Penname: Mabel Marsters [Contact] Real name: Mabel Marsters (sure it is!!)
Member Since: 09/23/2007
Membership status: Member
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Mabel Marsters from England

Newly into fanfic! (Aug 07)

Obsessed with all things James Marsters though secretly it's really Spike I love!! LOL

thought i'd better update this a bit!!

Won Best New Author at Sunnydale Memorial Fanfiction Awards Round Thirteen! Was great to get that so thanks to all who voted for me!!!

Winner of Outstanding Individual Award at Fang Fetish awards round 8 - Wow!

Runner up Best New Author Award at Spark & Burn Awards Round 4.

Readers Choice Best Fantasy author at Spuffy Awards Round 14.

Award winning fic - Fall Of The Night - Best Supporting Character for Helen Green and Judges Choice Award - Spark & Burn round 4

Award winning fic - Universal Vampire - Judge's Award at The Forbidden Awards round 8

Award winning fic - A Loss Of Pride - runner up Best Angst at the Indigo Crypt Awards. Winner Best WIP & runner up Best Post Series Finale Fic at Sunnyd Awards round 14

Award winning fic - Switched - winner Best Plot & winner Best Comedy at Sunnyd Awards round 14

Award winning fic - Changing Lives - runner up in both Best Drama and Best Angst at Sunnyd awards round 14

check out the pretties for these on my lj! :)



I'm down as a beta reader now - I'm ok on grammar but good at assessing the readabiltity of the fic, the way it flows etc, happy to try to help with plotlines too if you're blocked!!
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Haven by Xela Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Post-Chose, Spike is pulled from the rubble of Sunnydale by a mysterious group of people. They want him healthy and whole, but for what purpose? And who is the beautiful blonde woman who haunts his dreams?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26326
[Report This] Published: 12/25/2007 Updated: 04/03/2008
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 04/03/2008 Title: Chapter 11: The Pendulum

sad to hear that life means you can't write! Would be interested in where you weretaking this as it's a real shame that you're unable to finish it! I have been reading it on EF - cos further in front and I'm not the biggest reader - too busy writing but i thought this was or rather is great! :) hope your life gets less stressful and compicated soon :)

Author's Response: :) April Fools!! ;) But I'll be finishing this hopefully over the summer. I'm not 100% pleased with it, it's proving challenging, so we'll see. Thanks for R&R

The Truce by Eternal_red Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 442]
Summary: Once in a galaxy, far, far...oh, that’s been done. Right then. Humankind has been at war with the Aurelians for decades. When the two sides finally reach the point where negotiation is better than annihilation, a truce is called and a treaty negotiated on the planet currently under dispute. The peace treaty is cemented symbolically by the joining in marriage of the two youngest soldiers present, thereby throwing Buffy and Spike into a relationship that they really, really, don’t want. Although not a traditional Vampire versus Slayer scenario, it is close enough to be familiar.
Categories: Fantasy/AU
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61133
[Report This] Published: 01/13/2008 Updated: 06/14/2010
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 04/18/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

....his bundle of Buffy ....

Great line!!

Plot is good!! Looking forward to more!!!

Author's Response: Going to up the pace now. Hope the plot will be to your liking and new chapter soon ( no need for that blunt instrument you promised to bash me with in London!)

Forever Together by ETBat18 Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 34]
Summary: *NEW SUMMARY! Thanks to DarkRiverTempest* Post Chosen and NFA. Buffy is living her life in Rome when a prophetic dream pulls her back to LA and a certain someone she thought gone forever. Now, Angel, Spike, and Buffy need to make some tough choices when the PTB bring Cordy back with a gift…and who is the handsome man from Buffy’s past that make’s Spike so jealous? Will start out PG but will eventually be NC-17.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10910
[Report This] Published: 01/21/2008 Updated: 02/09/2008
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 01/24/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One

Hi there!! Told ya I'd read it! I did like it - it makes me want to find out what happens next! All the more intriguing as have no clue!! So put me out of misery and update again soon! (When I've got a WIP i generally run about four or more chapters in front of what i post! takes the pressure off a bit!!) Well done! :)

Author's Response: Well Honestly i was a bit tense to post anyhting without having someone besides me go over it. I found out though that you cannot even try and get a Beta without having something out there for them to see. I am working on getting my second chapter done and hopefully I will get a few ahead while im waiting for the mods to aprove chapter 2...

