Poor Spike. My Spikey got his heart broken by Buffy. I can't believe Buffy broke up with a sweet guy like William. That was just stupid of her to break up with Spike but to break up with him because she doesn't want people to know about them and/or is afraid is just really stupid. I know that if I am in love with someone and they broke up with me. I wouldn't be able to still be their friend after that. As much as it would hurt not to see them anymore it would hurt a lot more to see them still but now have them. Then watching them move on to somebody else. Will be like torture for yourself. So, I don't see how Spike stayed friends with her. I mean seeing her marry another guy. How hard would that have been for him. I want to cry for Spike right now. I hope that Dawn really doesn't push Spike too hard to get with Buffy now. I hope she goes in protective mode over Spike. LOL Don't get me wrong, I still will my Spuffy. I just don't want Spike to take Buffy back easily after what she done to him.

Author's Response: Buffy is like that, in this story at least. I'l probably go into a Spike/Dawn conversation in the next chapter to clear a few things up, and Spike's not really interested in Buffy that way....yet. But you can definitely expect some Dawn and Buffy fighting.Thankyou for reading and reviewing.

I guess this Buffy and the Buffy from the show have something in common. Both weak and does stupid things when it comes to their feelings. It seems to me that Buffy didn't love Spike enough if she just breaks up with him because she is afraid of telling people that they are a couple. Buffy can be such a bitch sometimes and I really want to slap her right now. Breaking Spike's heart like that. Then she goes off and marries Riley. Why isn't she so afraid of her feelings there. Then Spike remains friends with her after that. I wouldn't. I really hope that Spike isn't the one trying to crawl back to her and earn her affections. I really want to see Buffy being the one on trying to win back his heart. She needs to after just breaking his heart like that. Spike deserves more than that. :(
I also would love to see Dawn say something to Buffy maybe later about her breaking her brother's heart. I would love that.

Author's Response: I'm not a fan of Spike always being the one who must try for their relationship so i most likely will make Buffy do the working. Also Dawn will probably confront Buffy on the break up Thankyou for the review and for reading.

Looks like Buffy and Spike been hiding a secret. Wonder why they aren't together?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yep, for quite a while as you'll soon see, and you'll also find out why they aren't together soon-ish. More is on the way, thankyou for the review.

Very surprising! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well Suprising was what I was going for lol. More is on the way. Thankyou for the review.

I love Darla, which makes me love the story more! Good update hun, obviously Riley is having some problems, what's his deal? Everyone snaps at everyone at one point in time. Update soon *hugs*

Author's Response: Well, Riley's real attitude will be revealed in the next few chapters. I love Darla as well :) Thankyou for the review. *hugs*

I like it :D Dawn is busy isn't she, Riley doesn't seem like a bad person......yet so I'm interested to see where it goes. Update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, Riley's attitude and personality will be revealed in the next few chapters. Thankyou for the review.

Unless, Riley is a bad person and husband. Dawn really shouldn't be trying to break them apart and everything. I am just curious on how Buffy and Riley marriage is going to end so that Spike and Buffy can get together. I don't like people leaving a marriage if their spouse is a good person. But since this is a Spuffy and we are Spuffy fans. I don't want to see Riley and Buffy together. Buffy too, needs to realize that she is love with Spike. I mean Buffy doesn't even seem like she is in love with her husband or Spike.

So, I like is so far but just curious on Spike and Buffy are going to get together.

Author's Response: Well we will see more of Riley's personality soon and things will become clear. Buffy and Riley will be together for a while yet but you shoud startto sethe type of person Riley is in the next chapter, Thankyou for the review.

I want to read more!!! I always love stories where Buffy and Spike start off as best friends.

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you like it. I love those types of stories too. Thankyou for the review!

I like it so far. But Buffy is married to Riley. Yuck, Why is Buffy always got to be the one with someone else. Why can't Spike get to be with someone else for a change. Probably because Buffy is sometimes slow and doesn't realize that Spike is the one she wants. Maybe, if someone was interested in Spike Buffy might be jealous. LOL Might get our couple together.

I am glad that you made Spike and Dawn brother and sister. Their relationship on the show is one of my favorite relationships. I was disappointed that we didn't get better closure on their relationship in season 7. I just think they really would be the best of friends.

Author's Response: Thankyou for the lovely review. Yes Riley isn't my favourite person in this world but I didn't want to put her with Angel so he was it. I also thought that Dawn as Spike's sister would be better in this fic. I agree with you the relationship between Spike and Dawn was good. :D

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much, I'm not sure when I'll next update, right now i'm trying to stock up on chapters :)