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Origins by Niamh Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 617]
Summary: Post Season 5, veers from Canon, but uses elements that were seemingly left discarded by the writers. Winner Round 11 Sexiest Bite and Judge's Choice Award at Vampire's Kiss Awards; Winner Round 5: Best Spike Hero story at Lost in Spike Awards; Winner at Love's Last Glimpse Awards Round 8 for Best Spike Characterization. Another set of nominations! Thanks! Nominee, Round 6, Lost in Spike Awards for Best Long Story, Best Love Story and Best Written
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144089
[Report This] Published: 12/08/2004 Updated: 05/02/2006
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Date: 12/31/2004 Title: Chapter 24: A harlot's prerogative

And another great chapter! Wow, you're fast - so happy! You captured Willows state of mind great. Can totally see her simply not getting that she is doing soemthing wrong, tho why she don't get it I'll prolly never understand.... Already anxious for the next one :-)

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Date: 02/21/2005 Title: Chapter 48: Innocence creates my hell

Oh god, they kicked her out, they really did it! I was so hoping for this to happen. I can't believe Willow even tried to deny calling Angel. Didn't she just think how it was a good thing to call him and thet Buffy would be happy about it? If she really believed that, why would she deny it? The girl is so seriously messed up! Love the interaction between those left at the house though. Nice to see Tara gets the support she deserves instead of Buffy clinging to her old friendships as if it didn't matter how they all changed. I've always hated that on the show. No matter if they where all best friends once upon a time, it shouldn't be used as an excuse to let them do what they want. In a way that's like saying you have to stay in a relationship with an abusive partner because you laved each other once upon a time. It's simply stupid! Really loved this chapter (and the ones I didn't leave a rev for too, sorry bout that, don't always remember *blushes*).

Summary: After being called on by the Council, Buffy is off to Brazil to help a Watcher learn about the ‘dreaded’ William the Bloody. An AU fluffy romance started for a William ficathon.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37980
[Report This] Published: 12/13/2004 Updated: 01/23/2005
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Date: 01/07/2005 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Oh god! Wherever did you come up with the flashlight idea? I read this last night and couldn't even review, 'cos I couldn't stop laughing every time I looked at the fic... Still having difficulties with that by the way. I mean, it was cute and all, but to think Buffy actually came up with that idea and somehow told him *lol*. Loved the little scene with the cashier by the way. Nice to see Willian so forceful for a change. And well, the McDonalds stuff was just adorable! Great chapter!

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[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
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Date: 01/02/2005 Title: None

*snort* he's just too cute, isn't he?! Can just see his face at the thought of Xander-taste. And Joyce is just cool...

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Date: 01/04/2005 Title: None

Yippe! Angel-pain, Giles-punching and kicking Xander out all in one chapter! You just made my day! I soooooo love it whenever Buffy actually stands up for Spike and her choices. Yours dose so quite often, probably why I prefere her to the original one - ok, one of the reasons... Can't wait to find out whether you are going to let them (the three idiots) come to their senses or if we'll end up with some dead or ignored Scoobs. Wait a sec, you said "fluffy" so I guess no killing Giles and Xander - pity *smirk* Oh whatever, I love it anyway.

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Date: 01/05/2005 Title: None

Ooooh yes! That's even better than killing them! And again with Dru, I just love your way of writing her! Hearing of her using a fax is nearly as hysterical as the plane-tickets in the s2 one. But funnily I can still imagine it, without problems even. And now waiting till tomorrow, wow, I really need a life *lol*

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Date: 01/08/2005 Title: None

Hehe, that has to be the best Buffy-reaction to Spike biting someone, ever! "It’s embarrassing" Too cool. Loved the Buffy=Prince Charming bit, those two are just too cute.

An Alternate Attraction by pj Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 486]
Summary: COMPLETE! Spike makes a wish that inadvertently sends Buffy into a world where vampires are good and humans are evil. With her whole life turned upside down and a certain new feeling she can’t deny, she must find her way back to the real world. Will she be able to get out without losing her heart to the one person she hates or will she be able to get out at all?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88063
[Report This] Published: 01/03/2005 Updated: 12/18/2005
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Date: 01/03/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Spike's Wish...Gone Wrong

Hi there again. Already reviewed your story at the other archive, just thought this way if you'd need any help or support you'd have a way to contact me. Yup, I know, I'd REALLY like to see more of your story ;-)

Author's Response: ii love that you reviewed here too haha, it does inspire me to keep going, because im battling the second chapter right now. thanks so much!

