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Summary: New Summary (courtesy of the lovely Brat): William is the love child of a powerful and wealthy landowner, and just when he is about to be accepted into his father's life and family, conspiracies against the two of them send young William to fend for himself. Years later, he returns to build himself a life and he finds a deep, intense and abiding love with Elizabeth Summers. The course of true love never did run smooth, and it seems secrets, lies, and deceits are about to come to light--all of which threaten to tear the couple apart. Judge's Choice in Round 3 of Spark and Burn Awards.Thank you so very much!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 108817
[Report This] Published: 01/21/2006 Updated: 02/11/2009
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 09/17/2007 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Mmmmmmmmm, served caliente indeed. YUM!!!

Author's Response: Heee, thankee, sweetheart, for reviewing and for all your help. *smooches*

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/28/2008 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49. Come Hell or High Water

You KNOW how much I enjoyed this chapter. It's so satisifying to hear Spike stand up for what he believes, for Buffy and he in front of a concerned Maria. I'm just glad Maria is as happy about his response as he is - course she'd never say as much, hee hee. And yay, Rupert finally knows - time for a jail-break of major proprtions. Loved this chapter for all it contains. Now, for Aimee to get hers, *inserts evil laugh*. And of course you know I'm always here for you to help carino in whatever capactiy you need. Love you mi hermana, very very much - kisses.

Author's Response: I know and I thank you for being the best sister and beta a girl could ask for. Your enthusiasm is what keeps me going, no matter what. I loved writing that scene between Spike and María, loved him being so sure of himself, despite his fear of her. *g* And of course Aimée is going to get hers. ;) Thanks again, lovie! *smooches*

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 02/11/2009 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50. Revenge is a Dish Best Served Cold

Woo Hoooooo - luv seeing Buffy give it to Aimee good. Too bad she didn't try anything more, I would have like to see Buffy break her arm, giggles. And whoa... whats this? Looks like Dona Darla in gonna be in trouuuuuuubbbbleeeeee, MWHAHAHHA. I love it, it's all coming together so well boo - SQUEEEEEEEEEE

Author's Response: Awwwww, you're soooo sweet! Thank you for all your help with this chapter and letting me bounce my ideas with you. And well, I guess Buffy could still do that... you know Aimée is going to try again. *shakes head* Girl never learns. *weg* And yep, Doña Darla is getting what she deserves after so many years. *bounces* Thanks again, darling! Love you muchly! *smooches*

Two Fool Things by Brat Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 1461]
Summary: William "Spike" Giles is a 39 year old famous TV actor. Buffy Summers is his 27 year old best friend. Lately, Buffy is tired of hearing about Spike's womanizing ways and sexual exploits. Then he invites her out to L.A. to visit him on vacation. . . Some truths come to light, some life changes are made and a love that will change everything is discovered. Won Round 14 at Love's Last Glimpse Awards for Judge's Choice and Nominated at Caveman v. Astronauts for Best Angst, Best UST, Best WIP, Best AU and me for Best Author
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97079
[Report This] Published: 02/04/2006 Updated: 07/12/2006
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 05/21/2006 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty seven

Read this in one sitting and have to say I'm gonna follow it till the end - love it. I haven't read any of the other reviews yet (I will so that next time I won't voice what others may have already), that being said there's some truth behind certain facets of Spike's character in relationship to the real JM - as far as his taste for younger women and his 'like' for the drink. Be it known to all I am NOT bashing JM, never would. I am a fan but naturally don't hold him on such a pedastal as to be blind to behavior that I don't condone.
I love how you've created the typical celebrity and paralleled to JM's own life. His character development is great along with Buffy's. He seems to be quick to want to change now that he SEES the error of his ways, but I'm assuming he'll stumble along the way??? Glad that they finally kissed but am hoping that she'll eventually have to go home when her vacation ends and that things will continue from there.
Wonderful job so far, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/07/2006 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty one

Awwww, that first experience of being in love and waking up to them, very well done. I'm very happy for them so far, but this event? I cringe to think of what will happen. I like this story so I'm not ready to see anyone get hurt too soon ya know? Update soon.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/08/2006 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty two

Good I'm glad nothing bad has happened, though the evenings not over yet. Oh lord let it pass by smoothly, I want some spuffy luvin later. Great job, post again soon.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/09/2006 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty three

hahahahaha, that's frickin hilarious ("hi honey"). Classic bad timing, good job. I am so glad nothing truly bad happened, so far. I'm sure it's gonna be bad enough with the photos and all later, but for now at least everythings been going alright for them. Have to say, I though it was Dru instead of Faith from your initial description. I like her personality in this and happy Spike never got involved with her. Wonderful work sweety.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/11/2006 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty four

