Summary: A Spuffier twist on the episode in which Buffy is training the potentials in the graveyard - with Spike's help.
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Genres: Romance
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Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3073
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[Report This] Published: 05/11/2007 Updated: 05/11/2007
Reviewer: Sajabi88 Signed 
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
I loved this story. Wow, the way that you wrote Spike seems so completely realistic. It would have been awesome if that had been in the show instead of what we actually got to see. I love to read fics that show how caring Spike is around Buffy. Good endings are also the best thing. I wish that this would have a sequel even though I know that it says that you won't. So, once again I love this story and I can't wait to read more of your fics.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of them. :)
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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: Sajabi88 Signed
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: None
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: None
This is a really good story. I like the fact that when they realize that Buffy has lost her powers they go to check on Faith and see whether or not she still has her powers. It was also awesome that they then broke her out of jail and brought her back to Sunnydale and then how Giles came up with a plan to get them away from Sunnydale for a while.
The prophecy was cool in the way that if they are both killed at the same time that there will no longer ever be a Slayer line. Okay I also like the fact that Giles had Spike's chip removed and he soul reinstated. I also liked the daggers that they used in this chapter. And of course I loved the fact that Angel was pretty much whining about the fact that he is no longer the only vampire in the world that has a soul.
Author's Response: I am glad that you liked....well everything! lol. I will try to update soon, and I hope you continue to like it all.
Reviewer: Sajabi88 Signed
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: None
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: None
When they are trying to leave in the beginning of this chapter I think that it is extremely funny that she is delaying things by not packing enough at first and then trying to pack too many shoes, and then not being able to carry the bag downstairs because of the said shoes. It is even funnier when I realized that it ended up taking six hours before they were ready to go.
Wow, I can't believe that it was really Willow and Giles who took Buffy and Faith's powers away from them. I know that it said that this story would have her friends lying to her but I did not expect it to happen so early into the story.
The part where they are fighting the ninjas and Buffy does not do as she was told and gets out to try to help just shows how much being a Slayer was part of who she was not just what she does. Then she realizes that the reason that she was supposed to stay in the car was because they had guns and they could really kill her rather easily without her powers. I like the way that Spike finally gets through to her that she needs to do what he tells her to do because he is trying to save her life and the fact that she tells him thank you.
Aww, Spike is sweet getting every type ot candy bar there was since he did not know which one that she would want. Also for getting Mr. Gordo when Buffy forgot him.
I can't believe that they are having Spike spike Buffy's drink and then drugging her to keep her fro getting her slayer powers back.
If some of this review seems a little weird it is because I was trying to remember the entire chapter to comment on which is hard to do when it is a long chapter like this one is.
I love this story and cannot wait for it to be updated.
Author's Response: Thank you! Some of it is a bit rough, and her friends are lying to her a lot, but for good reason. I am glad that you are enjoying this story and pointed out what you liked. It helps me see what people like about the story. I will update soon. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sajabi88 Signed
Date: 12/09/2007 Title: None
Date: 12/09/2007 Title: None
Okay, before I say anything else I love the title of the chapter.
Once again I think that it is very sweet that Spike remembered Mr. Gordo, when Buffy did not. It's funny that the first thing that she thinks of when Spike tells her where they are is about Disneyland or is it World? I don't know but I still think that it is funny.
I love the way that you keep everyone in character, especially Spike as I read this I could pretty much hear them talking as if I was watching the show. At the beginning it was funny the way that Buffy told Spike to give her the pig back and he gave her that specific look and she calls him a pig. And the way that he tells her that she likes pigs and that he does as well. I love that he makes her tell him that he is a better kisser that Angel was.
I like the way that Spike tried to keep Buffy from seeing how badly he was hurt. It was nice the way that when Buffy saw how he was hurt she helped him to clean up. It is nice to have insight into what Buffy is thinking about how she does not want to get close to Spike because she thinks that he is souless.
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I love how oblivious Angel was to the fact that as Faith put it Buffy was digging on Spike. It is funny to read his reaction to things like that.
It is always funny to see or you know read about Faith picking on Angel just because she does not want to get bored.
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I am glad that Willow is feeling better and that she will not have to do anymore spells. I like the fact that Giles is going after the guy because no one would suspect him.
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It is funny the way that every time that Spike or Angel stabbed a ninja they were transported back to the Watcher's Council so that they have to start all over again. It is nice to see that one of them seems to be losing confidence in the fact that Spike and Angel are completely bad.
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I love the way that Buffy in her way takes care of Spike . It is nice to see that she does care even if she does not want to think about it too much.
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I like the fact that she felt content lying in their room anly a few feet away from Spike. It is sad that Spike is tortured in his sleep by his past.
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I love this story. After tomorrow I will be going home for Christmas and will be unable to read or review until the beginning of January, but I will continue with my reviews as soon as I get back so even though it will be a while until my next review please update soon.
Author's Response: Can I just say I love your review method. Gives me a lot to read!!! Thanks! I liked and loved all of your review...lol..any critisim? I will miss your reviews, and I look foward to your return! I update this story about once a week.