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/01/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Three

cliff hangers are good! Don't apologise! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I think Sotia may disagree though, I thought she was going to start throwing things, she even tried to blame DarkRiverTempest for influencing me! lol!

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 01/28/2008 Title: None

Hi there! I like it so far! Need more now!! (Sound familiar?LOL) Looking forward to you update :)

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/03/2008 Title: None

Got me wanting to read more! Please update asap! :)

Author's Response: Okie dokie i shall :)

Summary: On the trail of a killer, Spike finds more than he expected
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65878
[Report This] Published: 02/03/2008 Updated: 01/17/2012
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/29/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Second

Sorry I din't review chapter one - not boring at all by the way!! I think this is extremely well written - for some reason I found the description of Spike with his badge around his neck v hot!! Tee hee!! intrigued and will eagerly await more! :)

Summer Luvin' by SpikesGoddess Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 140]
Summary: Buffy Summers has been in love with William ‘Spike’ Giles her whole life, but, he has never seemed to feel the same way, or has he?
Runner up for Insider Tip award at the Cradle of Humanity Awards
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Freaky/Kinky, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21590
[Report This] Published: 02/04/2008 Updated: 06/21/2008
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

nice first chapter! :) Liked their email adresses!! Tee hee!

Author's Response: Thanx, yeah i'm very imaginitive when it comes to that! lol!

Soul Survivors by DawnofMe Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 118]
Summary: Sequel to Unreal Together. Spike helps Buffy get the hang of things. She has to contend with old enemies, old boyfriends, and new allies. Why is Giles avoiding Buffy, and what does he know? When ancient secrets come out in the open and their lives are in danger, they go to London, hoping to take care of things once and for all. ***Winner at SunnyD awards for: Best New Author, Best Plot & Best Original Character for Torch***
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58213
[Report This] Published: 02/11/2008 Updated: 04/09/2008
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/14/2008 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Family Dinner

Glad to see you've updated so quickly!! :) I know I've seen this before it was posted but just wanted to say well done kiddo and looking forward to more!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/21/2008 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Hello, Buffy

Just had to say I loved loved loved the way you ended this chapter!!!

Author's Response: : ) Thank you. And by the way, I'm expecting my new software program to arrive today, so expect my art banners for your remaining stories very soon; like tomorrow.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/25/2008 Title: Chapter 5: 5. Sherlock Gets a Clue

I just love this chapter! 'No shit Sherlock' - pure Faith! :)and congrats on all the nominations!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/29/2008 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Prize Collecting

There are so many great lines in this chapter it's hard to know which to pick!
“The training is all there,” Spike agreed. “It’s the strength that needs to catch up.” great can picture his face exactly!


“There’s a school?” As serious as all this was, the thought of a younger tweed clad Giles sitting in a classroom amongst other tweed-clad snobs made Spike smile. chuckle!!

and of course the line Tanit liked - touch him !!

Great stuff!!! :)



Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/2008 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Watchers and Slayers

Firstly as one of the beta's I'd like to apologise dawnofme for missing the date thing too!!! Bad Mabel!! I must say that the opening scene of them fighting is just so good, Xander's eyes glazing over, spike noticing Willow's interest!! Great stuff!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, hun. No worries about the date thing. Three of us watching and none of us caught it LOL! I am the silly one who wrote those numbers in to begin with. I'm glad you liked the opening scene. : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/10/2008 Title: Chapter 9: 9. Affianced

“Do you think we will ever get tired of each other?”

“Not bloody likely,” Spike said dryly. “If things get a little predictable, we can always have a right good fight and then make up.”

Wish he'd say that to me!! LOL!!

