Date: 09/20/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
i really like the story but why was it kinda like a total repeat of the past chap anyway update soon plz
Author's Response: uhm, I kinda messed up with the chapters plus I now have a beta, so I re-did the whole story, so the first chapter is actually different, and so is this chapter.
Date: 09/19/2007 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
hey i was reading the summary for this story and it sounded really interesting:).....you've got a really good start so far but i was wondering if you wanted me to beta it....just to expand on some things give it a little bit more detail.....i can email you this chapter if you want after i look at it.....:) i love the story so far but awesome job
Author's Response: Thank you so much for helping me! I love how you changed it, if you couldnt tell I am not much of a detail person. More of a person who is good at thinking of stories just not writing them lol!
Date: 09/18/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks :-D