Reviewer: Diabola Signed
Date: 01/04/2005 Title: Chapter 2: What Is This Place?

You know, it's funny, but this world you are creating doesn't sound all that crazy to me. Who say's it wouldn't be like this if there were more vampires than humans in the world? Even the not eating humans makes sense - all those vamps can't very well live on the blood of only a few humans, and once used to animal-blood it's only natural they'd prefere that taste. Ops, sorry. This should be a review, not me rambling on.. *lol* The story is getting even more interesting, I wonder what you have planned for Angel. Can't wait for more :-)

Author's Response: rambling is totally acceptable! :) I'm really glad you see the vision! haha how corny. I think its logical but I understand it might be tough for some readers to see it when they don't know my thought process. I don't want to theorize too much with you at this pt because maybe that should be the fic's job, but the world is meant to broaden Buffy's perspectives. And maybe our own too ;) Thanks for reviewing again! Please continue that! lol

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Date: 01/11/2005 Title: Chapter 5: New Players

Hmmm, getting interesting. Love how you point out Buffy's doubts of her previous behaviour. And adding a new player instad of the world being simply reversed adds more suspense. Now we all have to wait to figure out what Leanna is up to. Can't wait to see what you have in mind with her...

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the new character idea :) Her being there is suppose to be like Riley to Buffy, but I changed her personality to be easier to hate - plus I didn't want to use Dru or Harmony. Thanks for reviewing again!!

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Date: 01/07/2005 Title: None

Ooh, interesting beginning. Can barely wait to see where you are leading us this time.

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Date: 01/08/2005 Title: None

Wow, for someone who doesn't react to anything anymore that was sure a big step, getting all the medical stuff and tending to poor sick Spikey. He really must have made an impression on her with his being different. This is really becoming intersting. And I already hate the others ;-)

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Date: 01/20/2005 Title: None

Huhu *waves*, nice to see you here! Hmm, seeing Axis here has me wondering if I should read it again. Just on principle ;-) That'd make it how often? 3 or 4? I believe I forgot *lol* Hey everyone who didn't read it yet but checks the revs: Read it, it's really great :-)

Author's Response: Thankyou Dia...wow didn't realise you had read it THAT many times!! **blushes**

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Date: 01/20/2005 Title: None

Still wishing it had gone this way on the show *sigh* Nice one sweetie, but then you know that already ;-) There, now the depressing zero is gone...

Author's Response: LOL..Thanx Dia..you're a doll. And not in the headless and/or blidfolded kinda way LOL...

Summary: Altered events of Season 2. Due to circumstances beyond her control, Buffy finds herself at an 80's Flashback night club where she finds the Billy Idol impersonator a bit, uh, familiar. This is a Spuffy vampire/slayer fic, not all-human.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44987
[Report This] Published: 02/03/2005 Updated: 04/07/2005
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Date: 02/03/2005 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Oh wow, that one is hot BSB! Very interesting idea too, can't wait to find out where you'll go with it. So it's a resounding YES to the question whether to continue it or not :-) Ok, you managed to describe Spike's stage-act so vividly that I think I might want to take a showe now ;-) (cold one, hehe)

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Date: 02/11/2005 Title: Chapter 9: chapter 9

Hehe, you have Xander ogeling Spike, that's so cool. The Scoobs are going to blow a fuse when they readlize who they are admiring so openly there *smirk*. Can't wait to see whats going to happen when Buffy gives in. The whole thing is so cute. Lovely! And to think that Spike brought the Bronze *lol*. Pets BSB's plot-bunny - thanks cutie, for convincing her to let you out.

