great chapter!

I liked the first couple chapters but chapter 3 was so unrealistic into the realm of "yeah right". A lot of stuff doesnt quite work, but these are the 6 that bugged me most. 1. First of all, I doubt anyone would just lie around while someone tried breaking into their girlfriend's bedroom and didnt try to intervene until he shoved her to the floor and ripped her clothes off. 2. Also, if Spike had've been in the hospital unconscious for two days he would have had an IV and the nurse would NOT have let him run around after just regaining consciousness. She would have called in a doctor. He also probably would have been weak and dizzy after getting a head injury that put him down that long. 3. They wouldnt have allowed Buffy or Spike to go home the very same after regaining consciousness after two days. 4. I *think* it is illegal to record anyone without their written or verbal permission. I'm not too sure about this one though. 5. The tape would not have been the only evidence against Angel. After a rape doctors do a thorough exam, collecting samples of skin, semen, etc. 6. The hospital would have called in family of Spike and Buffy's. Also, who called an ambulance? Wouldnt some neighbor have mentioned to Buffy's family they had seen the ambulance and expressed concern or curiosity to Hank and Katherine?

Author's Response: Yeah, it's a bit farfetched now that I read it again. It's my first fic so it's bound to have some flaws. You'll find out who called the ambulance in the next few chapters because Buffy and Spike don't really know at the moment. Sorry about all of the errors. It won't happen again.

Looking forward how it will work out… I don’t like Angel in that fic. Hopefully one day he’ll meet this match. So far – I’m glad Buffy is with Spike now.

please, put collide by howie day in this fic...it's just too perfect! The dawn is breaking A light shining through You're barely waking And I'm tangled up in you Yeah I'm open, you're closed Where I follow, you'll go I worry I won't see your face Light up again Even the best fall down sometimes Even the wrong words seem to rhyme Out of the doubt that fills my mind I somehow find You and I collide I'm quiet you know You make a frist impression I've found I'm scared to know I'm always on your mind Even the best fall down sometimes Even the stars refuse to shine Out of the back you fall in time I somehow find You and I collide Even the best fall down sometimes Even the wrong words seem to ryhme Out of the doubt that fills your mind You finally find You and I collide You finally find You and I collide You finally find You and I collide

loved it!! great start! please post soon