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Reviewer: Linda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2008 - 09:48 pm Title: Emotions and break ups

it would make me every happy if you made riley a serial killer..... he seems to have that vibe about him!!

Really like it so far ...looking forward to an update!!

Author's Response: Lol, yes Riley does give off that vibe in my story. I'm glad that you're enjoying my fic and more is on the way.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2008 - 09:26 pm Title: Emotions and break ups

This is not looking too good! Hate thinking what Riley did to the woman! Hope the fic ends well! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well things are taking a turn for the worse, but it's me so i can't keep things in a bad place for too long, thankyou for the review. More is on the way :)

Reviewer: TT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 06:32 pm Title: Emotions and break ups

Ok, I was reading back in this story. Now, that I know that Spike and Buffy dated in this story. Maybe, when Dawn asked who slept with who in this car and Buffy answered only Riley. I was thinking maybe that was a lie. And that is why Spike got in such in a bad mood after that. It would be a perfect reason to have him snapped at her when he really doesn't snap at her. My heart breaks for him even more if that is the case. Most people who dated has had sex together. Which is why Spike seeing Buffy naked wasn't really a big deal because Spike already seen Buffy naked cause they dated. I am also surprise that Spike never told Dawn before. They seem to have a really close brother and sister relationship. I am also guessing that Riley doesn't know about Spike and Buffy have dated before. I know I wouldn't want my husband to be best friends with his ex. No way. That would be too much for me. And just how does Buffy managed to still be friends with her ex's (Spike and Angel). Is she just that special. LOL I really feel bad for Spike and I hope Dawn supports him.

Author's Response: You're good. I really didn't expect anyone to make that link between the dating and the snapping. Riley doesn't know that Buffy and Spike dated. Because Buffy is afraid of her feelings she can still remain friends with her Ex's and Dawn will be there to support Spike all the way. Thankyou for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: TT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 06:12 pm Title: Emotions and break ups

Poor Spike. My Spikey got his heart broken by Buffy. I can't believe Buffy broke up with a sweet guy like William. That was just stupid of her to break up with Spike but to break up with him because she doesn't want people to know about them and/or is afraid is just really stupid. I know that if I am in love with someone and they broke up with me. I wouldn't be able to still be their friend after that. As much as it would hurt not to see them anymore it would hurt a lot more to see them still but now have them. Then watching them move on to somebody else. Will be like torture for yourself. So, I don't see how Spike stayed friends with her. I mean seeing her marry another guy. How hard would that have been for him. I want to cry for Spike right now. I hope that Dawn really doesn't push Spike too hard to get with Buffy now. I hope she goes in protective mode over Spike. LOL Don't get me wrong, I still will my Spuffy. I just don't want Spike to take Buffy back easily after what she done to him.

Author's Response: Buffy is like that, in this story at least. I'l probably go into a Spike/Dawn conversation in the next chapter to clear a few things up, and Spike's not really interested in Buffy that way....yet. But you can definitely expect some Dawn and Buffy fighting.Thankyou for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Kara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 04:39 pm Title: Emotions and break ups

First of all, that is a stupid reason to break up with someone, i was thinking one of them cheated or something, and second of all, if that beginning has anything to do with riley, he really is psychotic and buffy seriously needs to get rid of him, sooner rather than later. i don't have much respect for her in this, dumping a sweet guy like william for a stupid reason, and marrying someone like riley. i hope she comes to her senses soon.

Author's Response: Ok Riley's odd we all know that so it will delv into how crazy he is in a few more chaps, and Buffy coming to her senses wll take a while, because lets face it..it's Buffy. Thankyou for reading and for leaving a review, more soon.

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 11:56 am Title: Emotions and break ups

I guess this Buffy and the Buffy from the show have something in common. Both weak and does stupid things when it comes to their feelings. It seems to me that Buffy didn't love Spike enough if she just breaks up with him because she is afraid of telling people that they are a couple. Buffy can be such a bitch sometimes and I really want to slap her right now. Breaking Spike's heart like that. Then she goes off and marries Riley. Why isn't she so afraid of her feelings there. Then Spike remains friends with her after that. I wouldn't. I really hope that Spike isn't the one trying to crawl back to her and earn her affections. I really want to see Buffy being the one on trying to win back his heart. She needs to after just breaking his heart like that. Spike deserves more than that. :(
I also would love to see Dawn say something to Buffy maybe later about her breaking her brother's heart. I would love that.

Author's Response: I'm not a fan of Spike always being the one who must try for their relationship so i most likely will make Buffy do the working. Also Dawn will probably confront Buffy on the break up Thankyou for the review and for reading.

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