Penname: TammyAsh666 [Contact] Real name: Tambra
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I love writing about Buffy. I know it really well. I love the Spuffy relationship. That's what I devote most of my time to, but I love all of the characters=)
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Summary: Buffy and William are best friends about to embark on their last year of high school. Seen all their lives as nerds Buffy decides they should both use the summer to transform themselves into 'date worthy material'. How will this joint transformation go? And how will they react to each other when they suddenly become all hot and sexy?

NOMINATED FOR 'BEST SAGA' AND 'BEST FANTASY' AT THE LOVE'S LAST GLIMPSE AWARDS!!!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38316
[Report This] Published: 02/22/2006 Updated: 08/04/2006
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 03/13/2006 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 7 - First time for everything

Aw, the awkward first kiss. It's only natural that it would be weird for both of them, but I'm glad that they were both each other's first kiss. I'm hoping they will share other first time experiences with each other. Looking forward to seeing everyone's reactions when they go back to school. Great chapter=)

Silently Broken by Suzee Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 1459]
Summary: *11-28-06: 'Sunshine' sequel added/complete* Every night, phone in hand, Buffy Summers gives men a living soundtrack for their fantasies. He started out as just another job—but what happens when ‘Spike’ steps out of the phone and into her life as the very real William, her stepfather’s brother?

And please notice all the warnings, this is not a fluffy story--but it is Spuffy. *Nominated at the Forbidden Awards for Best Spuffy Long and the Spark and Burn Awards for Best Dark and Best Fantasy and at the Cradle of Humanity Awards for Best Story--thank you!* Runner Up for Best Spuffy at Big Bad Awards
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape, Child Abuse, Freaky/Kinky, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88315
[Report This] Published: 03/07/2006 Updated: 11/28/2006
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 04/04/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I'll try very hard not to kill you, but this is just torture. I'm sure Buffy's in for a surprise when Spike does show up. She is so wrong about his intentions. She hasn't even had sex in years and she thinks what she does makes her a whore? That's just not true. It's only phone sex. I've done it, I mean, we've all done it I'm sure. It's just for fun, no harm in it. I have a feeling I know what might happen in the next chapter, but I'll just have to wait and see. More please!

Summary: Buffy Summer’s brother, Angel, is getting married to Drusilla, and while she is happy for him, she takes an instant dislike to her new brother-in-law, William Giles. The feeling is more than mutual. They walk out of each others lives without a second thought. When Dru and Angel die in a car accident, leaving custody of their six month old daughter to Buffy and William, they are forced to rethink their concept of "family" and their feelings for each other. Co written by Brat and Wattie
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48166
[Report This] Published: 03/28/2006 Updated: 04/28/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 07/25/2006 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Well, she didn't take anytime to think about it, but who would? I'm sure Spike doesn't have to worry about losing them. He doesn't even know if Buffy is really interested in Riley, and I'm hoping she isn't. Great chapter, ladies=)

Summary: Buffy finds an antique desk in her mother's gallery and feels drawn to it. What would happen if somehow she and the previous owner, a British gentleman from 1880, could communicate through it? And Spike, what would he think of the whole situation when he finds out? This story is co-written by Lu82 and Dusty273 up to chapter X; and by Im_bloody_English and Dusty273 from chapter XI on.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Parody, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52967
[Report This] Published: 06/06/2006 Updated: 04/21/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 08/30/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter IX

Uh oh, I'm guessing the same thing is going to happen. Well, he kinda has to get turned or there won't be anymore Spike, and we can't have that. It's just sad, William was such a good man. I loved reading about his thoughts. It looks like the truth might come out soon now that Spike knows about the letters. He's bound to find out, all Buffy has to do is reveal William's last name. I have to say, it was a bit odd for Joyce to try and play matchmaker, but I'm glad someone would be on their side when they do get together. Spike can deny his attraction to Buffy all he wants, but Joyce knows the truth. Anyway, I'm happy to see an update for this. I love the story. Great work, ladies=)

Author's Response: You're right, there wouldn't be anymore Spike if he wasn't turned, but the reasons behind it would be more than a little different than on the show as you might have guessed already. ;) I'm so glad you liked reading William's thoughts. And yeah, Spike will find out about everything, but things have to fall into place before he remembers (hint hint). Thanks for your lovely words, Tammy. *hugs* Mari

