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Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: A lesson in Italian

I love this story. thank you for the update.

Author's Response: No problem. And thanks for being patient. I was afraid people would just give up on the story since I made you wait for so long. Glad to see people are still reading. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 08:24 pm Title: A lesson in Italian

Glad you are back.. missed this fic.

Author's Response: Glad to be back too lol

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 01:56 am Title: Rescue me

This is a great story, it makes me want to take my wife to a resort. Look foward to more.

Reviewer: MarstersGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Rescue me

Hey! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!
It was great, I loved it!
Can't wait for more... I loved how it ended, very cute!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 06:39 am Title: Rescue me

A rescue team. That was a marvelous twist. Loved that, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I'll try to write the next chapter soon. I already started so it shouldn't be too long.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 04:40 am Title: Rescue me

Hahaha, cute a rescue team found them. Love it.

Author's Response: Thought it would be funny and embarrassing lol. The saviors of the world, incapable of finding their way back to their hotel :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2006 - 04:54 pm Title: Rescue me

Awe, it wasn't that Spike was bored.. it was more because he felt useless. :) ((Hot.. Spike wanted some fun)).
And Spike wants a serious talk now. I'm glad that Buffy didn't deny her feelings. *grins* They got lost indeed? Yeah, better not telling that *gg* But they are found now anyway. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for you review, Cordy.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2006 - 06:16 am Title: Rescue me

"Good." He said in a husky voice. "I'll take that as a: yes Spike, I trust you with my life. Please pleasure me now."

That line just cracked me up! I can even hear Spike's voice attempting a false-setto on that one. I like that Buffy doesn't want to hide her relationship with Spike, and that she's aware of the challenges that face them at home. I also loved how they got lost in the woods and tried to lord that fact over each other.


Author's Response: Actually, it cracked me up when I wrote it lol. I think Buffy is a little too optimistic when it comes to life after Hawaii, but we'll see. And about them getting lost and blaming each other... Let's just say, they're both very blonde :D lol I don't know why I decided to get them lost, I just thought it would be way funny.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2006 - 03:37 am Title: Rescue me

excellent chapter! i really enjoyed it

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. More soon, promise.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Rescue me

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Rescue me

Fun chapter. I laughed alot! Thanks for the chuckles! I wonder what the Evil Italian Bitch is gonna do when they get back to the hotel all safe and sound? More please.

Author's Response: I don't think she'll be too happy =) Glad I made you laugh.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 02:40 pm Title: Rescue me

So wonderful. Ok centipedes in Hawaii are huge and full of poison and we stay clear of them. I don't think even Spike would like them. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: LOL I don't think he ever intended to eat one =) But it was a good way to tease Buffy, knowing how grossed out she would be. I'll try my best to update soon.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MarstersGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

BTW-I agree with Xela! and I loved the title! Definately worth the wait!

Reviewer: MarstersGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

Come on...You're going to leave us with that!? :) I was really good (as all of your stuff is)! But, I want to know what happens! Scratch that...I NEED to know!!!!!!!!! Keep writing! Loved it!

Author's Response: Hope you didn't think the wait was too long. For once I kept my promise and updated when I said I would =) Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

I really heart this fic. And Buffy having to do all sorts of icky things? Awesome. Bet she smells something fierce, and that's why Spike is mad ;)

Author's Response: LOL I hadn't considered this as a possible reason why he's mad, but it would have been funny. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dirkavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 05:34 am Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

Thanks for the great update. And it was worth the wait for your plane to take care of the refugees.

Author's Response: Thank you =)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 05:26 am Title: Welcome to the jungle

Great update! I like that Spike is able to take the lead and help Buffy solve the problem with the baddie.

Author's Response: They're a good team. I didn't want to write Spike as a sidekick like on the show. I wanted him a bit more equal to Buffy when it comes to Slaying the baddie. After all, he's a demon. He knows the demon world, has lived in it for more than a century. Only makes sense that he'd know stuff. Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:56 am Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

Poor Spike, all alone while Buffy did all the dirty work. And we still have to mess with Carlita-- who is way to happy about a fairly silly trinket. First taste of the victim? We all know that doesn't mean it's immediately followed by the last taste and the victims bloody demise. Gotta give Ben some observational props there. Great chapter, looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Poor Ben. He's not that bad a guy. He just grew up around too many corrupted idiots. Maybe he'll redeem himself just a little. Who knows... Well, I do lol. Yes, Carlita is a moron and she seriously underestimated the Slayer. She's in for the surprise of a lifetime. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

Love your chapter title :)
Hehe seems as if the promise of the massage convinced Spike *gg* But the 'puppy' doesn't want to die so eagerly.. bad! ~ But Buffy managed it even if she isn't too happy now. Neither is Spike.. because Buffy took so long? It seems to be all well now (at last I hope) ~ Well I was glad to see the update and looking forward to the next on Monday :) Thanks for doing so; I think the most readers are patient anyway.

Author's Response: I wasn't sure about the title, so thank you. I'm happy you like it. I hope you're right and most readers are patient. I know I'm not the best at following my own deadlines. Next fic I write, I'm gonna try to write half of it before I start posting this way I don't make you guys wait. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 08:34 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

so glad to see an update for this tale cause I really love it..I can't wait to see the look on carlitta's face when buffy shows up to kick her butt. So, what are they gonna do all day in shade? sleep? and why isn't spike looking happy? Maybe he's just horny!? More please.

Author's Response: Spike is always horny, so that no surprise ;) Don't worry, they'll figure out how to spend their time. Glad to hear you love the story. I'll try to update more often from now on.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

Well I am glad I d idn't miss anything. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: You know I was waiting for you to get back :D Shouldn't be too long for updates since PMJ is almost over.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: How to kill a demon in three easy steps

At least the demon is dead... no problem with the bite? Been waiting for this update.

Author's Response: Nah, no problem with the bite. They have enough going on, I didn't want to give them even more trouble. Buffy will be top shape to kick some Italian booty =)

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 04:40 pm Title: Welcome to paradise

Really welcome update, and great job on the humanitarian front.

Author's Response: Thank you, Jane. It was a little difficult, but I'm back in one piece =) Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Jessimuhka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Welcome to the jungle

Hi,

I've really enjoyed this story so far and am looking forward to reading the end.

- J

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it. But we're nowhere near the end so you'll still have quite a few chapters to read ;) I hope you'll like where I'll be taking the story.

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