Date: 09/09/2006 - 06:37 am Title: 10
Absolutely brilliant chapter! I love that the demon is rejoicing in Buffy's presence. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 09/09/2006 - 06:37 am Title: 10
Absolutely brilliant chapter! I love that the demon is rejoicing in Buffy's presence. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 08/20/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: 10
Absolutely, strangely, heart-rendingly lovely.
Date: 08/13/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: 10
"over my dead body" It is so good to read a riled and righteous slayer again.
Date: 06/12/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: 10
Wow. I love this chapter. Spike almost giving up, but Buffy proving she wouldn't let anything happen to him on her watch!
This is so enticing!
Lauren
Date: 06/10/2006 - 03:16 pm Title: 10
Sue, the doublespeak surrounding the hardware tickled me so much. Excellent dialogue. Solid chapter throughout. The character interaction is heartwrenching. I am thoroughly wrapped up in your story.
Date: 03/24/2006 - 09:32 am Title: 10
Great story!
That was all that was needed for a demon to fall in love, and a man to wonder if he could.
I love that last line. Aww!
Author's Response: Thank you! Am so happy that you're liking. Thanks for reviewing, hun. BFN
Date: 03/14/2006 - 07:31 am Title: 10
A great chapter in which they both ran, turned the corner - and met in the middle. Let the battle commence.
Author's Response: Thanks, sue! Battle on it's way - but not just yet! BFN
Date: 03/14/2006 - 06:49 am Title: 10
Well they've most of the main players have certainly declared their positions in this chapter haven't they? I can't wait to see what happens when Angel is added to the mix! 8-)
Author's Response: They certainly have, katakata. Angel wil be arriving in a few chapters but hope you'll find the wait worthwhile.
BFN
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:53 am Title: 10
absolutely loved it
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:02 am Title: 10
Whoa that was a dramatic flight into the wilds of Sunnydale! I am so glad the showdown ended peaceably. I wonder what she will say to Angel and how Spike will prep her. Good chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Burnz! So glad you liked and hope the next chappie gains your approval too, hun. BFN
Date: 03/14/2006 - 12:18 am Title: 10
That's the one bad thing about reading this all at once...now I really, really, really like it and I won't be able to read the next update :(
I have to go out of town on Friday and I won't be back til some time around the 28th--that's not fair :(
But then I just possibly get two, so I guess that can be good...I guess ;)
Author's Response: Probably won't be getting two, Suzee, but at tleast there's one waiting for you on your return. Thanks for all the reviews, you're a doll! BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: 10
The story is great it keeps getting better.
Author's Response: Thanks, Stef! That is good to know and means a lot. I rely on folk to be a lot more unbiased than I can be - for obvious reasons! BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: 10
I just love this. I look forward to every update. The confrontation with Angel should be interesting to say the least.
Author's Response: Thank you, Carol! I am so happy that you are enjoying. Don't hold your breath just yet waiting for the confrontation. BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:59 pm Title: 10
Yay! Very enjoyable chapter. Is she going to call up Angel and tell him to go to hell and never show his face near her again? That would be nice.
Author's Response: Thanks, kim! You wish! Am afraid you'll just have to wait...and wait some more to find out! BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: 10
Yep...He ran.
But where the hell did he think he was going to go?Guess anywhere Angel is not, hunh?
I like how you have matured Buffy for this story. She is a much wiser, slayer here. You can really read the maturity in the way she thinks and reacts to things. Thank goodness for Spike's sake..
Can't wait to see what happens next...good update! : D
Author's Response: Thanks, DaniD! I don't think Spike was thinking - a problem he has at times!
Buffy has spent a lot of alone time contemplating her navel - and other stuff . She lives in a world where she hasn't been the center of anyone's universe for a while, poor lass.
Hope you enjoy the next bit. Hugs, sweetie.
Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: 10
You story scares me. I fear for Spike and Buffy. What will happen to them.
Author's Response: Be brave, Lynda! Times may well be/get hard but someone is waving a candle at the end of the tunnel. BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: 10
That was wonderful, this is a wonderfully writen story, excellent plot and just beautiful ....
Author's Response: Thankk you! Warms the cockles of me 'eart that you are liking so much. Bye, sweetie.
Date: 03/13/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: 10
Great story! Read it all in one sitting today can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you, Karma! Am so glad you've started to read and hope you enjoy the update I've just posted. BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 06:57 pm Title: 10
wow. cant' wait to see that confrontation. is giles going to be okay. and will buffy suceed with taking out the whole operation. more soon please
Author's Response: Hi, daisy! Things will happen at their own sweet pace (I've really tried to cut to the chase but it just don't wanna rush!) . You'll get answers eventually - I hope!
More next Monday (figners crossed) and thanks for reviewing, hun. BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 06:45 pm Title: 10
Not usually a fan of "slave" fics; but this one is simply enthralling. Wow! Great writing, compelling story, fascinating dystopic vision of what might have been; had the initiative won.
Did I say "wow"?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking. More differences for you next chapter that I hope you will enjoy. *grins* BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: 10
I enjoyed the tension of the chase and Spike's observations of your demon-lite Sunnydale. The changes The Initiative has wrought would certainly appeal to city planners. Spike and Buffy's feelings of desperation during the pursuit were nicely realized, and Spike's role playing to get staked was vividly written. Angel's call was an excellent plot device to bring emotions to a head. I'm looking forward to the arrival of Angel.
Author's Response: Thank you! I suppose things could have gone more slowly...in a nursing home, but things were bound to start happening on the hellmouth. Angel arrival not imminent just yet - but soon. *grins*
Thanks for your review. Much appreciated, hun. BFN
Date: 03/13/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: 10
loved it was happy to read the answer i wanted for buffy to tell spike .can t wait for next monday for the next chapter thank you great read maggie
Author's Response: Thank you, maggie! Thought this chapter might make you a bit happier! BFN, sweetie.
Date: 03/13/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: 10
really love this fic it has so many cool elements going for it I hope you add more soon :)
4 stars
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're liking and I try to update every Monday. Hop you pop by again. BFN