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Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 12:16 am Title: It Doesn't Matter

read the entire story up to now today it was great...i can only hope for more soon (cough cough)....i know there was a warning for it and all but i still kinda hope the best for dawn.. geez, i am such a loser. but back to the subject at hand... More plz, soon!!!

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: It Doesn't Matter

So relieved you have updated since this perfectly evil cliffhanger!

I have to say it, when I read what Dawn has endured, I thought "Shit" (sorry to be crude) 5 times (sorry to be crude n° 2). When I read her end, I thought "Oh God NO!". Yeah, until the end, I have kept some hope, it seems. Despite your note.

An angel has gone. Fulfill her last wish, what I say, her last will: make them pay.

It seems that Ted will never see again the light of day and that Joyce will be put away for 15-20. With Dawn's dead, it could be worse for them, if the story takes place in a state which practices the death penalty...

I'm curious to see how Joyce will react. Will she feel remorses, beg for forgiveness? Or stay an egoist and stupid bitch?

And I hope that Ted will not plead the insanity for all what he did. He deserves hell on earth now, the real Hell after.

You say it will be another chapter and an epilogue, or only an epilogue. I think the story deserves one chapter and an epilogue. In the chapter: bad people are punished. In the epilogue, hope and light for Buffy. The girl deserves at least all an epilogue of peaceful happiness. But you stay the boss...

Wait and see...

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 03:21 am Title: It Doesn't Matter

I don't care how yo give it to me, just give it soon please.

Reviewer: Luvver21 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 02:57 am Title: It Doesn't Matter

Ok, Just have to say, THAT WAS MEAN! I really, really hope you update soon. This is getting really good. I liked how you made Ted the bad guy, and Hank the good guy even though i personally don't like Hank but it's good to see him in a better light. Please update soon!!!

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