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Reviewer: Cara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter 3

This is a really great story, hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

I wonder...is Alyssa going to create problems?

Reviewer: trish Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter 2

this is great

Reviewer: spikes_niblet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like how this is going so far and cannot wait to see what is really going on with the girl.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like a very good beginning. I really hope you keep this story going. I like the idea of the Scoobies excepting Spike. I can only imagine the trama that Spike suffered after seeing Xander's ass. lol

Reviewer: Ghostreviewer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Prologue

Nice start. I'll be interested to see where this goes and what is so different about the girl! ;) I liked how you incorporated Dawn into it as well, so many writers find her hard to write or just don't write her well. Good luck with the rest of the story!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Prologue

this is a good start, hope you have more soon!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Prologue

good so far

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