This is a really interesting chapter! Introducing all of these women with their own interests and agendas is a very neat twist. The Cordelia angle works well, although it does make me want to hiss and spit - so you must have done a good job writing her. I'm glad you identified the two women from the earlier chapter in the last book, that had me confused. Of course, all you are doing with this chapter is cranking up the anxiety - good job!!

Author's Response: thanks for the review