Summary: Buffy was in love with Spike since she was 12. He and her brother Xander took off to LA. When Buffy's mother died she was left to take care of her sister and became a hooker. What will Spike do when he sees Buffy, Buffy and her daughter?
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 37113
Member Since: 01/04/2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
NEMO ~ (lat.) Nobody, No one
18 year old spuffy fan from Sweden. A newbie in fandom but very much addicted. Like to get to know me better (or nag on me to finish BtMB? :P) Visit my site, send me an email, or friend me on livejournal. I'm very friendly ;D
If anyone wonders where I've gone too, I've been very busy opening a new award site, awarding solely BtVS and AtS fanart. Yes, fanart is my new obsession. :P Feel free to visit the award site and nominate your favorite pretties!
Membership status: Member
Bio:
NEMO ~ (lat.) Nobody, No one
18 year old spuffy fan from Sweden. A newbie in fandom but very much addicted. Like to get to know me better (or nag on me to finish BtMB? :P) Visit my site, send me an email, or friend me on livejournal. I'm very friendly ;D
If anyone wonders where I've gone too, I've been very busy opening a new award site, awarding solely BtVS and AtS fanart. Yes, fanart is my new obsession. :P Feel free to visit the award site and nominate your favorite pretties!
Yahoo IM: 
insanus_nemo
Reviews by Nemo
[Report This] Published: 01/11/2006 Updated: 07/11/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed 
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Turn back time
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Turn back time
Don't worry about not having time to update. Real life comes first and I know what it's like with exams and such. Your birthday is the 21th? Mine is the 20th! happy birthday to us!
I'm glad Spike takes his father role seriously, I just hope he can live up to it. And I think it's a good idea for them to take it slow. It has been a while since they met that time, and they need to get to know each other again.
Anyway, keep writing, and I'll read whenever you update! ~Nina
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And hapy birthday to you 2! And thanks for the great reviews, it's very much appreciated! - Spikegirl
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/23/2006 Title: Chapter 10: He's my daddy
Date: 02/23/2006 Title: Chapter 10: He's my daddy
Aww... breakfast in bed, that's so sweet! They have such a lovely daughter! :)
I'm curios about how they are going to solve the problem with Buffy's job, I understand that Spike doesn't want her working there, but still, it's her decision.
I hope you had a nice birthday, and got the things you wanted ;) Update when you get the chance, I'll be watching for a new chapter ~Nina
Author's Response: Your questions will be answered soon I promise ;) And yes I got all the things I wanted, and more! I'm sorry it took me so long to update, I was planning on update sooner, but I was busy trying to find a beta... no luck though. I hope I'll find someone soon! Thanks for the review! - Spikegirl
Summary: Buffy must come out of retirement, work with a man who never really loved her, be bitten by one who did, and sacrifice herself all over again.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13558
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13558
[Report This] Published: 01/14/2006 Updated: 01/19/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 01/14/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Looking Back
Date: 01/14/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Looking Back
Omg! Spike is a total asshole! Don't get me wrong, it's a lovely chapter, and I think you've got me hooked just cuz I want to know why he's acting this way...argh stupid vamp!
Author's Response: I Know. I pomise happy spuffyness in the end.
Summary: Set early Season Six and goes AU from there. Spike's getting tired of no one taking care of Buffy or thinking of what she needs, after she comes back. So, he comes up with a plan--one that, for once, might just actually work. Fun and fluffy. Nominated at Spark and Burn Awards Round 4 for Best Comedy/Fluff and Best Buffy Characterisation
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8310
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8310
[Report This] Published: 01/25/2006 Updated: 03/03/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Part II
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Part II
This story is really nice. I don't usually read fluff, but this put me in a good mood. Thanks!
Author's Response: I love to be able to put people in a good mood..and thank you for reading this even though you don't read fluff :)
Summary: This is an all human Alternate Universe. William and Buffy had been friends with benefits for months, until the unthinkable occured: Buffy discovered she was pregnant. William, having been in love with Buffy since day one of their affair suggested he quit school and they settle down and try their hands at a family. Buffy seemed to agree until one day she'd vanished leaving him nothing but a note to hold onto. What happens when William, Now famous author Spike Hamilton stumbles upon the love he'd thought he'd lost forever... (there may not be a lot of sex, but I wanted to leave myself the possibility for it.. so just fyi)
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1207
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1207
[Report This] Published: 01/26/2006 Updated: 01/26/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 01/26/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1- Lost Love Found: Jan. 23, 1006
Date: 01/26/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1- Lost Love Found: Jan. 23, 1006
This looks promising! The plot is one of those which easily draws you in, somthing similar might have been done before, but it still feels fresh. I'd love to know what happens next :) Good luck with your story!
