Date: 11/02/2012 - 07:36 am Title: 12
Cute story. A bit dark, but really goes chipper at the end. Writing could be tightened up; drag a bit and is repetitive in some spots. Also some mistakes (typos, grammar, cofusing sentences, wrong words used, etc.) could use fixing, too.
Date: 09/27/2009 - 05:31 am Title: 12
I wanted to let you know, I read this story a few years ago and really liked it. I have been looking for it for a while now and finally found it. Still LIKE it!!! Thank you so much for the wonderful fic!!!
Date: 01/21/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: 12
After my surgery, this was the first story I seeked to see if you had finished it. I am happy with the development of the story. You made me shed a tear for Willow and brought a smile to lips when Spike and Buffy finally came together. I love it.
Date: 01/14/2006 - 04:11 pm Title: 12
Loved it. Great, wonderful, superb job. Bravo.
Date: 01/13/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: 12
I loved the end :) And if you write a sequel I wouldn't mind reading.. in the future, when you have time :)
Date: 01/13/2006 - 03:57 am Title: 12
I really liked the way you developed this story.
Great ending!
spuf