Summary: Crossover: Buffy/Superman. Set in S5 of Buffy, but completely off canon. No Glory, no Dawn, but after "Crush." Spoilers for Superman Returns Superman comes to Sunnydale in search of Buffy after a vampire attacks Lois Lane in broad daylight. It seems Lex Luthor is involved and up to no good. Spike, Buffy, Superman and Lois set to find out just what is going on. Truths and loves are revealed -- not to mention much snarkiness and lots of fun along the way. Pairings: Spike/Buffy, Lois/Superman (Clark)
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35963
[Report This] Published: 07/16/2006 Updated: 01/06/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 08/04/2006 Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

Uh oh, I think the truth might come out, but hopefully not from Spike. He really needs to learn when to shut up. The jealousy is making him even crazier than usual, and I didn't think that was possible...lol! I think Buffy needs to have a talk with him. It was funny, I also yelled out hey when Spike called Clark a nerd. That was just not right...lol! Loved the chapter=)

Meant To Be by AbbyLou Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 112]
Summary: Buffy, Spike and the gang are students at a music academy/college in New York. This is basically a story of love, friendship, some angst, and finding yourself. Although it is rated NC-17 It doesn't actually get that way for quite awhile.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31927
[Report This] Published: 07/28/2006 Updated: 02/08/2008
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 08/11/2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 1 - Changes

That's right, you tell her, Spike...lol! Kissing is really nothing, though. It's still hard to tell when a guy likes you. Tara's really cute in this. I'm glad to see an update. Great chapter=)

Author's Response: I agree about it being hard to tell when a guy likes your. I basically had to club my husband upside the head and say "Mine". Thanx for the review.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: None

Yay, I think progress is really being made now. I'm glad that Spike went to therapy and it seems to be working out for him. I liked reading their letters, it was cute. You're doing a great job with this story, don't let the few trolls out there tell you otherwise. I'm sure they know who they are. Loved the chapter, babe=)

Summary: After losing her mother and stepfather in a horrible accident, Buffy Summers is sent to her cruel and uncaring father in Los Angeles. When she finally gets the courage to run away from her abusive home life, she banks her entire future on a chance encounter from years before. Spike had broken his promise to keep his uncle's stepdaughter safe, but now that Buffy was suddenly back in his life he had a chance to make it right again.

Runner-Up~ Best Spike Characterization at the SunnyD Awards
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Child Abuse, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95136
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2006 Updated: 01/23/2012
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 01/07/2007 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Man, I'm out of chapters now. I just stayed up until 3 in the morning reading this story. I've been debating about whether or not I should read it, but I love your other two stories and decided to give it a chance. I have to say that I'm really glad I did. I love it and the relationship between Buffy and Spike is very hot. I don't even really pay attention to the age difference. She does seem older, anyway. I am worried about what will happen when her father finally finds her, but I'm sure Spike won't let anything happen to her. I also friended you in LJ, hope you don't mind. Can't wait for more=)

Personal Attention by Jaesha Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 668]
Summary: As the personal assistant to the glamorous Drusilla Rayne, Buffy Summers is immersed in the actress' life both on and off the set. So when Drusilla leaves her husband, Spike, for another man, Buffy finds herself picking up the pieces of the broken home and Spike's broken heart. In the process, she finds that Spike isn't the only one who's heart might need some mending.
Runner Up for Best WIP and Winner of Judges' Choice at the Spark and Burn Awards
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88598
[Report This] Published: 11/05/2006 Updated: 07/05/2011
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 11/05/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hmm, this is an interesting beginning. You have me intrigued already. I'm guessing Spike is a rockstar or something. I doubt a musician and an actress would have ever really lasted. Dru is seriously insane to leave someone that devoted to her. Buffy's right, if only more men could be like that. I'm interested to see what happens between the both of them in this. Great start=)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 12/15/2006 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Oliver does seem kinda slutty. Let's just hope that Spike can be trusted. I have to say that I love how fast you update this. It's one of my fave stories right now. Great chapter=)

Summary: Two and a half minutes is not long enough to fall in love but perfect for a one night stand. All human A/U.
Categories: Porn w/o Plot fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Freaky/Kinky
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1290
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2006 Updated: 12/28/2006
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One Night

Oooh, could this be that Spander fiction? I like it even more this time around...lol! You can never go wrong with Spuffy. Hot story, babe=)

Some Kind of Oil by Devin Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 319]
Summary: William Pratt, a successful European artist, has received an offer from Liam Angelus of L.A. to do a series of nude portraits. Despite his reservations, Spike complies, unaware of the effects that the chosen subject, struggling art student Buffy Summers, will have and the problems she will cause. (All Human Fantasy) Runner-up Best Fantast at the S&B Awards Round 3
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41379
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2006 Updated: 02/07/2008
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 01/10/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It would be so uncomfortable to have nude pictures of myself in some creepy guy's place, where he just constantly stares at them. That's majorly cringe worthy. It would be different if those pictures stayed with William. I wouldn't mind so much then...lol! But I pose nude for no one, I really have to admire Buffy for deciding to go through with that. I wonder if she'll back out or anything. I can't wait until they realize that they were the ones dancing together at the Bronze. Great chapter=)

Author's Response: :) I definitely agree. I mean, UGH to imagining some creepy guy staring at you nude! And not even in the artistic way that William would do it, but all smutty, yeah? :) But Buffy's determined, and all will work out in the end (I finally settled on how I'm going to do this-- I had sooo many ideas). Thanks for the review!

