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Bio:
I'm a 35 year old Die Hard Spuffy fan. I have been reading fanfic since ... well since Buffy first aired. I'm always reading several fics at once ... so
If you need someone to read through your fic, I'm available. I'm no english scholor, but I can let you know if it sounds ok and look for some errors.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12842
Date: 07/31/2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Iivyy13,
I just started reading and I have to tell ya - I had to read the whole thing through!
I'm loving the interaction between Buffy and Spike. Cute, shy glances and flirty behavior is always great to read! Think you had a few of us worried with the serious tone of their lunch conversation, but I had faith that you would keep them together!
I also have to say, that I'm enjoying how your playing with Spike and Buffy's green eyed monsters! It's not over the top and I really do like that about this piece! Although I'm sure you'll give us readers a run for our money with that!
I was a little worried when you named Andrew as Dawn's intended, but I have a good feeling I know where your headed. I especially liked that last scene with Dawn and Andrew! Everyone tries to work in her famous "GET OUT, GET OUT!" line and I do think you nailed it!
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!
G_Ivy