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Reviewer: parter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2014 - 01:07 am Title: Part 16

You had a very enjoyable fic up until the last part. Domination, a leather collar, a leash???!!  WTF?! It absolutely sank this fic. It was an unnecessary, rididculous, completely out of character move. You did all that good, creative writing and then flushed it all down the crapper by ending on that moronic image.  Mind-bogglingly stupid move.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2012 - 06:42 pm Title: Part 16

This is a great story. The dialogue is really good; the characters are quite good.

On the down side, it's littered with all sorts of errors: grammar, punctuation, vocab, spelling, and a few continuity errors; all of this combined to make it difficult to read a lot of the time. Lack of punctuation made a lot of the dialogue sound worse than it otherwise would have. Especially misused were the your/you're and there/they're/their issues. (Your = belongs to you, you're = you are; there = that place, their = belonging to them, they're = they are).

Reviewer: Gemini Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2009 - 05:25 am Title: Part 16

This has got to be one of my favs=) And I love the ending=D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 11:02 am Title: Part 16

Oh I loved it, can't see how Spike can dine on a Vampire for weeks. Wish you did do more.

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: Part 16

This story was fantastic! I love how you made the Scoobies more accepting of the Spuffy relationship. I hope there's a sequel.

Reviewer: Angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2004 - 11:02 pm Title: Part 16

i absolutely loved this story....it was really good and i hope that you make a sequel where maybe if you want to buffy and spike will get married and have a little buffy or spike jr. running around the house......keep up the good work

Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2004 - 05:37 pm Title: Part 16

I loved this fanfic! I absolutly luved it! Great job i'd love to read a sequel. If you ever make one plz email it 2 me at spoiled_chick08@hotmail.com. Thanks and ur a really great writer!

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2003 - 10:52 pm Title: Part 16

I LOVED this. The only slight dissapointment I had would be that it wasn't Buffy who was dominated but thats my own personal preference in these things don't know why - just is. However I don't mean that I didn't like the domination idea or that I have a problem with it being Spike......an interlude of the domnation scene would be nice *hint hint* As for the story as a whole........WONDERFUL. I've now read 'Dreams' (as far as its got) and 'Favours' and am definitely spending tomorrow reading 'Curiosity'. You are a wonderful author and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Sarah x P.S Sorry for waffling so long ;-)

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