Love Takes Time by Brat Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 147]
Summary: Buffy has returned to Sunnydale to bury her mother after having been estranged from her for the past five years. The cause of the problem was her mother's marriage to a certain younger man named Spike. Having to face one another for the first time in five years, Spike and Buffy find that they might need each other more than they realize. Winner at Love's Last Glimpse awards for Best Fantasy! Nominated at Spark and Burn Awards for Best Fantasy, Romance and Best Spike Characerization. Thank you!!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102606
[Report This] Published: 12/31/2006 Updated: 01/05/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 12/31/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One-Two

Ugh, I had to log in, the nerve...lol! Kidding, I'm glad you decided to put the story back in. I hope there won't be anymore problems. This story is just too good. I'll be looking forward to reading it again=)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 12/31/2006 Title: Chapter 16: Thirty one- Thirty two

You're a posting machine, woman! Keep up the great work. I had to add this story as a favorite again=)

Author's Response: Thank you honey lol

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 12/31/2006 Title: Chapter 30: Fifty-eight

Yay, I think he's finally getting it. I like that they showed each other photos and shared stories of the past, trust is very important. Lovely chapter, babe=)

Summary: Past Featured StoryPhotobucketThe victim of a spell gone awry, Buffy finds herself trapped in Victorian London, where she meets a man surprisingly familiar to her.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277738
[Report This] Published: 01/09/2007 Updated: 08/26/2009
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 01/09/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Yay, so happy that you started posting this fiction in here. I just added it to my favorite stories. I love it and can't wait for more=)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story that much.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 04/09/2007 Title: None

Riley is a complete dick, Spike got that right. She doesn't like to be lied to, but that's exactly what Riley has been doing. He's full of crap to think that she's fat, I think he needs to look in the mirror himself. He's not exactly what I would call tiny. If anyone can help her with her self-esteem, it would be Spike. The only reason Riley can't stand to see her naked is probably because he's gay. That's what it seems like to me, anyway. There's no way she's ugly, I would give anything to look like her. I never understood why women would be with someone that treats them like that. She deserves a lot better than that prick, but I guess that's where Spike comes in. Okay, I've rambled on enough. I like this story so far, even if there will only be two chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next=)

Author's Response: You got it completely right - Riley's gay! Except I really couldn't be bothered going into the whole 'he's using buffy as a cover up so no one knows' thing... so its mentioned briefly in the 2nd chap. Yeah, and in no way is she ugly I think we all agree! So glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing as always!

Who Could Love Me by Pet Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 454]
Summary: After being rejected too many times, William "Spike" Pratt has given up on love.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38064
[Report This] Published: 04/25/2007 Updated: 06/10/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 06/03/2007 Title: Chapter 26: chapter 26

Hmm, I wonder what will happen now...lol! I've said it before and I'll say it again, Riley's an idiot. All he cares about is himself, but I'm glad Buffy is okay. They're such a sweet couple already and Anya is, well, Anya. There's not much hope for her...lol! Well, I'm not going to let you end this story yet, nope, not gonna...lol! Keep those chapters coming=)

Keeping Secrets by Pet Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 563]
Summary: Buffy and Spike used to be best friends back in high school, but Buffy soon discovered that she wanted more. Not wanting to ruin their friendship, she kept her true feelings to herself. When Spike's seemingly shallow relationship with a woman named Drusilla turned long term, Buffy couldn't handle seeing the love of her life with someone else, and walked out of his life without explaining why. Two years later, Buffy once again enters his life after hearing of a tragic accident, and finds that she’s not the only one who’s been keeping secrets all this time.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40984
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2007 Updated: 08/10/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 07/03/2007 Title: Chapter 15: chapter 15

Aww, talking, tears, and kissage. You usually can't go wrong with that...lol! Of course, I doubt things would be very easier for them. They still have a lot to work through. Great chapter=)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so! :)