Oh lord, doesn't it figure? This time tomorrow Buffy will be in the headlines as a whore and a brawler, poor thing. I just hope Spike shrugs it off and that Buffy isn't too upset. I love that he's begging her to stay, but sadly don't get the feeling she will, damn. I'm still loving this story and hoping for some spuffy luvin to come soon...what? We both know they want it, right? LOL, it's sweet that they're waiting, but it'll be sweeter when they do. Keep up the great work, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/25/2006 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter Forty two

I'm on the edge now. Her leaving is going to be a test in itself, and doubts are usually in someone's head for a reason... to be paid attention to. Man I really hope Spike doesn't screw up.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/26/2006 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty three

Yuuuuuumy. Tastes like 'more'. I love your stories, especially this one. So glad she decided to stay. Keep up the stupendious work sweety.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/27/2006 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter Forty four

Somebody hand me a tissue. so sweet and touching. I only hope things go well while she's away.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/01/2006 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty seven

TAKE IT BACK, TAKE IT BACK I SAY. Ah well, wouldn't be spuffy without a little angst, plus I could smell it around the corner. God I hope she doesn't fly off the handle, but of course I expect she will. Update soon sweety, I'm LUVIN it, 3 cheers to you.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/04/2006 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty eight

No, nononononon, please post soon, I can't stand cliffies like this. It's a terrible tangled web that they can't get hold of one-another. Please let Spike fly out there and stay with her till she can go back to Cali - please??? Great job hon, you've got me hanging on the edge of my seat. We'll all have make-up sex to look forward to - hopefully soon???

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/06/2006 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter forty-nine

Oh, sure... it's not enough that this happened but you had to throw Riley in the mix, lol. Great additive for the angst, just hope Spike doesn't show up and see this, but of course when it rains it pours huh? I so hope everything turns out alright in the end. Can't wait for the next chapter, you're cliffies are killing me but at least you post frequently, wish I could do the same w/ my work. Keep up the phenomenal work sweety.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/07/2006 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter Fifty

Uh ohhhh, I kinda thought something like that may happen. But hey, kinda puts them on equal ground in the trust department. How he'd get inside her apartment anyway? Did he use his fame to have the super open it, or did he just pick the lock himself, and how'd he know about Riley without knowing the exchange they had. Love that she shot down the arragonat prick, I can't stand Biley - though it does make for great angst. I'm so glad you had Spike fly to Sunnydale, that's AWESOME. Please post soon and let them have the talk they need... I'm drooling here waiting for the make-up sex. Awesome job sweety.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/2006 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty one

Oh, I don't think their done talking yet. I kinda gotta side with Spike all the way here - whether or not he used his fame to get into her apartment. Let's face it, everything he did proves how much he loves her and I just hope she sees that. He was right in his last statement (kinda like Riley) but I just hope he doesn't get/stay mad at her. You are doing SUCH a great job here, I mean it, very well developed. More soon please, it's a cliffie for me, lol.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/2006 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty two

I LOVE mikim's statement and I concur:
"Oh please, Great Mistress of the Evil Cliffanger, please please don't let us too long in the limbo of waiting! "
I laughed my F'in A$$ off. I'll try not to complain too much about the angst b/c you do it SOOOOOOOOO very well. But yes, more please, I can't take it any more, I need resolution.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/10/2006 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty four

I want make up sex, gimme gimme gimee, (Tina stomps her feet repeatedly). Squeee and a huge sigh.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/14/2006 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-five

Finally, whewww! I love that line, "Take me home Buffy"... indeed. And now I need a cold shower.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/14/2006 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty - six

I'm almost sad to see it end, but so glad it ended on a such a good note. Superb job, truly a work of art. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us, it was a wonderful ride.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 05/19/2006 Title: None

OMG, are you serious? Of course I appreciate when you read and respond to the reviews. I think it's wonderful when an author takes time to respond, it kind of helps answer questions or figure some things out. I often read all reviews and responses so that I'm not redundant in asking something. I really wish more authors like yourself and greyangel did as such. It's more of an incentive to leave reviews when the author cares enough to comment back - no offense of course to those that don't. Every author has different circumstances w/ daily life responsibilities and all. I just think it makes for a nice 'connection' if you will... building the relationship of author/reader. You are very thoughtful.

Yes, of course your right (concerning my last review), the baby's behavior towards Buffy and Spike would be a spoiler if you answered my question. Guess I was just projecting some wishful thinking there. Still, I'm glad you have such an evil Spike here, even after Buffy tried to explain herself. I love how he is just clueless with a captol 'C'. Give me tons of dark angst and I'll come back begging for another 'crumb'. The more polar they are the more I look forward to seeing how and what circumstances will bring them together.

