i really liked that you made this chapter a funny one (except the murder). spike drunk is just comedy all around! i can't wait to read the next chapter! please update soon?

Author's Response: Thanks Jenny! Yeah, needed some comedy, I agree, don't wanna go too angsty. I hope I can make the next chap light too, but we'll see

Just read the reviews for this, see you didn't have to worry if it was funny or not. Almost all of the reviewers said if was (and they were absolutely right).

Author's Response: Thanks Fem, I guess you're right :P but I'm always nervous anyway

Funny stuff.

Sad about Jenny.

Author's Response: Glad you like. And yes, Jenny had to die sadly, but it was necessary for the story

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm totally hooked on this story!

Author's Response: Got you hooked, huh? *grins* Good. I'll update as soon as possible. I'm having easter holiday now, so hopefully I'll get some time to write. thank you for leaving a review

Loved the chapter. The image of Spike in game face with a milk moustache was very entertaining. I liked that they went on patrol together also. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it Jessica! Thank you for leaving a review!

Even without action I loved reading it. Loved Spike asking for marshmallows and not following Buffy with patrol but even doing it with her.

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten, I'm so glad you liked it! And you think I handled Spiek right, huh? Good to know :D

Now I was just thinking that Spike would make a good model for "Got milk?" ad. :P

You made it all your own, Nemo! This story is progressing in the right direction and it's all spuffy loving in the end. :)

*hugs* Take care!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about "got milk" too, didn't smg do one of those? They would look so cute together! *lol* Thanks you so much for the support Lux, *hugs* you're just too sweet!

I always liked the Big Bad Spike showing his human side...here in this chapter kinda like he did on BTVS...The visual of Spike sitting in Joyce's kitchen in game face with foam on his upper lip made me laugh. : )

Buffy and Spike were acting like a couple of nervouse teens dancing around each other..it was adorable! Great update hon : D

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! I think you catched what I was going for, a bit of Spike's human side, and a lot of nervousness. :P I'm glad you like and thanks for reviewing!

Really like the tentative nature of their feelings towards each other. You express it well.

Author's Response: Thank you! Tentative was the word. I'm glad you like, and think I'm doing well! :D

I thought there was a resemblance between the porch scene and this one. *LOL* I didn't mention it in our emails because the convo is different, and so is the circumstances. And Spike did not have a shotgun! ;)

Author's Response: *lol* No he didn't have a shotgun, wasn't on his way there to kill her, but a few lines are the same... I just love that scene so I stole it... I'm evil :P

More like still loving it. ; ) Please update soon. Can't wait to see how Joyce takes the news.

Author's Response: Aww thnak you! I'll try and update as soon as I can, and then you'll know everything about how Joyce takes the news

I really love how you are meshing the different scens from
different episodes together..It works really well..

I tried to reply to you at the first posting of your live journal..but I am getting an error. I just wanted to answer your question about whether I am a member of live journal..

I have actually only discovered fan fic in last few months. I'm still at the stage where I am reading everything that I can get my eyes on. Trying to work up enough nerve to actually try my hand at writting. I have a bunch of great ideas..just getting them into story form is a bit daunting. :D I may eventually join live journal though. I've been checking it out..At the very least, I could give someone that can really write some pretty good ideas~!




Author's Response: Thank you DaniD for your thoughts on my chap, it's always helpful! I'm a newbie when it comes to fanfic too, started reading less than a year ago, and started writing just this christmas. I know how scary it can be to actually start writing and post your work. If you ever work up that nerve and want to ramble about your ideas, just send me an email, I'd love to help out in any way that I can :) ~Nina

*gg* Buffy sooo loved to make Cordelia jealous :) And Spike enjoyed it a lot too as well as Buffy. Oh grap... Angelus killed Jenny? Bad. Till next time!

Author's Response: Yeah I think Buffy enjoyed making Cordelia jealous too. *lol* Who wouldn't? And with Spike of all people? ;D