Summary: When Buffy and Spike’s lives become entwined with the fates of a slayer and a samurai who lived and died three hundred years ago, everything they think they know about their relationship and themselves is called into question.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32486
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32486
[Report This] Published: 01/29/2006 Updated: 03/01/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/01/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Endings and Beginnings
Date: 02/01/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Endings and Beginnings
Interresting story! And very original. I like it a lot weyrwolfen, another story that just instantly sucks me in! :D Good job!
Author's Response: It's that black hole I put in chapter 5. Just kidding of course. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/01/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Promises Made and Kept
Date: 02/01/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Promises Made and Kept
Another great chapter. Kaede's storyline that runs backwards, well I thought that was great, but I really like that kind of thing... It wasn't confusing if that was what you were worried about, and the story about Kaede and Takeshi was really poetic. I hope Buffy can learn something from it. I'm curious about where you are going to take this... I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :D ~ Nina
Author's Response: It's good to hear that the backwards time line isn't a pain. I mean, I obviously like it, but I wasn't sure how everyone else would feel. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Mortal Enemies
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Mortal Enemies
Oh lookie! Updates, two chappies for me to read! I'm so glad that Angel didn't have to come to sunnydale, for them to know that he isn't the vamp for the job. But how is Spike going to react? I gotta read that next chapter.. Very good, again weyrwolfen ~Nina
Author's Response: I tend to post every two or three days. Once the story's written, it's hard for me to not keep up a fast and furious posting pace. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Bargaining Power
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Bargaining Power
Great chapter. I love the stubborn Spike! How good that Giles could manipulate him, I'm just hoping that Spike in time will be as protective of Buffy as Takeshi were of Kaede. I loved how worried you made him on th way to fight Orochi. Another great update! ~Nina
Author's Response: Thanks! I won't say that Spike and Buffy will end up exactly like Takeshi and Kaede (because you saw how that ended, and that's no good), but I will say that I'm playing with parallel construction for a reason. ;-)
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/05/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Converging Paths
Date: 02/05/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Converging Paths
And the plot thickens... I'm loving it. Buffy finally met Kaede and she blaims Willow for getting Spike as her 'consort' *lol* that was funny. I like how she felt a bond to Kaede, as sisters cos of their slayerhood. Again your descriptions of the surroundings in the flahbacks are amazing. It really feels like you're there. Not sure if I'm making any sense, but what I am trying to say: overall, another great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm flattered by the sense you're making. Thanks!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Unfulfilled Dreams
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Unfulfilled Dreams
Great chapter, but then yours always are ;)
The realtionship between Keade and takeshi seems like a really good one, they seem to care about each other a lot. The scene with them in the dojo made me smile, it was really nice. But as for Ichiro? Is it okay if I hate him? *lol* well *dislike* him? This really shows how lucky Buffy was to get Giles as a watcher.
Anyway, good job weywolfen! Now, I've got a couple of chapters to catch up with, so you won't ged rid of me yet! *lol*
Author's Response: Oh, please do hate Ichiro. I do and I made him. If I can get a visceral reaction out of you guys, I'll feel like I might be doing alright with this whole writing thing. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 10: Taking Up The Sword
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 10: Taking Up The Sword
Funny how you put Dana's words into this one. And I would like to see that handbook too! *lol*
Buffy promising to protect Spike? Wow, those memories *has* changed her! I'm glad though, it's for the better! I wonder what she was going to call him... "I protect my..." what?
It's nice to see Buffy and Spike this realxed together too. And the thing about the laundry! *lol* I always wondered how Spike kept his clothes clean... Did he like wash them by hand in some puddle down in his crypt, or take them to a laundromat? This answered my question in whole diffrent way!
Author's Response: I just can't see Spike slaving over a puddle, and from his unfortunate episode with the washer in Xander's basement, I think it's obvious he doesn't know how to use the appliances. How crazy is it that I obsess about these kinds of things? Oh well. I'm glad you liked that touch. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 11: Turning Points
Date: 02/19/2006 Title: Chapter 11: Turning Points
So that's how they got the swords... interesting. I really like how you give us piece by piece and how everything is explained along the way. It makes the story really capturing.
