I think Spike is going to easy on her. Letting her control his minions and taking away his standing. I would have killed Sunday then in front of the minions given her permission to pick anyone out for her to claim as her own.

He's letting her get away with to many things. What the fuck kind of punishment is hot sex?

The premise of the story is nice. The way she's rebelling is unique in its own way but you seem to be underestimating Spike and making him weaker in the eyes of everybody else. I always find it amusing how people claim to be Spike fans then turn him into some stupid lovesick fool. I mean even the BTVS writers made him weaker and weaker as the seasons went by. From being able to kill two slayers they turned him into someone barely half as great as Buffy as a fighter.

i love where this story is going. please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens with buffy and the scooby gang. i love it and keep it up!!!!!!!

great update