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Bio:
I'm working really hard right now on developing an alternate universe, with an indepth Slayer Mythology, and a more healthy Spuffy relationship. Any reviews/feedback/criticism would be appreciated!
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11698
Date: 12/14/2006 Title: Chapter 5: 5
NO! Please, keep going. I really love the stories with the self-discovery, and the less-mean season six. I'm eagerly awaiting another update.
Author's Response: thank you! This definitely was a story of self discovery... mine and the characters. Thank you!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33488
Date: 12/11/2006 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The beginning
I really wish you could update more often, you've come such a long way with this story; it's improved a lot, in terms of the quality of writing and the flow of the story. Keep working on it, I'm always excited to see your updates!
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55855
Date: 12/07/2006 Title: Chapter 20: Déjà Vu
I'm so excited to see an update to this story! Keep it up, I'm having so much fun with this.
Author's Response: Many thanks. I'm having fun with it as well, in spite of the nervousness I have about the last few chapters... That's right- there shouldn't be more than five left. Aww shucks.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Freaky/Kinky
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194741
Date: 01/11/2007 Title: Chapter 21: Between You and Me
Very Hot!
Author's Response: Giggles, thank you.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49815
Date: 12/05/2006 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I'm enjoying this so much! Can't wait for another chapter.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42744
Date: 12/13/2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Darkness
Can I just tell you how in love with this story I am? You're doing a really awesome job, I look forward to more updates!
Author's Response: Yes, you certainly can :) Thank you! I hope to have the next chapter ready soon.
Runner Up for Best WIP and Winner of Judges' Choice at the Spark and Burn Awards
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88598
Date: 12/10/2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Very hot! I really like how the story is developing, keepup the good work!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 188689
Date: 12/04/2006 Title: Chapter 15: New World
It's so heartbreaking, and beautiful, the way you are dealing with Buffy's guilt and Spike's recovery, and Dawn and Anya just caring in their own strange ways. Keep it up, this story is just beautiful and well written.
Date: 12/06/2006 Title: Chapter 17: Full House
I'm really loving this story; there's the whole 'will Spike get better' aspect, and then the 'who hurt Spike' acpect. Really great writing, and a very creative premise.
Date: 12/12/2006 Title: Chapter 21: Nightmares
This story always makes me tear up. Really great evocative writing. Eagerly awaiting another update!
Date: 01/30/2007 Title: Chapter 49: Reflection
I'd just love to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. You've managed to make Evil Xander utterly credible, and Spike needy and damaged but not pathetic. It's really incredible work you should be proud of. I'm eagerly awaiting more.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
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Warnings: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/14/2006 Title: None
There is a certain squick factor, and yet I love what you're doing with this story. I am very interested to see if this Buffy can recover, and become more like Canon Buffy, or if she will end up completely different.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for sticking with me through the squick factor ;)
And of course I know how Buffy's gonna end up...but I can't tell and I know you wouldn't want me to. :)
Categories: Porn w/o Plot fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3343
Date: 12/01/2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Beach
Very cute, I think Buffy might need to suffer a bit for being so flip to Spike about having no life! LOL!
Neat concept, there are a few beach stories floating around, but I've never seen one where the Scoobies play a part in getting Spike out in the sun. It's an interesting twist.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15714
Date: 12/06/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Meet Scrooge
Oooh; I'm so excited to see what happens next! A christmas story *sigh* I love Christmas fic!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49997
Date: 12/07/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Rome
Interesting. I'm eager to see where this goes.
Author's Response: many thanks for your review. I will be slow, but this will get finished
Categories: Orphan
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Warnings: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None
I liked this premise, but it seems like you've never watched Angel. You should rent or borrow some of the DVD's, and watch them, because there's a lot of flashbacks on Angel that explore their relationship in more depth, and make this story seem very off, even for an utter fantasy. If you're writing late season fic like this, and changing relationships this much, you should consider marking the story off-canon or fantasy, rather than making it look like an episode re-write.
Categories: Orphan
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/27/2006 Title: None
Very nice, now we need another chapter, with some more plot, and the loose ends wrapped up. Please. It's an excellent start, but I think you can go another chapter or two, to flush everything out.
Categories: Orphan
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Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/27/2006 Title: None
*Sigh* If only it would have been that easy to fix everything. We can dream...
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Warnings: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/27/2006 Title: None
Very sweet, and an interesting premise. I do think you should work on adding some more details, however. Even if your story is an utter pipe dream fantasy, like so many stories, (including mine) loose ends are not your friends.
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None
Yay, another chapter! And you're getting much better about checking your stories, but you might want to go over this one again, there are a couple of typos. Remember, just a thought; details are good! Telling what expression someone has on their face, for example, can help the reader understant how the line would sound if it were on TV.
Categories: Orphan
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None
I liked this, and I'm glad that you fleshed out the first story by adding this, but may I suggest adding this to the first story as a second chapter, rather than making it a sequel? Just a thought, it might flow better that way, and keep down the number of new stories posted.
Categories: Orphan
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Warnings: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None
This is possibly the best thing you've written. The characters sound true, and it hits a poignant note, very emotional. I know I'm a nagging reviewer, but once again I'm gonna suggest that you work on fleshing out the details and imagery. This little story is well done, but it can use a bit of tweaking.
Categories: Orphan
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None
Very nice, a sweet adaptation, and Hero! Spike, which is my favorite.
Categories: Orphan
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None
Umm, I've been trying to offer constructive suggestions and encouragement, so I hate to say this. This story is bad. You didn't even bother to re-write the dialogue, which I'm guessing you found on a web transcript. Barring new dialogue to spice up the story and make it your own, you could have at least put the old dialogue and descriptions into paragraph form. This is upsetting, because even over the past two days I've seen improvement in your work, and this seems like a big step back.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 01/11/2007 Title: None
Wow. This is a really interesting premise, and you're doing a really great job with it. You might want to consider a little polishing, though; some of the dialogue is a little rough.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was my first story ever... my writing's improved a bit since. Thank you though!