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Date: 02/17/2005 Title: Chapter 12: chapter 12

Go you with the updatey goodness BSB! Love the dedicating a song to Angelus idea. Making Angel feel bad is always a good thing ;-) And Buffy's relevations? Good for her to realize that nobody needs his broody-ness making ones life miserable. With Spike there is way more fun to be had. You are so amazing with finding exactly the right songs for everything Spike wants to say. "Never the brightest one, even Xander..." -- Oh so true! Hm, am in Xander bashing mood again, nothing new *smirk*. Lovely chapter - can't wait to find out just what Buffy and Spike are up to. (Yes, I do have some ideas to that, but still...)

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[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
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Date: 02/20/2005 Title: None

Very nice story so far. Love what you had Buffy say about the others always talking about redemption but not believeing in it. I felt that was true on the show already, but here it was glaring obvious. Same with the only seeing people like they want to see them. For a group of supposed friends, the Scoobs and the AI-gang where by far the blindest people as far as the true nature of their friends was concerned. No matter if they where willing to risk their lifes for each other, I wouldn't want to have friends like that. Happily anticipating the next chaper - and if you keep updating as amazingly fast as you usually do, I wont have to wait long :-)

Origins: Revelations by Niamh Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 2682]
Summary: This is a continuation of Origins, and picks up shortly after the end of the first book. What happens to everyone now that Willow is gone from Revello Drive and Angel knows? Winner, Best Spike Hero, Lost in Spike Awards, Round 5; Judge's Choice Winner, Lost in Spike Awards, Round 5; Runner-up, Best WIP, Blood Ties Awards, Round 1; Runner-up, Best Claiming, Lost in Spike Awards, Round 7, Winner, Best Written, Lost In Spike Awards, Round 7, Judge's Choice Award, Lost in Spike Awards, Round 7; Runner-up, Best Spike Characterization, Spuffy Awards, Round 8; Winner, Best Crossover, Love's Last Glimpse Award, Round 11. And one for me -- Runner-up, Best Author, Love's Last Glimpse Awards, Round 11. Winner: Best Original Use of a supporting character for Dawn, Round One, Fang Fetish Awards. Judge's Choice Winner for Round One, Fang Fetish Awards
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 322050
[Report This] Published: 03/12/2005 Updated: 05/30/2007
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Date: 03/26/2005 Title: Chapter 5: Last remaining light

Whoa, so freaking good! Great chapter! The Tara/Oz friendship is something I can really see happening. If not for the Willow-issue I could have seen them getting along even back in s4, what with their calmer and in some ways more mature natures. Spike trying to understand the workings of a human body is just sweet; and something I believe he would do. Dawn crushing on Wes is so cute. And she must be so squicked by the thought of ever having a crush on Spike! Don't even wanna think about having the hots for someone only to find out he's my dad. *shudder* Love the soul-losage after Connors birth. Don't get why that't didn't happen anyway, the curse was about perfect happiness; the show made it seem as if having an orgasm is the only way to be perfectly happy. That's pretty swallow, isn't it? As if Angel only cared about that. (Ok, I don't like him and believing that only supports the opinion I have of him; still, even I see that it wasn't really all that realistic...) Again, a really amazing chapter, looking forward to the next one. And to find out how Willow's sick spell is going to backfire ;-)

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Date: 05/07/2005 Title: Chapter 16: Coming in the air tonight

*lol*, nope, Giles isn't going to be a hurdle at all, is he? More like a possible solution :-) But it's in a way good to see Spike so worried about the watcher's reaction. The more he worries about that, the happier it'll make him once he finds out Giles is way ahead of them, 'cos his worrying means the man's oppinion matters to him. Love that Tara was able to do the ball-of-sunshine spell. Shows what an ignorant amateur Willow is, after all SHE messed up in a bit way when she tried her hands on that one. Buffy's thoughts about who she blames for Spike getting hurt were a great touch too. Can't wait to see what she's gonna do once she finds out who's really responsible for that. Somehow I doubt Willow is going to be back in their good graces anytime soon. Maybe never, would serve her right! Fab chapter! Take care not to hurt yourself if your arm is smarting again, let us wait a few days longer for an update if it helps. You getting better is more improtant! *hugs* dia

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie, glad you liked it. I don't think anyone's going to be happy about what Willow did.

