This story don't make much sense at all....first we have slutty buffy shacking up with anything that has a heartbeat but won't do it with Spike because her virtue is suddenly all fluttery or something.

Then I have some serious issue with the pairing of them at all. To me I can't understand how Spike could be "in love" with her 10 years after he was shot down so brutaly. I mean first of all Buffy don't seem to have any redeming qualities at all, she marries for wealth and status, she has shacked up with most of the college campus during her college years and now she is on some revenge trip. I mean she might be hot and I can see that Spike might want to shag her but to be in love with her after all this time is just pathetic. Don't know if it says more about the looser Spike really is or how not very belivable I find this particular part of the plot.

To be honest I think you should have just made Spike interested in having sex with her to scratch an itch and maybe have him develop feelings for her later. Now it's just not very belivable to me. To carry a torch for some one that pretty much kicked you in the balls while in the process of making love. I can't see that type of thing as being very good for the loving a person feels for another.

Hey, I like this story, so please keep updating. It'll take a while to get reviews, but it's worth it in the end. Keep up the good work!!