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Date: 06/18/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Triumvirate

Uh-huh.. when the thunderstorm comes nearer I have to go.. okay, reads on: Loved the dressing up too :) Oh my, it was Buffy (more Willow) doing the spell for the slayers that made all possible.. ~ And Maya didn't spill the truth. I hope the information Angel had were real and not special ones made for Buffy and Co. from W&H.

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Date: 06/18/2006 - 04:57 pm Title: In Between

And Willow had a vision... Tara was there. She couldn't go through the deeper well first as if someone was preventing her to do it. The rose.. what does that mean? Is it for Buffy? A missing link hmmm.

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Date: 06/18/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Demons at the Door

Seems as if Andrew doesn't have much luck with his girlfriend either. But now they got an invitation even if Andrew lost his watch. ~ Yeah, Willow's spell. It didn't bring her only Slayer-Kennedy .. the girls are in danger too with this super-vamps.

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Date: 06/18/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: Fight the Fight

I think Buffy knows that Kennedy can get dangerous. Oh that's bad: these vampires were as strong as Angel was. So it seems it not an Angel think, it goes for all vampires. That's even worse. But they won, for now. And William saw himself for what he is the first time *sigh*. But alcohol having no effect on him? Poor one; he'll miss it.

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Date: 06/18/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: A Hole in the World

Loved Andrew mentioning Mulder.. he always talked about government conspiracies :) And Xander is eager to see Maya, huh? And some things (things to do, tasks) are solved by time. Like bringing the book back to Sunnydale High library. ;-) And it seems Maya was glad to see Xander too. Yet she has a big secret.. ~ Oh.. Faith may have gotten the information but now she and Wood are in deep trouble.

Author's Response: I always thought of Andrew as one of the Lone Gunmen from X-Files!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2006 - 11:22 am Title: Epilogue

Okay...just read those last chapters in one shot...wow, you really ramped up the action. The tension. I've hardly dared to breathe in spots.

I wanted to hold out hope that Angel really would off himself for the good of the world in the end, and you made it happen. He might not have been sure what he would do until that very last moment with Buffy, but he did it.

Loved that you made Morna special. I had a feeling she would be, somehow, but how it came about was awesome.

I'm so not with the chasing into Hell plan, but I understand why he needs to do it. And Faith, too. Not sure why Oz wants to. Anjelica's finding her own way as a Slayer. Willow...well, I guess it's about Kennedy, and keeping the others alive.

No more vampires on the entire Earth...wow...that's a heady thought. Poor Dru. She didn't get a say in her own destiny. Wonder where Angel's Shanshu will have him end up?

Dawn and Connor, sittin' in a tree...LOL...thought Connor wanted a chance at life, and more of Dawn? I don't think she's going to be giving Andrew a shot.

Is there a 3rd part to this saga? You certainly left things to consider for the future. Baby raising, Slayer re-building, Maya and Xander's budding romance, the trip to Hell....

Thanks for a gripping story, and a hell of a ride.

Author's Response: Hi Kim! I'm so happy that you liked it. I do have a 3rd part, which I'll begin posting soon. And I hope you like that part too. Thanks again for reading and for such awesome input.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2006 - 05:49 am Title: Wake

You really like making my head spin! Now, he's a golem again??? But, But, But.....the heartbeat, and the breathing, and stuff....and I certainly wouldn't think a golem would be capable of impregnating someone.

Crap, crap, crap! Why are the good guys always so slow to come to the right conclusions??! (Especially Buffy)

Yay, Lorne. About time you got off your butt and stopped hiding. You're better than that. Love that he has a screenshot of Fred on his phone.

Willow and Amy came to a stalemate, because the sun came out. Really wanted to see her die.

Buffy's been underestimating Thellian the whole time, thinking of him as just another vampire. 2000 years old!! He's going to be the most adaptable sort ever! He'd have to be an idiot to leave himself vulnerable to attack. And gee, wasn't Lalaine uncomfortable! Totally makes sense that they're Boadicea's daughters.

Yay for Giles being awake - he's not going to be happy about all he's missed. Buffy was stupid to leave the hospital. William had just warned her in the dream that Angel couldn't be trusted.

Instant Connor-Dawn sparkage, eh? She and Andrew have the funniest relationship. Really enjoying that. Maya's been blending in quick, too.

I'm going to be on pins and needles until you put up more!



Author's Response: Hey Kim! William is a golem ... he's a construct made flesh by the Nephillim. He's human in all aspects, except for the potency of his blood. In a way, he's like Dawn as the Key... I'll be posting more soon. You read very fast and give excellent feedback :) Thanks ever so for that.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2006 - 12:01 am Title: Regrets

Angel, you idiot. Does he ever freakin' learn?? And now they're making him choose between Buffy and Connor. Yeah, that's going to go well. Drogyn all over again. Ultimately, that sacrifice meant nothing.

But at least if you take out the vampire line, Spike won't be effected anymore. Good detail, remembering that he would be a virgin like this. That body, from the Sisters, had never had sex.

