Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Beginings
OK..this is a very confusing story chock full of bad grammar and lots of spelling mistakes...however if you fix that maybe it might read a bit better and be more entertaining..
Date: 04/29/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Beginings
Very interesting...i definately like it so far, cant wait for an update.
Date: 04/19/2006 - 02:28 pm Title: Beginings
Okay, I liked the sumary and I like the idea behind the story but I found the chapter really,really confusing. Sorry!
Date: 04/18/2006 - 04:19 am Title: Beginings
little groupies indeed! hopefully spike will kick angel's ass!!! ha! the hair gel commercial deserves it! please, don't make buffy too much of a bitch? PLEASE, UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!
Date: 04/18/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Beginings
good so far
Date: 04/18/2006 - 02:24 am Title: Beginings
I'm sorry, but i REALLY dont get any of this. :|
Date: 04/18/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Beginings
To be honest I'm just utterly confused. Pretty much about everything. Cuz at first it sounds like Angel and Wes are brothers and then I don't understand how they're all in foster care. So yeah other than the confusion I think you have an interesting idea just need to explain things more.
Date: 04/17/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Beginings
Ok I already read the first few chapters of this on Yahoo Groups: Dangerous 8. And I told you then that I liked it. So that still holds true here. I very happy that you are now writing here.