I'm looking forward to more!
Spike was very eager to get out of the hospital *g*.
But now they have some time off, that's nice for a change, going back home now.

Getting even better!
Tho' I believe I caught a slip-up on your part--- didn't you write in that Giles moved away from Sunnydale due to the memories of Jenny sr., to LA? Yet then here you have Buffy asking Spike if he would "...like to come with me? Relax, visit your dad and my mom, meet Jenny.” .....is this a slip or did I misread something?
Also, hey, felt that in general, even on massive quantities of caffeine, most docs don't use "wanna" with patients (tho' I've seen a few, both as a nurse and as a patient....I even had one doc, who was actually really very, very cool, helpful, considerate mostly, friendly, not filled to the brim with the instilled "Doctor-God complex" (it's worse w/surgeons, tho') and literally cussed profanely every other word! For some reason, I thought it was cool, even if unprofessional. He was a resident, but still a real doctor, tho' in a teaching clinic. For some reason, I thought it made him less pretentious, and more REAL. Maybe more should say "Wanna"???
Looking fwd to updates.
~~K.~~


Author's Response: Thanks so much...it's been so long since I wrote on this story, I had to reread my entire story. (Sad But True.) Fixing that right away. With the doc...I was drawing inspiration from my doctor, who happens to be a hippy. He's just like this. Maybe that was a bad idea : ).