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Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Nia, You are an incredibly talented writer. I have read Origins and this one now straight for four days now, I wanted to refresh my memory since it had been awhile. Your characters are so individual and true to themselves. I am anxious yet dreading the next installments, I will get to find out more, but will be closer to the end. I am all for a sequel but if there isn't one in your head, I guess I will live.

Reviewer: Cece Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I'm shy about leaving reviews, but I needed to say this:

I've always disliked reading a story that hasn't been completed yet. I'm a cheater, I love to know what happens in the end before I read the whole thing.

This story however just won't let me do that. I CONSTANTLY find myself coming back for more. I can't be patient. I can't wait. I need to know what's next lol. The writing is amazing, and I can really see these characters interacting. It's a fantastic story to read.

I, in the very least, am one reader is definately willing to follow you to another period in the saga. I'm with you all the way.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

THANKS FOR THE GREAT CHAPTER, GLAD TO SEE THE HOUNDS BACK AGAIN, I'D ALMOST FORGOTTEN ABOUT THEM.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:57 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

More! Please, more!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:40 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Very good action chapter. Looking forward to the final battle.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 09:05 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I've waited to read yesterday because it got too late.
You now I love your story here and wouldn't mind a sequel, even it takes some time to be posted (if you write a shorter one between, taking a holiday from this one and decided 'refreshed' what to do about it).
Loved the scene at the begin, Spike noticing Giles having trouble and acted to help him.
Oh my, Dawn isn't well yet and yet she tries to hide, protect Connor. ~ Xander? Can it be? Has he really come to his senses now? I hope. ~ And indeed, everybody is heading to Revello Drive now. ~ Oh it was Xander almost hitting Drusilla. Oh and now Angel has him. I wonder if he did recognize the car too. Oh my, and now we are at the end of the chapter. And because the Huntsman is after Willow I hope it is good that the hounds are loose now. ~ Till next chapter! I'm eagerly awaiting to read on (and patient, don't worry).

Reviewer: Selinde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I am thoroughly enjoying your stories, Niamh, your new characters fit well with the old and I love that you['ve got the Angel gang in on the action too. Not to mention the Wild Hunt. I can't wait to see what you do with them at the end!

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Too late to grow a pair Xander. He gets no love from me.

But the rest...oh holy crap!! My heart was pounding. I hate when I get so caught up that I start skipping sentences and have to remind myself to slow down!

God, I loved this: Without waiting for the lie he knew Giles was going to try for, Spike looped his arm around Giles’ waist, taking the burden of movement from him.

“Hold on, old man.”

And Spike pulled even with Lawson, motioning him to grab onto Giles from the other side. Grudgingly grateful for the help, Rupert grunted something unintelligible at the two vampires.

Now THAT'S family. I felt so proud of Lawson.

This also brought a smile to the corner of my mouth: “No, we go in together.”

Spike dared a look then and the sight of Buffy’s face made him falter; he lost a half step, seeing the tears slip down her cheeks.

Buffy and Spike. Stronger together.

Oh sigh. While this is so exciting and I am eating up every update, it also brings me a sense of melancholy. It has to end, it has to I know...but this fic is like an old friend now - it brings me a sense of delight everytime it pops up on the feed.

Thanks for the update! Standing by for the big fight...

Cheers!
Nina

Reviewer: weyrwolfen Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

You've got so many plot threads running, and they're all starting to crash into one another. Fantastic action and the kind of suspense that is keeping me on the edge of my seat. I guess I don't have to tell you where I stand on the sequel issue. ;-) I love Jenner, and I really love what you've been doing with Lawson. You write and I'll read. Promise.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 03:19 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Always glad to see an update to this story!

I'd love to see more of the story. If you write a sequel I'll read it!

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 01:32 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Still a brilliant story and I still love reading every update. Will continue to read anything you write.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 10:34 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Great action packed sequences. Count me in among the many who would love to see this story continued. This is fantastic story telling.

Reviewer: Jessimuhka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 06:05 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Just wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying this and will read as much as you write.

jessimuhkaknits@gmail.com

Reviewer: Kel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 05:52 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I dont know if I've ever reviewed your story before, But I absolutely completely 100% love this story, and can never wait for more. Anything you give us I am grateful for, and as far as I'm concerned this story should never ever end.

Reviewer: Sheena is... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 04:07 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Ok yay! double YAY! UBER YAY! So damn fabulous, everything concerning this fic so perfect. Your writing is impecable and I am so in love cause YAY (and yes this review sounds very blonde joke but very little sleep and saw you updated and needed to read) but simply amazing fic. I can't wait for what you do next.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 03:15 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

great chapter. And I for one would love a sequel. This story is one of my favs. Thanks for all the hard work.

Reviewer: SHEILA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 02:49 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

This is gone be good..Great chapter nia wow can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 02:30 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Woah...what a way to leave us hanging! I for one love your writing and no matter what you do...I'll keep reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Denise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 01:20 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

this is a great story ! I hope you continue til the story is complete. I know you don't have as many reviews as previous chapters but it has been a while with the posting . Give your reader a chance to rediscover you. Do you know how many people discovered Buffy after it was cancelled or put in syndiation? Be patient. You are a great wriiter- For me art is always about what the individual wants to say , not what others say about the art.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 01:11 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Vivid, well choreographed action throughout this chapter. The image of Spike and Lawson helping Giles in the race toward Revello was strong, as was Dawn protecting Connor in her room. This was a tight, tense chapter, and I'm looking forward to The Huntsman finally meeting up with Willow.

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 12:42 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I had gotten so caught up in Angel and Spike and Buffy that I completely forgot about the hounds. I can't tell you how wonderful this story is and what an amazing write/storyteller you are. I can't imagine that there wouldn't be an overwhelming number of people frothing at the mouth for a sequel to Revelations. I, for one, would love a sequel...pretty, pretty please...with a cherry on top:)

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 12:30 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

picks chin up off the floor. Oh my dear Nia you have outdone yourself yet again. You chorograph this story so well. Each character moving in a dance that is onl y for them to move to. Waiting with batted breath as to how the next move will be played and you bring it so smoothly. None of them missing a beat.
You let them each bring their emotions forward as the pending battle comes to the for front of the scene. You are master at this and more. I think I need to have an oxygen tank deliver for the next few chapters,because holy crow they are going to be explosive.

Thank you for posting so soon. I know RL has you pretty strapped for time,but yet you manage to entertain us all and keep us wanting more with each word.

I would wait a million years for more of your stories if need be, i love them all and will read religiously.

I still think there needs to be an Origins Anonoymous,because I know for one I am totally addicted to this story.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Comes a rattle and hum

ohhh! cant wait for the next chapter, gotta know what happens next. will dawn and connor be safe, will the hounds get willow, will angelus harm buffy or spike, or will it be dru. please update soon.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Here they come...

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

OK, here I am reviewing.

OMG, I am all agog with all the plot developments and all the players approaching the house.

And, bullet the blue sky lyrics...so apropos

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