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Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2004 - 09:28 pm Title: chapter one

Really great intro....looking forward to chapter 2!

Reviewer: sluggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2004 - 05:33 pm Title: chapter one

I like the set up as well and the way you ended the first chapter. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: moxie:-)) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2004 - 09:31 am Title: chapter one

Intriguing start with good character set ups - and I liked the end of the chapter that just makes you want to read more!

Author's Response: Oooh dear...your reading this? hehe excitment. Thank you very much for your review, keeps me goin!! : ) Hey...when are you gonna write us up another wonderful story?

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