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Date: 05/10/2005 Title: Chapter 17: The ragged edges of truth

Good chapter Nia. Like the way the turth came out. Much better than some planned and prepared meeting with a bunch of people who don't even belong there. - Yup, you've got it right, I don't think too highly of those so called Scoobie-meetings.
And the reactions were beautiful! Buffy really seems to be coming back to herself if the first thing she does is pout over Dawn not looking more like her :-)
Spike was great with her, but then, he always knew just how to handle Dawn...
Really good, looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks! No. . . no scoobie meetings -- coz really, they don't exist as a group anymore. . . but I know what you mean. Spike has the Summers girls all pegged -- and they've both got him wrapped around their fingers. . . And, yeah, Buffy's on the road to herself.

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Date: 06/20/2005 Title: Chapter 22: Tender looks becoming habit

Bit late but hey, better late than never, right?
Anyway, great chapter! Love that you found a middle-way with Dru there. By simply ignoring her as soon as Buffy arrived Spike made it nice and clear just who he cares about. And while it's always a great way to demonstrate ones feelings if the kill their formers; it somehow cheapens the whole thing as well. Killing an ex just to proove your feelings (like Spike planned in "Crush") doesn't exactly make you look good. It's different if it's for protection, but not to proove something.
Sweet scene with Giles and Anya. I really like those two, hope they won't have it too hard. Anya so deserves someone who doesn't treat her like all that matters is that she looks good on his arm - and that's the feeling I've been getting from Xander; like she's some sort of prestige-girlfriend - supposed to look nice and keep quiet.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Date: 07/19/2005 Title: Chapter 26: A soundless calm descends

Great chapter! Loved the scene with Buffy, Spike and Connor in bed. So funny...
Your description of Tara and Oz's relationship is very sweet and believable. I can really see those two as best friends and love the way you keep developing the situation.
Can't wait to see what they are going to do about Cordy. I wonder if she'll be herself should they manage to rescue her or if Angelus will have a second seer's sanity on his considence. As much as I despise him in both of his forms, I wonder if it wouldn't be worse for him to be souled up again and had to live with what he did. Looking forward to see where you are going with that...
Great job you did so far, looking forward to the next chapter.

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[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
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Date: 05/07/2005 Title: None

Wow, that's what I call a great fic! Love the way you jump between the characters and how their pain and desperation is so very obvious in their thoughts! I always had a thing for fics who show the not so good consequences the Slayer-spell might have had. I mean, there had to be a reason there was only one of them, how can you expect everything to be sunshine and roses after messing up the natural order in such a way? And this is one of the most interesting angles I've seen so far. Not to mention that I'd bet the guy talking to Buffy was none other that Riley, and I just love if he and his military conies are realized as the monsters they are. Poor Dawnie, having to live with the guilt of being the one to be responsible for their discovery. Can easily see how such an event might lead to her not speaking at all. She's still yound after all. I really liked Giles in this. And him dying with a smile on his face 'cos he managed to cheat the world a last time, yeah, can see that. Made me smile for him too. A last triumph... Ok, I've been rambling again, I tend to do that, sorry :-) -- Anyway, great fic and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I usually try to stay away from "head-hopping" - and to be honest when I started I was writing trying to figure who's POV I was going to stick with. While not technically "the thing to do" I finally just decided this was fanfic and for me first and other's enjoyment if they liked it and I would play a bit. If it begins to be confusing or people really don't like it - I may consider changing. So if it gets confusing by all means don't hesitate to say so. I still don't have a Beta, and must trust only the reviews to improve this thing. I am thick skinned when it comes to constructive criticism.

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Date: 05/07/2005 Title: None

Another great chapter. Can't believe I actually missed the announcement that there would be a HL crossover *shrugs* Oh well, at least that one of the few other fandoms I have at least some knowledge about. Not that I'd stop reading otherwise, but it helps. And Methos is a pretty interesting character, so there you go :-)
See you're looking for a beta. Can't help you myself sadly, since english isn't even my first language, but I can tell you that we have a pretty good beta-list over at the verse. The site itself features only bitey-fics and I don't know if you plan on that, but I'm sure even if you don't you should be able to find someone for betaing.
link: http://www.bringonthebloodshed.com/bloodshedverse/