still a great story, one tip though: put the actions of the characters (ie, 'spike shook his head') with the characters' dialogue ('No, if I told her...'). That way there's less confusion about who's talking :)

i hope buffy heard what spike said. that was so sweet. i'm glad that spike was honest with hank about his feelings for buffy. great update can't wait for more.

LOL about the nickname thing at the end! Spike's description was just so sweet, and I'm glad he was honest to Hank about loving Buffy. It'd be kind of cool if Buffy heard the whole conversation...