Yes, Spike 'deserved' this in a way... to know his unlife isn't like burger king - 'have it your way', that he cannot control everything, lol. And I love love love the way you threw that in there about him feeling the 'pull' from his mate. It's a tidbit of what's to come that will hopefully bring out the William in him later. Love how you're developing Druiscilla's character too (she's so lovelably HATEABLE in this - you did a great job.) Though I'm sure he won't put her in her place for it when they do talk, it makes for an interesting future of her treatment towards Buffy. (god I love seeing that b^%ch get put her in her place) so I hope she at leasts gets a tongue lashing. I like me some Angelus too, though I'm surprised to see him in such a submissive tole - you probably have great things in store for his character as well.

I wonder, do you have any plans for Lucian - concerning Buffy? To describe what happened seems to leave room for something bad to happen - which I don't mind at all, the more danger the better. And yes one more question, did I interpret your story correctly when I came to the conclusion that Spike and Dru have a sexually inappropriate relationship being siblings and all? Something you wrote about... and come back to her bed where he belonged. I mean major ick factor but hey, vampire remember? I don't mind reading that kind of stuff at all I'm just wondering if there is a dark sibling secret of sex that will serve a purpose. I know you can't give much away, and I wouldn't want you too. I was so happy to click on recently added and find I would be one of the first few to review. You're one of the 'greats' as far as dark fic so I've been following with enthusiasm.

Keep up the good work sweety, I'll be watching for your next post.

Author's Response: Loved your review. You really made me laugh with some of your comments. Especially loved the 'have it your way' phrase. Yes, having your shiny boots vomited on is not having it your way is it? I do so love writing Drusilla too. I kind of feel that I've gotten a bit too far away from her insanity in her little actions, but hope in the wide scheme of things it's still obvious that's she's off her rocker. It's fun to write fan fiction but sometimes I also like to bend a character my way. As for her and Spike. Oh yeah, they have been doing the nasty. No morals here. Just good old brother and sister love. It's one reason she is so very possessive and jealous. Buffy is a huge rival. Thank you so much for your review. It was wonderful. I hope I can continue to entertain you with my work.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/03/2006 Title: None

I've been out of the loop for awhile so was delighted to see 2 new chapters to read. Enid is a wonderful addition to the story, just what was needed. Though not fond of humans she'll at least protect Buffy from physical harm from an ill-tempered Spike with her continued examinations. When Buffy barfed at his feet I LMAO. What goes around comes around, or out in this case.
I feel no sympathy for Dru whatsoever. I consider her personality and what she's become completely Spike's fault . Let's face it, vampire or not, if he truly loved his sister he wouldn't have twisted her into a incestual relationship. On the other hand Spike IS one sick puppy, so no surprise there. I'm glad Dru pointed out to him that he took advantage of their sire's training of her, it let him know that despite being Lord and master vampire, he isn't always right in his decisions or actions.

I'm glad Thalia is somewhat coming around in at least her behavior towards Buffy, and I'm glad the mating is having the emotional effect on Spike that it is. I have to ask though, you mentioned something was going to happen to shake up Spike's world. Has it happened yet or was either Buffy's illness or Dru's break down what you meant?
Either way I'm pleased to see the continual development of the characters, even Angelus. Though in this he seems like an annoying mosquito one would keep swatting at.
Looking forward to the next installment. Job well done.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 06/18/2006 Title: None

LOL, I really like that saying about the muse waits for no one but everyone must wait for the muse. You're right, it IS sooooooooo true. Thanks for answering my question, just had to be sure the EVENT hadn't happened. I'm actually pleased that Spike has realized (in his own way) that what he liked about Buffy is no longer there and it's all his own fault... can't have your cake and eat it too. Of course his anger is misdirected towards her when it should be himself, but at least he had the common sense to leave the room before lashing out at her. Glad Thalia is still coming around also. I hope Buffy isn't really sick during the whole pregnancy like this, or is it that she will be b/c of the type of pregnancy and that it could be accelerated rather than 9 months long... hmmmmmmmmmmmmm, I know I know, no spoilers. Wouldn't want it anyway, I like surprises. Love the old hag Enid, and thankful she is so dedicated to Spike. Let's just hope her info for Spike is taken well and that he handles the situation before it errupts into something bad for Buffy. God I can't stand Angelus but he makes for a good big dumb oaf as Dru's plaything. Funny how Men are often ruled by their d!(ks don't ya think??? Even Spike is becoming pu$$y-whipped, tee hee. I love this story so much and really appreciate the amount of time you've obviously put into it's development. Keep up the great work sweety.

