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Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:21 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Am I evil for leaving it like that?

Um, yes? C'mon, Nia, honey, precious, pumpkin, darlin', sweetie, sugar! How can you do this to me? Just leave me hanging there at the edge of - hopefully- Willow's downfall!?

So cool was the stuff with Lawson and Spike! And need I even mention the wonderful tease of Jenner and Faith?

Evil? You? You betcha! All caps and underlined twice.

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Willow has been a bad bad girl!!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:38 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

OMG!!! Noooo!! Must have more!!!! Gah, I knew this was gonna be great, but damn, you've just smacked me in the head with how freaking awesome the reveal became! And Faith/Jenner? DAMN!!! Oh, I beg you, please...update soon?

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:30 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

I had a shit day. Really. However...I would have twelve shit days in a row for another chapter like this!!!

*glee* The spell is broken! Gawd, I was holding my breath. Clever girl leaving Tara's realizaton last since you knew it would be the most profound.

I am so intrigued by Lawson. I love his souful-like admissions. An enigma I am delighted to get to know. Jenner as well, though he is still slightly more obscure and I can't wait to see how these two vamps are *fleshed* out.

Anya. She will always be one of my favorites. Always relegated to the background by the scoobies despite the wealth of knowledge she hold. I love how you give her such righteous indignation.

Oh Oz. You have done so much for his character. No longer is he a passing character, but a real player and I silently squeed when his realization washed over him. Oz and Tara. Friends or more, it doesn't matter to me. You have given them so much depth...and now a history in this fic. They are becoming as important to me as Buffy and Spike. Wow.

The dogs are there and I have goodbumps in anticipation.

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What moved me:

"She was pack. Tara was part of him, whether he understood the reasons why or not, it hardly mattered anymore. The feeling had been growing, slowly, inexorably, but growing all the same. It had taken this spell, the theft of his memories and hers, to clarify the emotions.

Okay dude, so now you know you aren’t losing your mind. . . . what the hell are you gonna do about it? He thought for a moment, his mind blank, then realized he was going to do what he always did after practice.

Go home. To Tara." *sniffles*

And...

"He had the grace to look abashed. “I don’t know.” He swung his gaze between the two. “I didn’t know he had a soul. . . . that was. . . . Look, I understand if you don’t want to help me. I’m nothing to you. But I’ve been watching you and I saw. . . . “ he paused, looking steadily at Buffy, “I’m sorry about your sister.”

Buffy stiffened behind Spike and he could feel her temper rising. Spike moved back, casting a sideways glance at his mate. Lawson looked genuinely saddened and it was Spike who acknowledged it. “Thanks.”" *wants to hug Lawson*

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Phew! Now Cordy is waking, the hounds have arrived, and Lawson still doesn't know the truth about Dawn. Is it evil to leave it where you did? Nah...it just gurantees that I'll be watching the RSS Feed for another update. *wink*

Thank you. Take Care. Be Well. Coax the muse.

Cheers!
Nina

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Truely, truely evil. And brilliant, and a fantastic writer. Bur mainly evil. ;)

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:21 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

YES, yes, yes.. EVIL!!!!! Brilliant, but evil. Glad to see they finally remember:)

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Oh god no. I hope they chew her up for causing all this mess to happen and getting Casey killed.

Looking forward to your next chappie.

HUGS

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Ouch-- Willow's been found out!

Loved the Oz scene.

Reviewer: desertrose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Oh my gawd totally evil you cliff-hanger girl.

Oh boy! Oh boy, the action is kicking in. Loving this sooo much.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:25 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

holy f'n whoa. you are evil too by the way for that cliffhanger LOL. Faith rocks, she really does. It's about time she get to show what she is capable of doing. hmmm could Jenner be tweeking her interests??? he is one fine vampire. YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the Spell is broken time for fall out and conseguences. Muahhhhhhhhh*evil laugh* I feel so bad for Tara, thank the gods she did not kiss her. Oh here big hound here boy, yeah see the red headed dumb bitch...yeah she has hound bones undies on and you need to drag her away and torture her.
Xander stupid ass, doesn't even notice Cordy waking alittle bit. I am glad to see that Lawson came to see Spike. I think he may prove to be a help.

mmmmm I can't wait to see what the fall out is. Oh gods I have been waiting so much for this chapter to be, knowing that the next one will be Willow hopefully getting hers.

