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Date: 06/04/2013 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Suddenly

Several things make me wonder about you. You know the background to the nth degree. Your writing is not that of an amateur. You stand behind others to hide your identity. Your writing is so like someone on the "Buffy" or "Dr. Who" staff. Going out on a limb, might you be someone whose name we would recognize in our normal lives?

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Date: 11/22/2009 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The Sickness Part 2

Weird (or scary if you want), the blackness that is in Alec. He was so ill but after his darkness killed the man he became better. Makes me wonder if he'll need to kill from now on to survive.
And the darkness seems to be on the hunt itself. To return to Alec later or not?
Well we'll see I think.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The Sickness Part 1

So Willow could see the ghosts... because she was dead herself? Anyway, it was helpful.
Alec (or better what happens to him) scares me. Doesn't look good. For Willow too if the ghost was right.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 14- Unfriendly Skies Part 2

I thought too traveling by airplane was safe. Not so much it seems.
Doesn't sound good at the moment.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Unfriendly Skies Part 1

Alec is changing. Not sure if the other noticed yet.
Uh-huh... and something is wrong with Xander too.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 14- Unfriendly Skies Part 2

Whew! You do like your suspensful action/drama, don't you? I love it! Of course you're the EvilCliffhangerQueen too....

I don't like the way Alec is going, I'm a bit puzzled by the Tara thing, a bit worried by Buffy's apparent dithering over Angel and the problem with Xander's new arm, but anxiously awaiting the next action-packed instalment.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2009 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Departure Part 2

Alec fears the flight a lot; hope it will go well.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2009 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Departure Part 1

So now Buffy talks about weddings? Not long ago before she was a bit too much fascinated by Angel.
Weird to what happens to Alec now. Eating rats? And getting very thin.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter 12 - A Pound of Flesh

Willow sounds to be in trouble in the long run (Tara).
DeGanon paid a high price for his treachery. Well I hope it makes no difference to the spell that the arm wasn't from a dead person.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 11 - Sacrifice Part 2

Didn't think Xander would make it; the better for Anya. Dawn? Unexpected.
And still not won....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter 11 - Sacrifice Part 1

Not sure Alec made the right decision to accept what made him strong again. Too many conditions, he'll have to pay for it. And Xander... looks bad.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Flesh and Stone Part 2

Giles knew well that Spike couldn't touch a holy book but he let him get it anyway. Nice... not.
*wonders who controlled the Golem*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Flesh and Stone Part 1

Wow they killed a lot of shops trying to stop the Golem.

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Date: 04/04/2009 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Ashmedai Part 2

Ashmedai was very helpful, not only with the child. But the fight that will come won't be easy. Maybe he can help (to catch the stone golem too).

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2009 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Ashmedai Part 1

So the Rabbi wasn't out for something good.
And again a flash of Buffy (and Angel) that I didn't like. Make me really wonder where this story will lead too. They have hard times to come, a big evil to fight.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2009 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Wounds and Words Part 2

Giles can even be more scary than Spike sometimes ;)
Evil cliffhanger - or something is missing (can't check, LJ isn't updated):
Both men looked up to second floor balcony,

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2009 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Wounds and Words Part 1

When Alec hasn't healed yet he's indeed very very bad.
Good to see that Spike still trusts Buffy.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Assault Part 2

I wonder what is with Alec now or will become of him. we band of buggered *nods* Indeed.
But Alec did walk before - and now he can't?
And Spike were right about the gypsy. More secrets....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Assault Part 1

Why is Willow so fascinated with the dead (men)? Did something stuck from being dead?
I hope at last Buffy won't be too please if she knew what Spike was thinking @ Faith - Wonder what she’s like in bed.
Ah it was Kate. Sorry to see her dead now.

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Date: 01/28/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6 - To Serve & Protect Part 2

Buffy isn't in a good state either but Alec has it worse. So I doubt a bit that Buffy is fit enough to get Alec (without magic). But there was the woman in the first part of the chapter....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2009 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 6 - To Serve & Protect

Still in trouble... at last Alec. Poor one. And Angel got to play the hero, saving Buffy.

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Date: 01/16/2009 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Nightmares and Dreamscapes Part 2

I've got suspicious about Seth too (the thankful look of the monster); glad Alex figured it out. Even if they are in trouble again now. Big trouble.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2009 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Nightmares and Dreamscapes Part 1

A real nightmare where they are now.

Reviewer: dawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2009 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Nightmares and Dreamscapes Part 2

OMG!!! THT WS LYK SOOOO GOOD. I JST LOVE URE FIC PLYYYYYYZZZZ WRITE SOME MORE.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2008 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Wedding Present Part 2

Good to see the Spike got rid of the chip - and that Alec doesn't like Angel's interest in Buffy either.
Hopefully Alec is not right with his thoughts (not coming back)

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