nailed his reactions and emotional state. Loved how the wolves are just waitng and how they reacted to Spike leaving the house.

Dru up to her usual self, you do her such justice. Lawson very confused by what he is seeing and I sort of hope he keeps it to himself, though believe Dru has other plans. Kirsten being quick to listen to Spike's every command., There is so much information here. EVIL CLIFFHANGER woman though, with Faith fainting LOL. Thank you for posting, helps melt away the coldness and warms the heart with the impending snow storm headed our way.

Oooh, can't wait for the confrontation with Willow. Again your writing is superb, keep it up, and get better soon.

Oh my, now that's what I call a freaking awesome chapter!!! Thank you for giving such vivid descriptions of what Faith was seeing during her trance: scenery, the people, and the connection with Spike/Buffy. Gorgeous.

Oh, Spike.....don't blame him for trying to control his temper, and I'm very happy that both Buffy (although under a spell) and Kirsten knew well enough to not push him. Bravo!

That Dru/Lawson scene was disturbing, yet intriguing. I'm getting a feeling that Dru knows he's the weakness that could break apart whatever evil plot she and Angelus have....I'm hoping so, too.

Loved the ending!!! Seems Buffy and Giles might now realize, due to Faith's fainting, who might be the cause of the whole spell. All hell will break loose.

Wonderful, and I really can't wait for more!!!

And the culprit has been discovered!

That was a really powerful chapter.

I've never read a trance scene like that before. I'm trying to find the right words to say that it was almost like being in a trance-like state alongside Faith. My eyes scanned the words in a slower, more deliberate way sort of mirroring Faith's movements... wierd mojo you worked there, pet.

Fascinating the way you have Faith describe what she 'sees' too. Makes it all unique to her, the black around Tara, the differing hues and depths on Giles and Wes, Buffy and Spike...

And then we get sucked out of the trance and thrust into Spikes growing rage and the pace hots back up... especially when he leaves the house and gets tailed by Mrs HellmouthHound. Interesting Spike can't sense her... Interesting little snippet of Dru and Lawson. Kind of taking a shine to Lawson. Angelus does seem to make charismatic Childer, doesn't he?

Great update, pet. Bet you exceed the 67 reviews for the last chapter!