Reviews For Spike's Baby
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Reviewer: grammar nazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

you need another beta. You still have extreme grammatical issues, with both use of words and tenses. Half this chapter is in the present tense (s) and half is in the past tense (ed). And, you have serious issues with

Your, You're
Too, To
Their, They're and There

Look them up. Learn them. Use them correctly.

Also, some parts of your story are too British, like the doctor's surgery. We call that a doctor's office in the US. Also, a lounge is a living room, and mum is mom... Americanisms for American characters in America...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am not going to get into an argument with you but my Beta is from Australia and I am pretty sure that some of the words are different! At least you know what they mean! I will look into getting a grammer beta but I am very happy with the way my story is!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2007 - 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh, Buffy.. hoping she won't lose the baby.. Glad she and Spike had a little talk. And that Dru is not an X and a b*tch in this one.

Enjoying..

Author's Response: lol thanks, yeah well i like the dru/spike sibling relationship. Dru being good= great!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2007 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Things aren't going very well for Spike and Buffy. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: next chapter things will be looking up some. Thanks alot for the review it means alot to me!

Reviewer: spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, I just love this fic. And now I can't wait until next chapter! God, I'm gonna be thinking about this all day! Please, please update soon!

Author's Response: lol my next chapter is with my beta so hopefully it will be up soon! Thanks for the review it means alot to me!

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