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Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 10:39 am Title: A Childe Awakes

Seems to me now that Buffy has kept quite a bit from her Slayer demon ... her soul?

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:33 am Title: A Childe Awakes

that's just wrong!!! i hope spike can handle being witht the two of them. this is gonna be rather interesting. please post soon.

Reviewer: ebontier Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:04 am Title: A Childe Awakes

you have a great story, and it's fairly well written...but you really need a beta. You run sentences together, it lack punctuation which makes reading it difficult, and you often confuse your and you're. A beta would really help, because you have a GREAT story here...and it's a shame that it's so hard to get through. *Ebontier (not signed in)

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2005 - 04:16 am Title: A Childe Awakes

nice sire/childe bond they've got going there...i also wonder if he's going to keep feeding her off of him to make her dependant on him?

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