I aslo liked how you explained Buffy's feeling about her new memories. It's easy to believe that she would feel violated when a bunch of new memories are stuffed into her head, and I'm really glad that isn't the case.
Great update, and I'm looking forward to more! ~Nina
Author's Response: As much as I like a big reveal, dragging out an explanation can be a lot of fun to write too. I'm glad you're liking how I'm dealing with the swords and the memories. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/23/2006 Title: Chapter 12: Covert Operations
Date: 02/23/2006 Title: Chapter 12: Covert Operations
Uh oh! I really don't like the thought of them down in the initiative when the security alarms rings... Riley and his buddies? can't trust those... But they've got ther spell and their swords, so I'll guess everything will work out.
Another great chapter, can't wait for more
Author's Response: I can promise everything will work out. I just can't promise that it'll be neat and clean along the way. ;-) Thanks for the review!
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 01/29/2006 Title: None
Date: 01/29/2006 Title: None
Beautiful. That about sums it up. Really beautiful letter. It makes me a tad bit sad that she didn't love him, but you described it nicely. Overall I think you have the same thoughts about the Buffy/Spike realation as I do. Which makes me like it even more. Your friends were right, this should be read. Good job :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea how much I worried about posting that! You just never know how people will take it. I love the Buffy/Spike relationship (why else would I post on this site?) but I do think in the end it probably wouldn't work out the way everyone would like. Thanks again for the encouraging (really really) words. Kate xxx
Summary: AU - After her parents messy divorce, Buffy and her mother moved out of LA and into the sleepy little town of Sunnydale, hoping for a fresh start. New town, new school, new friends, it was a chance to start over. But life in Sunnydale doesn’t run as smoothly as Buffy had hoped, and it has a little something to do with a bleach haired menace she literally bumped into on her first day. Yes, this is a high school fic guys!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118102
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118102
[Report This] Published: 01/30/2006 Updated: 12/27/2013
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 01/30/2006 Title: Chapter 1: New Beginnings.
Date: 01/30/2006 Title: Chapter 1: New Beginnings.
What to tell... well this is the first chapter so it's kind of hard to get a feeling of the story, but I like it. Maybe it's because I'm still in high school, or maybe it's because Buffy and Spike starts out as enemies. Dunno, either way, I'd like to find out what happens next. Good story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy it so far, more will be posted up soon.
Summary: buffy in love with spike
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1657
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1657
[Report This] Published: 02/03/2006 Updated: 02/03/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1
Date: 02/03/2006 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1
Hey you. Did you preview this? Cos it's kind of hard to read, with mostly bold text and no paragraphs. It really gives the fic a bad look, which I'm sure you don't want. If you make these changes, and maybe let a beta look at it, I would really like to read it. Now - well I didn't get very far. Not trying to be mean, just giving you some advice. Good luck.
Summary: Set in a world where vampires and humans coexist-Buffy Summers moves to Sunnydale after the death of her mother. Looking for a fresh start, she finds her eyes opened to a whole new world.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4580
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4580
[Report This] Published: 02/08/2006 Updated: 02/09/2006
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/08/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 02/08/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I would really like to read you fic, but without any paragraphs this text is hurting my eyes :P if you change that, I promise I will give it another shot and leave another review. Good luck, and keep writing!
Author's Response: OK, thanks! I will break it up. I noticed that it was heard to read after I entered it.
Reviewer: Nemo Signed
Date: 02/09/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: 02/09/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
The paragraphing is much better If only, good for you!
But you still switch tempus a lot, for example:
"As Angel *hangs* up the phone he *turns* to his grandchilde and says..." which is present tense but later you're using past tense:
"Wes *watched* as Spike *walked* away, and *smiled* again".
You also switch from describing what happens with "I made my way ..." to 3rd person (Buffy/Willow etc). This can be very confusing for the reader. Which is ashame since I'm interesting in reading this story. There's not a lot of Dawn/Connor out there! And your universe with humans and vampirs coexisting, that sounds really interesting, and an advantage for spuffy.
I'm not saying I'm an expert, since I'm really not, English is not even my first language, but I'm trying to tell you ways to make your fic better. If you've got any questions feel free to email me.
Good luck!
~Nina
Author's Response: Thank you for the helpful hints. I will try to be more careful in my grammar.