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Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 04:28 pm Title: Prologue

Wonderful start my heart goes out to Alyssa already

Reviewer: Shady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: Prologue

aww poor Alyssa...rejected! *sniff*

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: Prologue

Interesting start - I think Alyssa is the one Spike will bring to Buffy later?

Reviewer: Ghostreviewer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Prologue

Nice start. I'll be interested to see where this goes and what is so different about the girl! ;) I liked how you incorporated Dawn into it as well, so many writers find her hard to write or just don't write her well. Good luck with the rest of the story!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Prologue

this is a good start, hope you have more soon!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Prologue

good so far

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