Date: 01/08/2006 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
i am so dying to read what happens between spike and buffy!!! i love that you cut it off there,but i really really can't wait to read more!!! please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I think you're the only one liking my cliffhanger *lol* I will update as soon as I can
Date: 01/08/2006 - 01:10 am Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Terrific job so far, although this was my least favorite chapter. It's hard to redo episode scenes in a way that makes them fresh. I am looking forward to when you move away from the script. again to more original stuff.
Author's Response: I have to say I feel the same way you do. I find it hard to make someone else's word my one. But it's hard to compete with the original dialogue in BtVS and I decided to do it this way. But don't worry, it will soon turn out more AU and less real script. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 01/07/2006 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Very interesting having them meet at the school instead of the Bronze. Can't wait to read what is next.
Author's Response: I couldn't really have them meet at the Bronze since Spike would then see her first. I wanted to go with the mutual surprise again. I'm glad you find it interesting!
Date: 01/07/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Yes darling..you are evil for leaving off like that.. But I'm counting on you to make it all better by updating soon.LOL
I can't wait to see how Buffy and Spike react to one another..and when Spike realizes that Buffy is the slayer..hehe Is he gonna' try to kill Buffy anyway?
Great chappy!
Author's Response: Oh, I can't tell you how Spike is going to react, it will spoil the fun of reading the next chapter..hehe But I'm glad you liked this one and I will update as soon as I'm satisfied with chapter 5
Date: 01/07/2006 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Hee-Hee...
I really like the way this story goes. There aren't many I-met-you-before-you-became-the-Slayer stories around so this one is a breathe of fresh air.
Plus, they're so cute.
So keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks kellie, I think that there should be more pre-slayer fics out there too. Spike has always been in Angel's shadow, now I get to say 'he met her first!' Did I make any sense? Hopefully it will. Thank you for letting me know what you think, and aren't Spike and Buffy always cute? ; ) *lol*
Date: 01/07/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
more please and soon
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can
Date: 01/07/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
now the fun really begins.
Author's Response: It does, they've met again and what could possibly happen? Read and find out
Date: 01/07/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Nooooo keep going its really good
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!
Date: 01/07/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
love the story. HATE the cliff hanger. Please update soon and often looking forward to the rest of this story.
Author's Response: I hate cliffhangers too, but I just had to end it there, sorry. Thank you bernedette for giving me a review
Date: 01/07/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Need more--please??
Author's Response: You'l get more too, I'll update soon, promise
Date: 01/07/2006 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
And they finally meet. Can't wait to see how they react to seeing one another again and knowing who the other really is.
~Diana
Author's Response: Yep, they've met now. So what will happen? Well you just gotta read to find out
Date: 01/07/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
great chapter
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 01/07/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Well, the truth is out, now!
Author's Response: Yep! that it is
Date: 01/07/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
The best part was the end of the chapter ;-) Even if it had the cliffhanger. I wished I had seen their faces if the recognized one another :)
Author's Response: Yeah, me too. I know this chapter is kind of boring, but I had to introduce the characters. The next one will be spuffy I promise
Date: 01/07/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Uhm.... HELLO?!
You can't leave it like this! I need more!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
I really love this story, please keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about the cliff-hanger! The chapter was getting too long, and I had to cut it there. But I promise there will be another one up soon. Thanks for the review
Date: 01/07/2006 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter Four - New Arrivals, Old Enemies
Weeeee!! Can't wait for the evilness/action that is to come! ;) Take your own sweet time, honey. :D
Author's Response: You're the best Lux, and yes I will take my time, gonna need it with the next one