So sad, i just hope they meet up again somehow.


Author's Response: They do! It\'s a 3 story series, all of which are finished :) The next fic is \'Coming Clean\', followed by \'Ball & Chain\'. Hope you like the rest of the trilogy! Thanks for reviewin\', Rose! *smoooch*

I feel i got to stick up not only for the uncut penis, but also the fact they are English. Theres nothing wrong with the uncut penis in fact it is and as it is more flexable and sensitive then they cut penis...well, lets just say uncut penises work in winderous ways a cut cannot.

Also as they are English, they'd most likely be uncut. Unless its for religious reason (jew, muslim) most UK males are as natural as they day they were born. We don't like cutting them up like the US.

We also like playing peak-a-boo with the head.

I feel that i have to point out that if Buffy and Spike continue on course to what i hope is a happy union down then line. Both Connor and Dawn would be come Brother and Sister in Law and if they continue on the suspected path the story is leading...they may not be related by blood but if Buffy and Spike and children and Dawn and Connor have children then they'd be both newfew/aunt and cousins to one another....

No the caps were not a mistake, and yes as i said, on the whole the story isn't bad at all of what i have read. Though i have chosen not to continue to read beyond the 5th chapter due to not being a fan of the whole step brothers and sisters (whether they are raised together or not, that still is what they are) getting together thing. Its not something i can just gloss over.

Does this have a sequel? Cos if not then it certainly deserves one.

It's a pretty spicy story none the less, but i really think it needs a sequel as the whole time throughout this story i was thinking 'It'd be funny if he actually took her suggestion that he could be a male stripper more seriously.


I just couldn't stop thinking what a transformation that would be.

So say it's like a year down the line...or at least he's turned 18 now and in college. Either Buffy chickened out and didn't call him back. Or she did and they continued the affair till Buffy found out he was 17 and that she was his first time and freaks and stops the affair and out of guilt tries harder to be a better wife to Riley who is the same old same old and doesn't change. Buffy tells him her real age (as a reason for them not to continue the affair and why it is wrong and so on)


Anyways as i said this is a year down the line or at least after he has turned 18. So Buffy and William haven't seen eachother for bit. Though they have thought of each other none stop since.


Anyways dispite the break up Will becomes more confident in himself, with others and with women. (This is all back story of what happens from when they break up to when they see each other again) Infact he has become the complete opposite of his shy clumsy self, though has kept the sweetness and adorability. Anyways either he loses his job or his job as a waiter simply means he's just scraping by in college.

Either way he DOES actually become a male exotic dancer, which gives him a good income and time to study maybe even take up some hobbies like marital arts or something. By this time he's bleached his hair and either wears contacts or has had eye surgery. (Still back story)

So the story begins with Buffy's mates who knows she's in a boring lifeless marriage with Riley encourage her out to a male dance club. Or maybe its one of her girlfriend’s hen party. So like it's Willow's hen party or Cordy's organised by Anya of course (cos of course it'd be Anya who orginises the hen party/or whatever occasion it is) at a male exotic dance club. And the club's star dancer 'Spike' is the final dancer of the night.

Spike comes on, he doesn't she Buffy instantly, but when Buffy sees him at first she isn't to sure its him, she recognises his body the hair throws her off. But as soon as their eyes meet and they see each other (for the first time since the breakup) Buffy knows for sure its him and vice versa. And the story carries on from there.

Of course they hook up eventually in secret, her girlfriends eventually find out also. She tells them after much prodding ans speculation from Anya mostly. They all keep it secret from Riley and even encourage and praise Buffy's affair.


Maybe something happens, like Riley finds out somehow. Not sure how he would though. Bur by this time maybe Buffy has had enough of everything he has put her through and isn't as scared as she once was about ending her marriage with him. And not for William but for herself. Buffy is still able to maintain a good relationship with both Dawn and Andrew though Riley tries to make it as difficult as possible.

Spike and Buffy by the end of the story are together. Spike still dances at the club (as its good money) which though at first Buffy is apprehensive about but eventually is cool with as she knows he's really dancing for her and is happy for him the flaunt what he's got and making woman drool knowing he's all hers to take home.


As i said before i couldn’t stop thinking bout the possibility of a sequel as it is almost begging for one.


Either way it was a pretty good read.


Author's Response: Hi Rose! Can I just say Wow? Your ideas for a sequel are awesome! I've always wanted to do a sequel to this story, I just didn't have the time to get to it - there are a few other sequels I need to write in the queue lol I did write a little bit of it and made some notes. But what you came up with is better than what I had planned! lol You have to be an author too, the ideas you had are too good for you not to be a writer :) Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, and I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! *hugs*