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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2007 - 02:22 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Enjoyiing this story a lot, good complex vampire familey

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Date: 08/25/2006 - 11:04 am Title: Hymn Before Action

oooh this is my very favorite story for ages please please keep the chapters coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Spikesgurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 04:12 am Title: Hymn Before Action

I just got caught up on this story, and I wanted to let you know how much iIm enjoying it! You have such an amazing, complicated, fascinating plot going here, and I'm excited to see where you take it. I can't even imagine the amount of work that goes in to writing a saga like this, and I just want to thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: spudvalley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

I just discovered this story and have been reading it as close to non-stop as real life would allow. Amazing writing, and a fantastic plot! You've incorporated many of the loose thread from the show that were never satisfactorily resolved and tied them into a cohesive and lucid story. Too bad the final two seasons of the show were hijacked for personal catharsis by an unnamed female producer -- the show could have been so much more! Thankfully there are writers like you telling stories like this one to satisfy fans like me. Great story, and I'm certainly looking forward to updates. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

i'm always so happy to see another chapter! thank you again for this great story and keep up the good work.

Reviewer: susodicha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 07:22 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

i never read WIPs cause i'm too spoiled to wait for updates. but Book 1 really got me, and now i'm glad i made the exception. you're doing a wonderful job , especially with character development. i hope you're feeling well and inspired. :) but most importantly, i hope you're happy.

Reviewer: bitchee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

Wow.. I haven't reviewed this story before because well to be truthful I was just to busy reading it. I haven’t been able to tear myself away from it long enough to type a review.
What can I say? I pride myself on being able to say that I have read pretty much everything Spuffy related since my obsession with them started a little over three years ago. I have read in that time some fantastic fiction but this story?... well to say it's one of the best would be an understatement.
The Spuffy interaction alone would have been enough to deserve that comment but the scope and intricacy of the whole thing has just blown my mind. No easy feat believe me.
After reading nothing but Spuffy for such a long time I find myself pretty much able to predict what is going to happen next but with yours I was at a complete loss, I had no idea what would happen from chapter to chapter and that after the amount of fanfic that has been written about our favourite couple is amazing.
Normally I like to complement a writer on the plot or characterisation other times it's the love scenes or the believability of the characters interactions, occasionally it's the skill of the writer to make sense out of unusual pairings or the flow of the words, but with this particular fic I couldn’t begin to pick what part I liked best. You are a phenomenal writer and this story embodies all of those things.
I will be watching for updates with greedy impatience as I find that your twist on the Buffy verse is one that I am enjoying even more than the original show.

Reviewer: konsuela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2006 - 10:02 am Title: Hymn Before Action

I simply love this story. I am with You from the begining and hope I will se the end. I would be pity to left this excelent story unfinished.

Reviewer: babsblondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2006 - 08:13 am Title: Hymn Before Action

the suspence is there keeping me coming back for more keep up the good work

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

Awe, happy Buffy (waffles and ice cream and Spike who feeds her). Faith and Willow? If I remember correctly when these two meet Willow was a harmless girl and now she is a powerful witch. ~ Yeah, that's Spike. Dance with danger. Not the average vampire. ~ Loved Buffy teasing Spike. And Sam set up the bomb... And so it begins.... ~ Loved the chapter :)

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 05:06 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Very good update. Is Faith going 2 get with that new vamp guy?
More please and soon.
; )

Reviewer: SHEILA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 04:58 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Love spike and buffy play time they so need it before the angst starts and am such a big sam fan..Great chapter nia

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 04:38 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Ooh! A bomb!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 03:35 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Two hours until sundown.

And counting.

And you have the nerve to call me a tease? Hmph! **grins happily and bounces in seat** This is just too delicious! So can't wait to see what happens next! Does anybody else feel like making S'mores and bursting into song?

**gleefully rubs hands hands together in cackles insanely at the images**

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Can't wait to find out how everything goes.
Update soon please!