Thanks for posting, bows to you yet again for making me hold my breath LOL

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Sorta like Spike likes to think he's still all evil, huh? No,
not evil, just a very good writer. Really like how things are starting to wrap up and become clear. Thanks for another super good chapter.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:03 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Mwah ha ha...time for Willow to die.

Good scene with Lawson. Gotta feel sorry for the guy.

Faith and Jenner...that's just funny.

Poor Tara...at least she'll have Oz to comfort her.

Cordy finally waking up...not sure if that's a relief, or not, after what the girl went through.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

i definately think you are evil for leaving it like that!?!?! but im really pretty excited to read the next chap - i hope willlow gets what is coming to her~

Reviewer: Anza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Totally evil, this just means that you'll have to update sooner!

Reviewer: Kimber Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

oh so evil and yet such a great chapter.......loved the Lawson Spike rebonding........and the Jenner and Faith, wow buddy......I hope he soon realizes there are two slayers in town....LOL

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Well yeah, you're evil, but for so much more than that....but I still loves ya. :P Wonderful chapter. You portrayed everyone's reaction to the breaking of the spell so perfectly, especially poor, heartbroken Tara. Painfully beautiful. Love the interaction between Faith and Jenner. Is Buffy not going to be the only Slayer that's dropped that "S" soon? lol

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Are you evil? Hummmm. Yup. But in a good way.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

oh yes mistress....you are very evil indeed!!!. so i don't know about anyone else but the whole chapter gave me the goosebumps. can i just tell you how much i love those hounds!!!!!!!!!!! i am so glad you brought faith into this. shes great. love her little talk with jenner and also liked the way she understood what the hound was telling her and went with it. i laughed so hard at the thougth of a hound outside the ER. your imagery is so amazing. i lose myself in your chapters and then "poof" its over....so dissapointing but gods i can't wait for the next one. i am mostly sad for tara b/c i believe this is going to hurt her the most. i hope she kicks her ass and good. thank-you for posting...i had to go to the dentist today and this just sooo makes up for it

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:36 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Whoa, and the fun just keeps on coming. Hmmm? Faith and Jenner? Now that would be one of hell of a interesting twist on the story. And what about Lawson? Would love to see all of Angelus' childer abandon him. Love it, love it, love it.
I can't get enough of this story.
You are amazing!!!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

You are the queen of evil for leaving us like this. Please update soon. Hope you're feeling better.
Brandy

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Wowsers! What a blaster of a chapter... no wonder your muse won't let you think of anything else.

Jenner and Faith, eh?

Lawson coming over to the White Hats... yay for the endorsement that demons can choose the side of good and soul is not a pre-requisite!

The Hounds... the HOUNDS!

A broken spell... Oz looking for Tara... Willow's betrayals uncovered...

What's left!? I'm buzzing... Superb update! Go Niamh!

Reviewer: BatdzAngel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

OOOHHH!! Willow's gonna get hers, isn't she? Evil you, leaving a cliffhanger like that! Oh, I cannot wait until the next update!!! Hopefully it'll be soon because this is too good to even wait for!

Reviewer: weyrwolfen Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yes. Yes you are. All of the threads are coming together, and I'm loving it. I can't really explain this Lawson fixation I've got going on, especially when so much else exciting is happening with Spike and Buffy, Cordy, Willow and Tara, Oz, and Faith (hmm, is it going to be Jaith soon, or Fenner...), but I absolutely love how you've written him. I hope he finds his way. Love the update!

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Evil? Of course, but in the nicest way possible. :;grin::
I can't call you truly evil as long as you keep updating. This fic brightens my day.

Reviewer: Mira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

yes you are!!!! man!!! just when we were going to have some willow chewing!! come back here!!!

great update by the way :-)

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