OH WOW! That dream sequence was incredible. I loved the shifting from different places, and the different versions of Buffy. And I want to know who or what the shadow was with the whole chained Buffy thing, (hoping it is revealed in the next few chapters.) Excellent work, this chapter was amazing.

Wow, just how many Buffy's are tied up in one.......I'm thinking someone is messing with Spike's head, and it's just not one......a few mixed messages it would seem.

great chapter i loved it although i wouldn't mind some spuffyness in the next chapter

god that chapter was brilliant!! gos knows how you came up with the dream but it was described in so much detail and i was enthralled by it!!! especially the vamp buffy being chained by her will!!! what i want is to see a bit more buffy/spike interaction. it dopesnt have to belovey sex but just them talking or him trying to get through to her! cant wait for the next chapter and i hope you hurry with it!!!

Excellent chapter! I think it's really difficult to create a realistic dreamworld because the symbolism has to work, ot it doesn't move the story ahead the way you want it to. You did a really great job of creating the imagery in a way that lets me understand what might be going on with Buffy - at least I hope so! I'm really enjoying this story and look forward to every new chapter. Sorry I haven't reviewed more before. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!