Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: Scared
Aww! What an awesome chapter! I especially liked the part with the Bush/Washington thing! I'm not even American, and I know who's president, lol! Please update as soon as you get a chance, because I can hardly wait for more!
Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Scared
incredible update
Date: 03/06/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Moms and Babies
The grandma in spe took it very well..
Date: 03/06/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Moms and Babies
that's just neat!
Date: 03/06/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Moms and Babies
more please!
Date: 03/05/2005 - 10:41 pm Title: Moms and Babies
Aww! This is such a sweet fic! I can't wait for more, so please update soon!
Date: 03/05/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Moms and Babies
great update
Date: 03/02/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Named and Ashamed
I wonder how the meeting with her (Buffy's) mum will went ...
Date: 03/02/2005 - 03:30 am Title: Named and Ashamed
what a nice guy spike is!
Date: 03/02/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Named and Ashamed
great update
Date: 03/01/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Named and Ashamed
Wow! Cordy's sucha beeyatch, eh? I can't believe that she'd just go tell the whole school! Anyways, loving the Spuffy lovey-dovey-ness, so keep it up! Great fic, I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Date: 02/27/2005 - 01:02 pm Title: Child of an Angel
Wow - so she IS pregnant (*and*I'm*glad*that*it*isn't*Angels)
Date: 02/27/2005 - 12:15 pm Title: Child of an Angel
interesting. well at least angel isn't a total ass. love spuffy baby fics so you can at least know im reading it even if i sometimes forget to review.
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:33 am Title: Child of an Angel
great update
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:33 am Title: Child of an Angel
Wow! Spike's sooo sweet! Buffy is "a great person with a heart of gold" - how adorably sweet of him! Anyways, enough of that - I really like this fic, so please update soon!! P.S. I liked the bit about Angel being infertile ; )
Date: 02/27/2005 - 02:10 am Title: Child of an Angel
awww more please i love it!
Date: 02/27/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Child of an Angel
they are colliding in a definate major way!
Date: 02/24/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Truths
I hope she isn't pregnant with Angel's child.
Date: 02/24/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: Meeting
First i would say that i like this story but i think there are some things that would make it better. For starters i think it needs more detail, and it all seems very rushed. As a writer myself i know that detail is one of the most important things in a story and i just feel like nothing is described or explained a great deal here and i think the fic would be a lot more enjoyable if there was more of both. Also, i would say on the subject of it being rushed, everything just happens too quickly. Buffy only just meets spike and suddenly she's kissing him and that just doesn't work. You need to build up to it. Same with a lot of other things, it all just happens to fast. However you are a good writer and i do think this is a good idea and could be a great story i just think that in places it needs some work. Please don't feel like i am trying to discourage you in any way because i know that sometimes a review can seem that way, i just want to help you make your story the best it can be and i think this could be great. If you wanna talk about anything i said or ever want any help you can email me at joannewelsh76@hotmail.com
Date: 02/24/2005 - 04:43 am Title: Truths
lol on the chapter!
Date: 02/24/2005 - 01:43 am Title: Truths
more please i love it!
Date: 02/23/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: Truths
Wow! Gripping fic! After only four chapter I'm hooked! Please update soon!
Date: 02/23/2005 - 09:37 pm Title: Truths
i guessing that she might be pregnant right ?
Date: 02/23/2005 - 07:24 pm Title: Surprise
Well - that Hank is an idiot - He head the tapes and didn't believe Buffy.
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