Extra special baby. Yay!! Except that this comes down to either Angel's blood, or the child's. Yeah, not particularly liking those odds.

Poor Kennedy...she didn't quite deserve this, though her jealousy led her there.

Maya will come around. It's just a lot to process. Ease her in, when you can.

Poor Giles. I hope he can speak. Willow needs to hurry back and call Connor. They need to know what Dagger Angel is carrying.

Dawn's brilliance grows all the time. She's not even 18, yet, and she's shown tremendous aptitude.

Boy, is Amy icky. I can't wait for someone to end her once and for all. Stupid Willow and the de-ratting.

Author's Response: Poor Angel and poor Kennedy.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 09:30 pm Title: Duality

Whoa! Andrew!! The boy's certainly grown a pair.

Poor overwhelmed Maya...figured she was the Rose. Poor Giles...must tell the others soon. Even Kennedy...arrogant, but not evil...and she's in big trouble with Angel wanting to keep her.

Angel's totally sunk, the idiot. It's so obvious he's being used! I'd bet a million that the "perfect happiness" he saw down there didn't have anything to do with Buffy's heaven. It's a vision created to rope him in. Idiot. And now he's handing over the blade to Thellian, except that Thellian already knew he had it. The wanker should have handed it over to Giles long ago.

So, will Willow find the postcard on the floor? Will they remove Angel's soul in order to save the world? Will Connor get fed up with worrying from afar and come back to help? And what does the Circle get to do, now that it's complete?

Author's Response: I agree with you, Kim. Angel's in so deep he can't see how deep he's in. The Buffy Heaven experience is something brokered entirely by W&H... More soon, I promise. And thank you , thank you for your support. Means the world to me.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 10:31 am Title: Triangle Part Three

Oh, geeze....oh.....geeze....

Amy...ha! Frickin' figures. Lust for power plus hatred of Willow. Poor Giles!!

Little Andrew...you tried, boy, but you underestimated your opponent. That brand needs to be shown right away.

About time Buffy started looking beyond herself. She was being a selfish bitch, again. And about time she said the words!! She's been holding out on him for months, for no good reason. About time she grew up and realized what she has.

Angel, you stupid dolt. Sold out Kennedy, which I just knew was going to happen. And now he's in some little dream world? Angel, the main reason you keep slipping is because you won't blend with the team. You could have friendship and acceptance, if you just accepted how things are.

Thank goodness Willow finally dumped Kennedy. Now, will Kennedy be dead? Turned? Made an example of so she can tell the others Angel betrayed the Slayers? Those poor, innocent baby Slayers...they never had a chance. How do you justify that in your soul, Angel, hmm?

I'm assuming the New York school has either been slaughtered by Amy, or they've all scattered into hiding after her attack.

Poor Lorne...all he wanted to be was a bartender. The conversation with William was really interesting. Confirmed the baby is pivotal. Confirmed Angel's betrayal. I'm sure he saw plenty of other little details.
William's got more than he ever thought possible, and he deserves to keep it.

And Yay!! Maya's finally free! Seems like a great match for Xander. I didn't miss the Luxe reference from Freddie, either. That guy really gets around.

I know there's more I could say, but I thinking this essay is long enough for now!

Author's Response: Kim, your feedback is always. It always makes me smile.

Reviewer: Elora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 06:02 am Title: Bloodlines

Your story is really interresting, with those multiples interactions. I also wanted to say that thanks to you I've discovered who was Boudicca. I didn't thought reading Buffy fanfiction could lead me to celtic history ^^. Again thanks a lot. Elora

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much. Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: theslayer19 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 03:48 am Title: Lost

I love Spike and Anya''s banter!!

And Buffy "Marzipan, you vamp.." lmao!

Wolfram and Hart are scary! They're kinda like the mob!!

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Date: 06/17/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Stasis

I love how Spike explains Vampires to Buffy! And the movie theatre bit..very funny!

And Maya Rose is such a great character! (and the name is awesome too!)

;D

Author's Response: hehe :) Thanks. Vampires are like fruit in Jello.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 12:21 am Title: Fight or Flight

Intense chapters!

Things are coming down to the wire for Angel....at least Connor's remaining wary, watchful...

Buffy, Buffy.....so fragile mentally. I have a feeling William's going to have to try to keep her from doing something stupid.

Dawn did great! Found new stuff and kept Andrew from fading away...wonderful kind of girl.

Angel...not sure what he's playing at with Kennedy. On the one hand, he encouraged her to get with the group, because they're the best and brightest...but on the other, he was playing to her...and Angel or Angelus, he's a master manipulator and strategist when it comes to messing with people. Everything that's happening with him is definitely making me uneasy.

Hmm, will Maya be okay after that spell she did? Still unconscious? Xander's making efforts lately, and it's good to see him move beyong the all-bitter party.

