great story!! Is it the first one you wrote? Btw, did you send this story to be beta'd?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story and no it's not the first one I ever wrote, it is the first Fantasy one I ever wrote though. I also don't have a beta because I didn't wanna worry about that. I never thought I really needed one and I'm still not even really sure what one really is. I'm guessing it's someone that checks over the stories before you put them in the website. Anyway, thanks for reading=)