Wow Aislynn this sure is a Halloween fic with a difference! I love what you've done with Buffy's character. There are still parts of the original girl that we grew to care for on BTVS but the slayer demon and Amon aspects have made her edgier and given her an epic internal struggle to deal with all while trying to sort out her place within the hierarchy of her new vampire family and, in particular, her relationship to her Sire. I have to admit I'm holding out for her to kick a little Spike ass (you are gonna let her aren't you?) but oh the convoluted jourrney to that point is thrilling!! I'm particularly excited about finding out exactly what kind of power Amon imbues her with and whether her vampiric traits will make her use that to her individual advantage or not. I'm personally hoping the truly good nature of the (former?) slayer will enable her to be heroic in that regard despite the personal cost (Buffy will always be a hero in my opinion no matter what her circumstances). Waiting eagerly for your next update.

I'll started to read this story now. I'm gonna read the rest! Love that Spike didn't let her die - but then the story would have been over ;-)

Also I was trying to get new chapters out fast but will take my time to make sure the flow is better so it doesn't distract from the story.

No Sunday is not going to be Buffy's sex slave.

I really like this story. Buffy being turned is always fun to see especially when Spike is the one doing the turning. Not sure what to make of Dru at this point. It'll be interesting to see what she does if/when Buffy and Spike grow closer. The only sugestion I could make would be to have a beta to look over your chapters. I found myself having to re-read sentences several times to understand what you ment and its distracting me from the story. Other than that, its a great start and I look forward to more.

great so far