Reviews For The Last Fight
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Reviewer: AJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 11:13 pm Title: Epilogue

This was an okay story. You need to work on your spelling though. It's Joss Whedon, not Josh like you put in the very first chapter.
I think that the story moved too fast. I think you could have slowed it down in most parts and given more detail. The only time you seemed to use lots of detail was the sex scene.
Just my thoughts although you really should get a beta reader just to edit the spelling and grammatical errors.

Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:48 am Title: Epilogue

Sweet ending. This fic is goin' on my Favorites List.

Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter 10

Cool. No, really cool. No, FREAKIN' AWSOME!!!!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2004 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 9

great job

Reviewer: tayhaangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2004 - 03:06 am Title: Chapter 8

great story. would love a prologue

Reviewer: Lady Brandywyne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2004 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter 8

I figured I would review and give you three for sure. I really liked this story. It was short, sweet and to the point. But I would have really liked Spike to have had to explain Illyria to Buffy. That could have been amusing. Another once was a God... At least a good one.... Sort of.

Reviewer: Jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2004 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter 8

This was good, i think it would have been great if it was longer but i liked it anyway.

Reviewer: SpuffyLover Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2004 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 8

OH THANK GOD IT'S NOT OVER YET!!! Yiu go ahead and finish your school work just hurry PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2004 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

i cant wait for your next update keep up the good work

Reviewer: SpuffyLover Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2004 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh my god that gave me goose bumps!!! I think I'm gonna cry!! Please update!! I love this story!!!

Reviewer: SpuffyLover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2004 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1&2

Lovin the story!! Can't wait till the next chapter!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: THANK U SO MUCH!!! ur my 2nd review. REVIEWER ROCK BUTT!!! but yes i am hoping to update tonight, collage is just getting in the way. lol.

Author's Response: ok wow I'm so tired I can't even speel college right! lol yet again. KEEP REVIEWING!!!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2004 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 5&6

definitely loving this story so far keep up the good work

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