Loved the wedding planner reference too!

Author's Response: : ) Thank you.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/13/2008 Title: Chapter 10: 10. Miss Irma Barnes

She glanced around, then leaned forward to whisper, “Does Spike have a brother?”

Buffy smiled and shook her head.

“Damn.”

My feelings exactly Irma!!! Tee hee!! Another great chapter! :)


Author's Response: LOL! Thank you, Mabel. I'm with you and Irma. I want my own Spike.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/19/2008 Title: Chapter 11: 11. Bite Me

i love the bath tub scene where they both say 'you don't want to know' to each other's past exploits!!
Great stuff! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Mabel. : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/21/2008 Title: Chapter 12: 12. Out For a Stroll

I'm with you Wen - i keep asking her for part three too!!!! Keep nagging - it may work!! Great chapter Dawn!! :)

Author's Response: If I do write a third part (I do have ideas forming for it), it will be after I write a none vamp!buffy story that I have in the works. So it is possible. : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/25/2008 Title: Chapter 13: 13. London Calling

Even if the orange-haired vampire had stuck to London for his feeding grounds for hundreds of years before...

Like the description of 'feeding grounds' - really reminds us what vampires are!

I love Torch!! :)

Author's Response: : ) Thanks Mabel.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/26/2008 Title: Chapter 14: 14. Poetry in Motion

“It’s always the bonnie ones, too. Why can’t we fall for the auld bags? We’d at least be able to think with our brains, then.”

this line really made me chuckle!!!

And you're pretty awesome yourself kiddo!!! :)


Author's Response: aw shucks. Thank you. And thanks for your very English help with the Scottish lingo : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 03/31/2008 Title: Chapter 15: 15. The Lion's Den

A sheepish looking, orange haired vampire followed him into the room.

“I found this genius loitering about in the hall.”


love it!! :)

another great chapter!

Author's Response: LOL! That's my favorite line, too. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 04/03/2008 Title: Chapter 16: 16. Bloomin' Idiots

Spike held on to Buffy. “She’s my woman and that makes the watcher sorta like my father-in-law, doesn’t it?” He shrugged. “I’ve never been conventional; having humans as family seems perfectly acceptable to me. What do you think?”

“What do I think of a vampire who considers a watcher his family and who protects him?” George Foster interrupted to ask as he glared at Spike, before a grin took over his face. “I say, call me Uncle George.”

Torch didn’t much like interacting with humans. They were food and he didn’t play with his-but he’d made exceptions in the past and he’d make one now.

So many good lines - no need for me to say anything! *hugs* :)




Author's Response: Thank you, hun. : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 04/06/2008 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Watching Their Backs

“Torch.” Buffy managed to say. “He saved us.”

A proper way for our heroic vamp to bow out - saving those he loved! :)

job well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mabel. : )

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 04/07/2008 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Survivors

“I have a feeling Angel would love ‘er,” Spike said. “She’s eternally walking around in the body of a fifteen year old. She’s exactly his type.”

great line!! :)


Author's Response: LOL! I'm not an Angel fan, but I really don't hate him either. LOVE Angelus. I think this story is the meanest I've ever treated the third wheel vampire. *snicker*

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 04/11/2008 Title: Chapter 19: 19. The Start of Eternity

After a long and tender kiss, they climbed under the covers and started eternity by making love to each other once again.


Great last line! Well done! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Mabel. Have to give them a happy ending...until the next story, that is. : )

Summary: S6. Is set about a month after As you were. Song is Goodnight Sweet Girl by Ghost of the robot. WINNER OF BEST SONG FIC AT THE SUNNYD AWARDS ROUND 14. Thank you everybody who voted for me, it means a lot.
Categories: Ficlets/Song Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2154
[Report This] Published: 02/12/2008 Updated: 02/12/2008
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked
Date: 02/12/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Goodnight sweet girl

Gonna be your first new review!! not your last i'm sure!! :)

Author's Response: hihi, I hope not. Reviews makes me happy :) Thanks again for all the help