Date: 07/06/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Memories
Punctuation and proper spelling are your friends. It stops you looking like an illiterate moron. These concepts are so basic, my jaw dropped after reading the first few paragraphs. Nice idea for a story but I won't be reading on. If you can't be bothered to type things out properly, I can't be bothered to read it.
Date: 07/06/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Memories
Punctuation and proper spelling are your friends. It stops you looking like an illiterate moron. These concepts are so basic, my jaw dropped after reading the first few paragraphs. Nice idea for a story but I won't be reading on. If you can't be bothered to type things out properly, I can't be bothered to read it.
Date: 11/11/2004 - 03:53 am Title: Memories
I think that's an awesome start to wht could be a very interesting story. I say, "KEEP GOING!"
Date: 11/09/2004 - 09:15 pm Title: Memories
Mmmh - finished or not finished? The End means finished, but the story says: not finished. I would say it's not fnished, or? Cordykitten
Date: 11/09/2004 - 01:11 am Title: Memories
Hey you have the same title as me. I have a story called Turn Back Time on here too.
Date: 11/08/2004 - 10:53 pm Title: Memories
what if...always intersting quewstion