I liked the story, I just didnt like that you made Riley such a bad guy. Because, now of course Buffy will break up with him, it would be more intriguing or more evolving if Buffy started to realise her feeling for Spike in a natural way... not breaking up with a horrible guy and then just be spike because he will be her savior, or see him in a different light because he saved her life... it would be more romantic on her part see him in a different light by his daily actions and affection.

But still.. well written adn I will keep reading!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story so far, and I'm also glad that you were upfront about what you didn't like. I've never been into the whole boy saves girl and girl falls into boys arms so you'll probably see a few obstacles before Buffy starts to realise her feelings, thankyou for the review and more is on the way.