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Hymn Before Action

*laughs hysterically* harmony.........oh gods, thats gonna be good. i always wondered who that other girl was in the mansion hwen they got cordelia out.
i really love their family dynamic and the way tara takes care of things for them. they are really all tuned into eachother.
that was some hot bitey goodness from spike and i'm happy to see that sam is enjoying it too. *G*

love the slow and languid sex. ooohhh yeaaahhhh.

and so it begins.............more more more

i don't know anything aobut writers block but from a readers point of view. i don't see any. this is the best spuffy i have ever read. i can't even begin to thank-you

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Hymn Before Action

The scene between Spike and Buffy when they woke up was probably one of the sweetest I've ever read (and I've read quite a few! though I did have one insane moment when I feared someone had kidnapped Connor...) Oh gosh, I guess this is the beginning of the end! Oh la la! I *can't* wait!
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 01:29 am Title: Hymn Before Action

Great chapter, on the edge of my seat over it. Can't you give Lawson someone to be with? Having a Sire is good and well, he still needs someone to 'live' with, love and just be with.

Great story!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 01:28 am Title: Hymn Before Action

I can't wait to see what you have in store for us! I'm (literally) sitting on the edge of my seat with each chapter!!

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 12:22 am Title: Hymn Before Action

And so it begins. . . .

OMG!! I am so excited!! Does this ever have to end? :( I am always just so shocked at how vested I am in these characters. There is no, "yeah, i like her/him fine." It is extreme in every sense of the word from the love of the couples to the distaste of the antagonists. It is always compelling and never contrived.

Sam has so won me over. I hate to gues what happens but I will be *devestated* if he isn't as genuine as he seems.

Faith is quite the contemplative little slayer now, isn't she. I like that about her. It seems almost as if age and cicumstances has tempered her some and I like how she is exploring her vulnerabilites instead of overcompensating. You saved another tosses aside character. Bravo!

Favs:
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“You’re adorable though. Look right cute with your cheeks all full of food.” He sauntered into the kitchen, his fingers snagging the spoon from her. Digging the utensil in, Spike fed her more ice cream. “I’m glad you’re eatin’. Need to do more of it.” - I love it when the do coupley things now as if it is something they have always done. It comes naturally now and I am so in love with them.
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Spike had to have known what kind of an effect this would cause, and was no doubt acting on it. - I KNEW it wasn't just me!! The bite WAS hot!!
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Tara padded into the kitchen on bare feet, her quiet voice barely disturbing the silence. “Leave it Spike, I’ll get it in the morning. You guys go ahead.” - I have no idea why this struck such a cord with me other than the fact that I just love how much they operate as a family unit now. Those little shots of just plain homeyness makes me smile. I am such a sap.

Okay...Parting shots:
Harmony? Ew.
Anya/Xander estranged even in repose? Good. Creep.
Sam rigging a bomb? Bloody effing genius.

Cheers!
Nina





Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

Love this story! Always good to see an update. particuularly enjoyed the quiet moment between Spike and Buffy in this chapter, but it's all good.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

well the lines have been drawn and now we wait. I am glad they had a bit of reprieve from the crazyness. It was nice to see them just being one huge family so to speak. Your Faith is so on the money. You write her so well. I enjoyed her musings. Sam's too. He is going to be a good ally. Oh Christ *laughs* Harmony the wondervamp. Jeezus if they made BarbieVampire,Harmony would the model LMAO. So like her to just take what she wants when she wants it. Leave it to Angel though to come think he can be all he for her. *rolls eyes*...So now we wait for the first "shot" so to speak to be fired and war shall be waged. LOVE IT ALL MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

And....BOOM! Hee hee hee...that'll certainly create a dent in Angelus' forces.

Very nice way for Buffy to wake up...

Tara's so good at keeping the house running smoothly. Such a gem...

And Faith definitely has a lot to catch up on, when they have the time for the full stories.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

Love it. You know I was about to fall face on the keyboard from lack of sleep and the I saw your update and just had to read it. It couldn't wait 'till tomorrow. Beautully written,as always, and leaving me and the rest of your loyal readers and fans wanting more. So keep up with the good work and I hope you had destroyed the writer's block so the story can flow easily to you
(and to us :P).- Keep it up and take care.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Hymn Before Action

great chapter

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