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Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter One - Who Are You?

are you sure English isn't your first language?
cause you had me fooled. this was great! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you ella for giving me a review, and yes I'm quite sure, I'm 100% swedish *lol*

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

great chapter

Author's Response: thanks :D

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

Mmm so they met again indeed. Buffy is a slayer now (she was able to open the door) but Spike didn't sense her. Maybe because he knew her before? Looking forward to the next part. I think Buffy will be able to get out there soon (fooling them) :)

Author's Response: I think he should have been able to sense her as well, but since Spike didn't sense that Dana was a slayer i Ats "damage" I let it slide. Thank you for another review!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

Great chapter. I really like your story and anxiously look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you Bridget!

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

Wow! That was some twist. I love how you're blending the things we know happened before in buffy's life with the fact that Spike is in her life now. Not sure if that made sense, but all in all it means that I'm loving your story and can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! And I did understand what you meant, although it isn't something I have thought about myself. Thank you fr letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

Yay sweetie you got your chapter up! ;) I'm waiting with the rest of us here with bated breath for the next chapter, so update soon!

Author's Response: Yep I did! And that's all because of you! :D I'm looking through the fourth chapter now, I will e-mail it to you as soon as I'm done, so I promise you won't have to wait long.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

im SOO loving this story!!!!! please post one more chapter today!!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :D But unfortunately I'm still writing the next chapter and my beta has to take a look at it before I post. Hopefully it will be up sometime tomorrow. I hope you can wait

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

Wow..didn't expect that ..Buffy in the mental institution! I know in BTVS she talked about spending time in one...so that's cool how you chose that moment in time to let her and Spike run into one another. Also..her being able to break open the locked door..an early display of slayer strength?

Great update, Thanks!

Author's Response: I just love the episode "Normal Again" in s6, and I thought the mental institution was a great place to set a chapter. And yes Buffy has slayer strength at this time, as you've noticed. Thank you Dani for reviewing!

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter Three – Insanity

You actually didn't do too badly on credibility...By keeping the focus on the conversation between Spike and Buffy (which I think you handled well) The few grammar errors you were making are disappearing, so, all in all...fine job.

Author's Response: Thank you for giving me your opinion! I really like your reviews, not just a 'great chapter' like many people says, which really doesn't say much. Please continue to criticize my work. It helps a lot

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

I LOVE this story and your english seems fine to me.... i just wish you would update sooner so i can see what happens LOL

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! And I've got a beta now so my english should be even better *yay!* I will try and update as soon as I can, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter One - Who Are You?

God i love your story lol this is one of the better and more thought about plots i have had the chance at looking at, well i hope you will update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like my plot, although this is just the beginning... hehe *eviil* I'll hope you'll continue reading and I promise I will update as soon as possible

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

great update

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

Uh-huh.. the day after and Spike caught Buffy staring ;-) Spike had some points.. Buffy should ask Hank but she was too hurt. ... So Buffy is leaving now. Wonder how they'll meet again (when Buffy is older?) :)

Author's Response: Yep, lots of staring (who wouldn't with Spike in their bed?) And oh yeah, they are going to meet again you'll find out when and where soon enough...

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

another great chapter. You are doing fine. I am really enjoying this story. Please update soon and often

Author's Response: I'm glad you are still enjoying my story, and kind of relieved to hear I'm doing fine :) Thank you for letting me know what you think

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

*LOL* Oh God I love your story. ;) Please do continue! I can't wait to see what Spike decides to do with Buffy.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! What he's gonna do with Buffy? Well, you just gotta wait and see ;) I will update soon

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

Oh that was a great read! Hope you update with more soon! : D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

i can't wait to read more of your story and find out what happens when spike and buffy meet when she's 17 or whatever. please update soon!!1??? i am dying to read more!!

Author's Response: Oh don't die please! :P I want you to continue to read my story, I'm so happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

Good chapter. It will be interesting to read how Buffy and Spike will react when they meet years later. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Oh it won't be years, I promise, more like months :D I will update as soon as possible. Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

nice chappy. should make them meeting again interesting.

Author's Response: Oh I hope you're gonna find it interesting :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

Fine chapter which continues to hold my interest in your story. Thank you.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I will try to keep you intrested then! Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:17 pm Title: Chapter Two - Surprises, Misunderstandings and a Corpse in the Bathtub

Very nice start of the story. I can´t wait for them to meet again and for all the other things that are going to happen. Update soon please!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Yes they are going to meet again, otherwise it wouldn't be spuffy would it? ;) I hope you're going to like the continuation. I will try and update soon

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter One - Who Are You?

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter One - Who Are You?

good so far

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter One - Who Are You?

I applaud your efforts. You've got a fine start on this story. There are a few awkward phrases, but if you continue I am sure they will start smoothing out. a beta would probably help a lot. I'll be watching for updates.

Author's Response: Yes I'm sure a beta would help me pou a lot, are looking for one right now so I'll hope I'll make not as many mistakes in the future. Thank you for reading and reviewing! It is always helpful :)

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2006 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter One - Who Are You?

Oh, definitely not complaining. This is very good, I'd love to read more. I loved the interaction between Buffy and Spike and how he felt so confuzzled maybe? Over the reactions she got from him. More, please?

Author's Response: Always fun to write the interaction between Buffy and Spike. I'm glad you liked my story. I promise there will be more :D

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