I'm starting to think of Morna as Drusilla, only much more fractured and stuck in her own mind. That trio gives me the heebie-jeebies.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: Wake Up Call

Fun at the start of the chapter. And then power outage and only in their home? And 'a hole in the world'? What happened? Ah, the deeper well. And now Angel is strong? Something isn't right here...

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Hunger

Kennedy is indeed power hungry.. to hungry for her own good. Buffy must be careful.

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Date: 06/16/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: Lost

Anya again in Spike's dream. Is she dangerous? ~ And Angel met someone who speaks with a french accent like Anya's guardian angel? If it is so Anya is in trouble. And if Angel thinks he's free from W&H.. he is wrong.

Author's Response: Yeah... I remember Wesley trying to free Lilah from W&H after she'd died. Once you get tangled up with them, it's practically impossible to get unsnared.

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: Bloodlines

Boadicea is a truly inspiring powerful woman and it works well that she would be a slayer. I'm concerned about Angel's relationship with Kennedy, especially considering that whole burning circle of the black thorn mark (dark mark like?) and the slayer killing blade. Another riveting chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! Boadicea is such an intriguing figure. And yeah, Angel's mark is very dark mark like :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Stasis

Loved the banter between Buffy and Spike. ~ I wonder if three will something important in the archive. ... ~ Maya is a riddle. She seems to dread the sunlight.. and who did sent the messages whom she did fear?

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: Circle

This is such a great story with a creative concept. I have no idea why you don't have 200 hundred glowing reviews by now. The characterizations are perferct the plot is interesting, the relationships between the characters are compelling. Just a fantastic story. Your hard work is truly appreciated.

Author's Response: hehe! Thanks, Elaine, for making my day. I appreciate your appreciation :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 08:00 pm Title: Family

Hehe.. and first Giles was so glad that all had fun; and then the ball collided with his head. He can be glad that his glasses survived :) ~ Thellian, Lalaine and Morna? Sounds like trouble. ~ So Angel is guarding the dagger.. but what if somebody gets Angel? *points to the other three* ~ The priestess mentioned unicorns? Then maybe it's Harmony, not Cordelia like I first thought. She dead in that timeline anyway.

Author's Response: Hey Cordykitten, thanks for the review. Poor Giles, hehe! I was always sad about Cordy dying in Angel. Didn't feel the character got a very fair break.

Reviewer: Drew Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:06 pm Title: Change

Twisting and turning...evil, foul-mouthed Kennedy needing her ass kicked...awesome chapters!

Author's Response: Man, I think you dislike Kennedy even more than me!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 07:49 am Title: Change

Angel's definitely being sucked in again...

Compound fracture for Andrew...poor boy...hopefully, Dawn can keep him going. She's really grown up.

Willow really needs to drop Kennedy once and for all. The girl has no redeeming qualities.

Faith is fighting with a juiced up Harmony...too bad the phone was disconnected.

Buffy and William having a baby...I was expecting that. I've noticed that they haven't been careful. Buffy never thought to be proactive about those things, and William wouldn't think of it at all since he's used to being a vampire for so long. Everything happens for a reason, though, so I'm sure it's a special baby.

Really got a thorough thing going, here.

Author's Response: Why thank ya, Kim. There's more on the way. I'm right with you on Kennedy... but I'm not through with her yet *rubs hands maniacally*

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 02:28 am Title: Tumble and Fall

Oh, no! Andrew!

Good thing, William, to keep an eye on Angel. He's known since Angel's plan that things could get very complicated.

The dagger just being in Angel's pocket is leeching Buffy's energy. He can't be anywhere near her with that thing. That's what Connor wanted to warn about. I'm taking it that Willow never saw the postcard before she left.

Poor Maya...stuck with a psychotic spirit ex-boyfriend. That spell she did was a doozy.

And Buffy still isn't giving herself over to the relationship. Geez, what does he have to do to be worthy of you not degrading what you have around others? Angel shouldn't matter anymore, like that. Your friends already know where you're standing on this, and some are even supportive, so there's no reason to act like you have a dirty secret anymore. Is this the relationship you really wanted, Wiliam?

Not sure, yet, how much Luxe is double-playing, and how much is Thellian's plan for Angel. Being the visionary, Thellian probably wants Angel to come over willingly. I'm already not liking that Angel hasn't told the others he has the Dagger.

I don't want Kennedy back! And what about Faith and Robin??

Author's Response: Kim, I love the way your mind works :) And I love reading your reviews. Thank you thank you so much.

Reviewer: emmee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2006 - 11:50 pm Title: Tumble and Fall

more more more more! i've said it before, i'll say it again... you're awesome. i know it's a lame word, especially since i like to consider myself writer also, but your writing inspires speechlessness which causes me to only be to able to use stupid, lame, simple words and descriptions. so more? when? thanks for the fantabulous story... it's always rewarding to find excellent fanfic... not good, not great, but excellent. with a side order of mondo marvelous! keep up the great work! emmee

Author's Response: oh my goodness, thanks Emmee!! I'm posting more tonight. I hope you continue to like it.

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