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Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

I think I've commented before about your mixed tenses in your paragraphs. Your stories are decent, but could be much better if you had a beta to help with that. Your present and past tense use in the same sentence draws away from the story, and I always feel like I'm reading high-school fic. I don't want to feel that way. You should seriously visit the beta section of this forum or of the BS Central forum. Your writing would benefit greatly from it.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

Fluffy but good, don't worry. :) And a big present Buffy gave Spike in return.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! CAn't wait for more as soon as you can update. Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

good chapter but i thought that the love scene could have been a little more longer and more descriptive

Author's Response: It could have, but I was trying to keep it nice and clean. Since this story's not NC-17 or anything. It was just supposed to be something short and sweet. I always suck at love scenes anyway and I'm really bad with details. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aww. Good chapter.

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