Reviewer: dom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: chapter 8
Date: 08/02/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: chapter 8
i really really really like this story but you have to update more im all edgy waiting for the next part of this
awesome story
Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: chapter 8
Date: 07/02/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: chapter 8
Uh-huh.. when it did looking good before it got now worse! Till next chapter :)
Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: chapter 8
Date: 07/02/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: chapter 8
Whoa! The adventure really took a dangerous turn. The sacrificial alter is so not of the good, and the God, King Liama twist was very unexpected. I can't wait to learn more about how this new development is gonna effect our favorite family and their friends. Excellent chapter!