Saving You by Pet Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 610]
Summary: Spike Pratt has lost everything, and his life has literally fallen apart. But one day he meets a little girl, and from that moment, nothing will ever be the same again. Runner Up for Best Romance and winner of Best Original Character - Readers Choice at the Spark and Burn Awards round 4!
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45648
[Report This] Published: 07/23/2007 Updated: 10/02/2007
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 10/02/2007 Title: Chapter 36: Saving me

Aww, well, you know how much I loved the ending. I'm going to miss this story, you did a great job with it=)

Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks SO much for your help with the betaing! :)

Healing by Pet Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 1696]
Summary: PhotobucketAbsence of Light AwardsSpike Pratt is known for being an outsider and a troublemaker. However, what people don’t know is that he has long since decided to never let anyone come too close, not wanting them to find out the truth about his tragic past. But one night he happens to stumble upon a girl in serious trouble. Will he help her? And will she be able to help him? Runner Up for Best Angst at the Cradle Of Humanity Awards round 1! Runner Up for Best Angst AU at the Absence Of Light Awards and now also Runner Up for Best Story at the Cradle Of Humanity Awards round 3
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape, Child Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 96 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142700
[Report This] Published: 12/05/2007 Updated: 03/10/2009
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 11/24/2008 Title: Chapter 69: 69

I'm glad he finally got through to her, maybe they can both move on from their terrible experience now. It helps knowing that the bastard will never be able to hurt them again. Great chapter=)

Author's Response: Yay, I'm so happy you think so! Thanks! :)

Summary: Spike, jaded best selling novelist, fresh from rehab, has writer's block and carries a guilty secret. He searches for redemption at a lonely beach cottage where he meets Buffy, owner of the cottage reeling from a devastating personal trauma. Can they each mend the other or is it too late for both?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34512
[Report This] Published: 02/06/2008 Updated: 02/07/2008
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 02/08/2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Money/ Epilogue

This was a great story. I added you as a favorite author because I've enjoyed all of your fictions, you're a really good writer. I hope to read more from you in the future=)

Author's Response: Wow, that's a great complement. Thank you so much.

Lies by Pet Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 325]
Summary: PhotobucketPhotobucketDespite the fact that she has never been in a serious relationship, Buffy Summers has already given up on love. One day she runs into a young boy and, horrified by his story, decides to help him. But, as she is about to find out, things aren’t always the way they seem. Winner of Best Fantasy Romance - Judge's Choice at the Spuffy Awards round 16. Also winner of Best Angst at the Cradle Of Humanity Awards round 3.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Child Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56163
[Report This] Published: 07/11/2008 Updated: 06/14/2009
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 06/10/2009 Title: Chapter 34: 34

You know I love me some sugar, so you'll get no complaints out of me. I love the cute family bonding in this chapter, as I told you before. I'll be all sad when this story ends, you're doing a great job with it=)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! *hugs*

Summary: Imagine this as a re-telling of Season 6. Beginning at the moment Spike and Buffy see one another for the first time since her resurrection, the Slayer finds a comfort in the vampire that she’d never felt before. When their respective feelings for one another rapidly grow into a secret romance, what will happen when Buffy’s friends learn the truth?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232447
[Report This] Published: 01/10/2009 Updated: 12/15/2010
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 03/17/2009 Title: Chapter 59: Long Story Short

Well, she couldn't keep that a secret forever. I'm not worried about Faith, though. Sure, she's a bitch, but I do believe she has changed and I know she wouldn't tell the council about that, not when she's running from them as well. I hope Buffy and Faith can work together, I always like it more when they're friends and not enemies.

Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! Yeah, Buffy's secret definitely wasn't going to be kept for long. Now, the only thing is...what happens when the council finds out? Dun dun dun.....!

Summary: Summer Love - One of the sweetest experiences of all. In the summer of 2003 Buffy Summers, a 16 year old counselor in training at an all girls camp, may find just that in the form of Spike Giles, a maintenance man on the camp grounds. Follow their journey as they discover each other and themselves, in their 8 weeks spent under the trees.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15536
[Report This] Published: 06/10/2009 Updated: 08/19/2009
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked
Date: 06/10/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a pretty good beginning, not bad for your first story. I don't blame Buffy, if I saw that man, I'd be bumping into trees, tripping over my feet, all that embarrassing stuff...lol! I'm sure he'll soon realize that she's not like the other girls, and hopefully Faith is just a new friend, and not competition. I think Buffy and Willow could use another friend. Can't wait for more=)

Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! That means alot since i read your stuff all the time. Thanks! You'll just have to wait and see about Faith :) i ended the chapter there for a reason *rubs hands together evilly* glad you like it. i'll be added more soon :)