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Reviewer: Serinah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: City of Angels
Date: 07/10/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: City of Angels
ouch. very impressive description of a battle in the 2nd chptr. the dust through Angel's eyes is magnificent!!
Author's Response: Oh! Many thanks :) I appreciate that.
Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: City of Angels
Date: 05/31/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: City of Angels
Ah, the big fight.. Angel was a fool to try to take the Black Thorne out without help (except his few friends). And Spike died too (I know there is a sequel so I'm calm). ;)
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 10:17 am Title: City of Angels
Date: 05/31/2006 - 10:17 am Title: City of Angels
Intense chapter!!
Reviewer: Opal Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 02:14 am Title: City of Angels
Date: 05/31/2006 - 02:14 am Title: City of Angels
Great writing, especially the imagery of Angel seeing just the dust before he disappeared into the sewers
Author's Response: Thank you, Opal. I seriously considered cutting that bit. Glad I didn't now :)
Reviewer: theslayer19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: City of Angels
Date: 05/30/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: City of Angels
This one breaks my heart. But I know great things are to come!!!