Author's Response: Yes, Muse is more demanding than Drusilla though not nearly as mad or as bitchy. Spike is coming to see the truth, and though he finds it quite ugly, it is staring him in the face none the less. He has no idea how to handle all these strange emotions, so he of course, turns his confusion into rage and directs it at the easiest victim. As for Enid, yes, she uis loyal, but what of Drusilla/ She is a friend too, and the one who first brought her into the castle. What will Enid do if her heart is puled in two directions? As for your last comments about men... well I don't want to piss anyone off. Let's just say I was divorced a year ago and leave it at that shall we? Thanks for your wonderful review. I always look forward to them. You manage to see all I'm trying to get across. Take care.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/16/2006 Title: None

WOW, your description of Buffy's feelings of being trapped and her trip to the villiage was very moving. I could actually feel her pain in the way you described it. This is THE #1 story I'm following from here on out, and I have many favorites. So gIad Spike didn't cave to Druscilla, but why hasn't he gotten the identity of the other guy in the forest from him yet? I'm actually talking out loud here... just seems strange b/c I'm sure he'd torture him short of death, and if Angel didn't tell him, why hasn't he killed him yet? So much mystery and intrigue... I'm in love. I hope your holiday went well, and update when you can. I'm waiting with dread for Buffy if/when Wiliam finds out about her leaving. Kinda hope Dru does here voices and 'dances out in the sun'... poof... bye bye. LOL, just kidding, her character adds so much texture to the story, kill her when you feel like it - tee hee. Stupendous job, I am humble in your presence oh great one of the spuffy fanfic world... you rock.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am honored that you think so highly of my work. It means a lot. I work very hard at capturing my charaters emotions and am thrilled that you 'felt' Buffy's emotions. As for Angelus, he is stubborn and well, he has suffered tortured at Drusila's hands in thier BDSM games so... he also feels she will come for him and giving up the identity will spoil his future plan to overthrow Spike. As for spike kiling him, well that is due to Drusilla and her voices. Buffy and Spike are indeed going to have a knock down drag out fight when she returns and it is NOT going to be pretty. Fasten your seatbelt. I expect some backlash from it but it will be the catalyst to this entire story. One last thing, take it easy on Dru. I hate her too, but she is fun to write and she adds a great element so she stays for now. As for the holiday, it was fabulous. Thanks for hoping that. As always, thanks for your continued following and your review. I look forward to hearing from you aftewr my next chappie. It's going to be a doozy.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked
Date: 07/22/2006 Title: None

OMG, I was riveted. My heart was pounding right along with hers the whole time (not lying here)... I couldn't read fast enough. Boy did she ever mouth off to him. I mean maybe if she'd held her tongue on a couple things it might have gone smoother, but I understand the need for what you wrote and I was truly impressed. So much can be read inbetween the lines of each of their dialogue's it's crazy. It's like they both contradict themselves where Spike is concerned. He with his 'feelings', and then with his denial of any. Same goes for her. The apologies and such, so very uncharacteristic - it's the claim thing here for sure. But did Enid really declare her safe to bed??? Somehow I think not. Very interesting that she's become 'stronger' inside when it comes to him touching her - especially without touching the bitemarks - that she couldn't get wet for him this time, and the feelings ran soooo very strongly through her he felt them too and knew he couldn't do anything to sway her - physically at least (without touching his mark. All she did was lay there, yup, sounds like he's truly broken her, and to think it "hurt him deeply" - WOW.
He sounded like such a kid when he grabbed her, kissed her, then said 'now I'm through with you'. LOL, sounds similiar to something one of my kids would do with a toy or whatever. I'm really surprised that after all that she's actually trying to get out of the castle again - seems like she has a death wish aside from needing a shower. There's something I have to say, but don't want to here, AND, there's something I want to show you that I think you might appreciate. Therefore I'll email you and just end here saying what a wonderful tale you've weaved so far. I'm wrapped up and can't wait to see how it is at all possible for these two to be any form of spuffy in the end. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Glad I stirred such emotion and well, Buffy can't very well hold her tongue. Her fire is all she has left in her dark life. Yes the claim is working its magic on both of them. It is alos causing confusion, especially in Spike and anything he feels, he turns to rage because that is what he understands. As for Buffy, she had been through so very very much that this final degradation by the man who had been posing as a galant husband for the past few weeks was too much. Her body shut down and wouldn't respond. To say she was not in the mood is putting it lightly. Yes the claim would have cut through that, but Spike saw that as a bad thing. Hell, he is a master lover as well as vampire and that can be rationalized too right? Why use tricks? That is an act he won't be able to question to closely. Why did he give her a break in regards to her dignity by not making her have enjoyment? And yes, the end, well I teach little ones and yeah, what a selfish child he was. Had to have the last word and play one up. Okay, I've rambled here and I probably haven't made sense. I am so upset about the pictures not opening! Thanks for keeping on trying. I'll email again in awhile after these replies. I was gone all day and catching up is like writing 35 thank you notes for wedding gifts!!! Thanks for the wonderful review. It was so insightful and right on. You let me know that I'm getting my characters across.